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How to start an introduction paragraph about someone that influenced me (my son)?



jenniexr0cks 1 / -  
Sep 15, 2010   #1
I am talking about my new born son devin i need help starting my intro paragraph

xerinnn 1 / 4  
Sep 15, 2010   #2
I'm assuming you're writing the ApplyTexas Essay A? Well obviously, answer the prompt. That's the most important thing about the first paragraph: answer the question. Then tell about the person. About 1/4 of your essay should be about the influential person, and the remainder of the essay should be about you, your growth, and your learning experiences thanks to this person.
EF_Kevin 8 / 13052  
Sep 18, 2010   #3
Well, you need to start by having an idea. If you have no idea at all, you can't write an essay. Did your son cause you to reflect on things in a new way and change your daily behavior?

Tell me about your recent discovery!
concord123 1 / 3  
Sep 18, 2010   #4
Hello there,

you can start like this:

During the course of our life, we all have met someone that impact our lives positively or negatively. My new born son Devin changed my overlook of life positively .

You continue by explaining how he changed or influenced you by selection 3 points and develop them then conclude. In the end you have a 5 paragraph essay.

Good Luck.


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