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UNCW Essay - Carolina's Paradise



lowcal 12 / 27  
Dec 24, 2009   #1
Every essay is carefully reviewed by the admission committee for content, clarity, mechanics and effort. Essays may be an important factor in distinguishing admissible candidates within the applicant pool. Please answer the following question thoughtfully in 300-500 words. Answer in the space below, or submit a separate sheet with your full name and date of birth.

Reflecting on your personal and educational goals, please write about how you believe UNC Wilmington will allow you to grow as a student and as a person

Once a week, on Monday night at 8:00 p.m., I make sure that divest my time away from the chaotic world to spend the next hour watching the popular drama One Tree Hill. While I persist to remain as an aficionado to the storyline, simultaneously, I continue to become mesmerized by the immense scenic beauty of either Cape Fear Coast or Airlie Gardens residing in the city of Wilmington. Taken aback by the Wilmington's atmospheric attractiveness, I was curious of how the University of Wilmington added to the décor. I discovered that not only does UNCW have an eye-catching campus but also it provides quality education and opportunity to fit my needs.

I am brought up in a home where I am taught to aid and care for others in need. Through this ideal, I am passionate in helping others who suffer physically, mentally, and even emotionally. Thus, I plan to gear my career choice towards becoming a doctor. Looking over Wilmington's top notch pre-health professions science courses, I feel like I will benefit greatly from its curriculums. Also, with the collaborative research groups and hands-on experience gained from the Chemistry and Biochemistry program in the College of Arts and Sciences at Wilmington, I fill I will enrich my knowledge needed not only for medical school but also for my future profession in the medical world.

While I do strive for high academic achievement, I also would like to attend an institution constituting of a diverse culture of people. For seven years, I had lived overseas in the heartland of Saudi Arabia. As I had attended an American International School, I met with students from around the world, ranging from places like Taiwan or even the state of Texas. Every year, I was always greeted to fresh new faces. Having lived in such a diverse environment, I became grown to respect and to appreciate the element of diversity among individuals. Seeing how Wilmington vastly promotes its high admiration towards have a diverse student body, I could not resist in attending a school where I can continue learning the beauty of different cultures that exist in the world today.

By attending Wilmington, I believe it will lay for me an avenue towards self growth. Not only will I increase my intellect from the prestigious academia provide by the institution but also will become more knowledge and mature through accepting others for who they are and where they come from. I look forward to constructing the tower towards my future and to foster lifelong friendships. I hope to soon to become a part Wilmington by attending classes and socializing with its population rather than simply spending another day watching it through the television set.

EF_Kevin 8 / 13052  
Dec 26, 2009   #2
Less is more with unnecessary details:
Once a week, o On Monday nights at 8:00 p.m., I make ...

Taken aback by the Wilmington's atmospheric attractiveness, I was curious about how the University of Wilmington added ...

I am being brought up in a home where I am taught to aid and care for others in need. Through this ideal, I am passionate in helping others who suffer physically, mentally, and even emotionally. Thus, I plan to base my career choice on my inclination to help; I will do so by becoming a doctor physician.

By attending Wilmington, I believe I will lay for me an progress along an avenue towards self growth.


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