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Surfing through the internet I found about California Lutheran University, I found the activities that they do, the opportunity that they give to their students.
After reading the reviews and articles about the college I thought this University might be the one that I have been searching for. From the students on the campus, I learned that the campus is unbelievably beautiful and offers a wonderful learning environment. The professors are caring and willing to spend the extra time to help their students succeed the student life. I also learned that the class sizes are very small, allowing for more direct teacher-to-student interaction.
As an international student, I do have to live inside the school campus and learning that the school's dorms are good as new and have very good facilities like laundry rooms, TV lounges, games room, and many others to make the students feel like home.
Last but not the least Cal Lutheran University has given an opportunity to people that have talent and couldn't explore by not just helping them academically but also financially making their dream become a reality and I wish it also makes my dream into a reality.
I didn't apply in the world renounced colleges as I don't want to become a small fish in a big pond where no one knows me, I want to become a big fish in a small pond where everyone knows me by my name so, Cal Lutheran is the perfect university for me.
a big fish in a small pond
Surfing through the internet I found about California Lutheran University, I found the activities that they do, the opportunity that they give to their students.
After reading the reviews and articles about the college I thought this University might be the one that I have been searching for. From the students on the campus, I learned that the campus is unbelievably beautiful and offers a wonderful learning environment. The professors are caring and willing to spend the extra time to help their students succeed the student life. I also learned that the class sizes are very small, allowing for more direct teacher-to-student interaction.
As an international student, I do have to live inside the school campus and learning that the school's dorms are good as new and have very good facilities like laundry rooms, TV lounges, games room, and many others to make the students feel like home.
Last but not the least Cal Lutheran University has given an opportunity to people that have talent and couldn't explore by not just helping them academically but also financially making their dream become a reality and I wish it also makes my dream into a reality.
I didn't apply in the world renounced colleges as I don't want to become a small fish in a big pond where no one knows me, I want to become a big fish in a small pond where everyone knows me by my name so, Cal Lutheran is the perfect university for me.
