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What was your biggest challenge adjusting to college like as a freshman?



Jd87rh 11 / 49  
Apr 14, 2011   #1
QUESTION: What was your biggest challenge adjusting to college like as a freshman? How do you feel you can help others cope with this challenge?

As a freshman at Syracuse University, by biggest challenge has been adjusting to the work load, College us about learning., growing as an individual, making friend's, etc. My counselor always told me in college I had to dedicate a minimum of 3 hours of studying for every class a week. I had to be on top of my deadlines, schedule, testing because no one would be watching over me every step of the way like in high school, where I always had teachers reminding me of assignments and exams.

I've learn this year, how to manage my time wisely, making time for both fun and work. I learned to motivate myself to do everything that had to be done. I think I could share my knowledge with other freshman, hopefully so they don't make the same mistakes I made my first semester at Syracuse.

mrxkms 3 / 5  
Apr 15, 2011   #2
I hope You appreciate my corrections.
EF_Kevin 8 / 13053  
Apr 16, 2011   #3
Well, I certainly do! We need lots of help to make sure everyone improves their skill!
:-)

As a freshman at Syracuse University, my biggest challenge has been adjusting to the work load. College is about learning, growing as an individual, making friend's, etc. ----I made a small change here. You should not put a period next to a comma...and also, I had to end the first sentence.

Use "each" here:
My counselor always told me in college I had to dedicate a minimum of 3 hours of studying for every class each week.

I've learn this year, how to manage my time wisely, making time for both fun and work.-----This is a very good sentence. :-)

Nice job!


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