'To be an electrical engineer' - What are your current career objectives

What are your current career objectives and how do you believe studying at The Cooper Union will assist you in achieving them?

Currently, I intended to be an electrical engineer. This is a job that not only requires specialized education and commitment, but also both oral and written expression ability, leadership and creativity. I believe that the rigorous academic requirement and the great faculties in The Cooper Union will help me acquire professional knowledge. Also, the hands-on group assignments will allow me to have experience in cooperation and leadership. The Career Center of The Cooper Union and the C.V. Starr Research Foundation supply students with internship opportunities. Additionally, I may get inspiration from the easy access to the city.

Thank you for your help!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :)
And wish you a happy Thanksgiving! (We don't have Thanksgiving Day in our country :( and so, no turkey meals)

suhsiwrap did a fine job in correcting the grammar of your passage so i won't comment on the grammar. Good jon though overall, I think that mentioning The Cooper Union's "great facilities". Just correct the grammar and perhaps comment on the size of the instituition adn how that will play a role in your learning achievements. :)

Thank you soooooo much, ablumfield! I'm not a native speaker, so I made a lot of grammar mistakes.:( I'm improving my English now! Thank you again!

And many thanks for sushiwrap! I did not expect to get replies so soon!

any more of the universities programs you could include would help you out. The last sentence detracts from essay IMO

Well, this is a small school and I cannot find out more programs. But thank you any way!! =] Have a nice day!