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|Sticky: [WRITING TASK 1] The average on cell phone, national fixed line amd international fixed line service
4 - @Hannah Robjn Thanks for your feedback. Maybe i typed too fast so i made a lot unexpected mistakes. I...
Writing Feedbackelliemiller - Oct 13, 2020 / elliemiller - Oct 14, 2020
|The chart illustrates distances traveled per person per week (in kilometers) in terms of 5 types of
2 - As there are several types of bar graphs in use during this test, you need to be highly specific...
Writing Feedbackhichahee - 12 hrs ago / Holt - 23 mins ago
|The diagram belows show the water cycle, which is the continuous movement of water on
2 - You have to familiarize yourself with the various images provided for the task 1 essay. An ordinary picture will...
Writing Feedbackdatngbn1226 - 19 hrs ago / Holt - 27 mins ago
|The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling e train between 1970 and 2030
2 - The summary overview is not only lacking in information, it is also rude and shows a lack of proper...
Writing Feedbackptthao0801 - 20 hrs ago / Holt - 31 mins ago
|Data on the use of rail transport in 2007
Writing FeedbackLeTanMinhQ - May 16, 2023 / ptthao0801 - 20 hrs ago
|Task 1: The table and chart below show the time spent at leisure and household activities on Britian
3 - @Dai Ngoc You should have 4 paragraphs for task 1. You also need to check your grammar and pay...
Writing FeedbackDai Ngoc - 1 day ago / ptthao0801 - 20 hrs ago
|Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career
2 - There is no wonderment present in the original prompt. The original sources are the opinions of people. 2...
Writing FeedbackAndrewCapaldi - 1 day ago / Holt - 21 hrs ago
|Some people think that when criminals are punished, they will not commit crimes
3 - @ElenaDiem You essay sadly is very difficult to read due to wrong positions of punctuation and there are many...
Writing FeedbackElenaDiem - 2 days ago / chupchip - 1 day ago
|Urban areas contain a handful of noticeable problems whose main victims are juveniles
3 - @titi88 Some expressions like "It is crystal clear that", "hottest affair" are quite informal and shouldn't be used in...
Writing Feedbacktiti88 - 2 days ago / chupchip - 1 day ago
|Essay about an industrial area in the town of Norbiton with maps
2 - The summary overview is a bit incomplete. You must identify the image as the present "layout" of the industrial...
Writing Feedbackaether - 2 days ago / Holt - 1 day ago
|IELTS TASK 2 ON equality for women in work
2 - The essay is composed of only 202 words. It is non-word compliant as the expected minimum count is 250...
Writing Feedbackjudy65996 - May 29, 2023 / Holt - 2 days ago
|IELTS TASK 2 ON LOCAL LANGUAGE LEARNING VS ENGLISH
2 - There are 2 questions being asked in the original presentation. However, you only responded to one of the two....
Writing Feedbackanialee - May 29, 2023 / Holt - 2 days ago
|The graph illustrates the renovation of a city hospital road between 2007 and 2010
3 - Thank you for your feedback! I've upgraded the writing based on your feedback and after reading it again. Please...
Writing Feedbackduz - May 24, 2023 / duz - 2 days ago
|People encounter abroad three specific problems: finances, healthcare and education for their kids
Writing Feedbackgaudong1122 - May 23, 2023 / gaudong1122 - May 29, 2023
|Pros and cons of getting news from the Internet rather than read newspapers or watching TV.
Writing FeedbackZacharyDang13 - May 28, 2023 / anialee - May 29, 2023
|Whether or not school children should be taught more about local or world history
3 - I could be wrong here but i think the 2nd and 3rd body paragraph aren't supposed to be connected...
Writing FeedbackTrangnguyenn - May 28, 2023 / anialee - May 29, 2023
|The two line graphs below show New Zealand import figures from Australia and Japan in the years 1994
2 - Since this is a 2 image graph, you should have maximized your presentation to 200 words. That way you...
Writing FeedbackMary Wynne - May 29, 2023 / Holt - May 29, 2023
|Writing Task 2 - Essay about should scientific research be conducted by private companies or the gov
Writing Feedbackcamijenny - May 25, 2023 / camijenny - May 29, 2023
|The impact of population growth on economic development
2 - This is a cause and solution essay. So you have indicated several causes of the problems related to the...
Writing Feedbackan_2812 - May 28, 2023 / Holt - May 29, 2023
|In the graph figures for the consumption per capita of Beef, Pork, Broilers, and Turkey in the US
2 - One key element is missing from this presentation. These forecasts all end in December of 2012. These do not...
Writing Feedbackptthao0801 - May 28, 2023 / Holt - May 29, 2023
|IELTS WRITING TASK 1- Line Graph- shop closures and openings
3 - @rubinguyen For your opening, The number -> the numbers (the number of openings AND the number of closures) ...
Writing Feedbackrubinguyen - May 27, 2023 / ptthao0801 - May 28, 2023
|The diagram below shows the recycling process of aluminium cans. Summarise the information by select
4 - @hieunguyen There is an Image button ([+] image) on the toolbar. Click on it, then click Upload....
Writing Feedbackhieunguyen - May 24, 2023 / ptthao0801 - May 28, 2023
|Building specialised facilities to train top athletes or providing sports ones for everyone
2 - This is totally irrelevant to the discussion. There is no mention of this whatsoever in the original presentation....
Writing Feedbackthg080206 - May 27, 2023 / Holt - May 28, 2023
|The percentages of young unemployed people by age in London and in the rest of England, 1993 to 2012
Writing Feedbackptthao0801 - May 26, 2023 / Holt - May 27, 2023
|The graph shows data about the annual earnings of three bakeries in Calgary, 2000-2010. Summarise
2 - This is an exaggerate claim that in no way makes sense when compared to the information provided in...
Writing FeedbackChanggueb - May 25, 2023 / Holt - May 27, 2023
|The data on the Australian export to four countries including Japan, US, China and India
2 - Australian would refer to the citizens of Australia. Australia is the country that you should have been referring...
Writing Feedbacktrangthu28092006 - May 25, 2023 / Holt - May 27, 2023
|A reflective essay on teaching English as second langauge
3 - Thank you @Holt for this general review. The problem is that I am unable to pay because I have...
Writing FeedbackDanish2023 - May 24, 2023 / Danish2023 - May 26, 2023
|Line graph shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in Europe. Summarise info
3 - @raveelmer how can you up load the image in your post bro? can you teach me please,(thank you very...
Writing Feedbackraveelmer - May 24, 2023 / Nguyen Van Tich - May 26, 2023
|MANY WILD ANIMALS HAVE BECOME ENDANGERED DUE TO HUMAN ACTIVITIES. WHY HAS THIS HAPPENED?
2 - This is an example of a task 2 essay that will get a failing score regardless of the discussion...
Writing Feedbackhyfthuong - May 25, 2023 / Holt - May 25, 2023
|Government in work of dealing with environmental problems by increasing fuel prices.
2 - While I commend you for writing fast and using so many words in your essay, I cannot say that...
Writing FeedbackMarilyn Jean - May 24, 2023 / Holt - May 25, 2023
|Explain some of the ways in which humans are damaging the atmosphere.
2 - Your prompt restatement is inaccurate as you immediately focused on air pollution when the instruction was asking you to...
Writing FeedbackTram Le - May 24, 2023 / Holt - May 25, 2023
|The maps depict an industrial place in Norbiton town at the present and after the development
2 - Your use of simple English is one of the strengths of this essay. You have shown an actual ability...
Writing FeedbackDumboi - May 24, 2023 / Holt - May 25, 2023
|The proportion of happiness of married and unmarried citizens living in the US according to age
2 - We have to immediately address the word count of this essay. With 230 words, that means you have taken...
Writing Feedbackmarytran30072000 - May 23, 2023 / Holt - May 24, 2023
|IELTS2 When you are in Rome, do as the Romans do; visitors should follow local customs and behaviour
Writing Feedbackjaemie - May 21, 2023 / jaemie - May 22, 2023
|Reasons of teenagers' online socialization and measures for in-person relationship
2 - Your prompt paraphrasing is way off base. It is not connected in any way to the original presentation. You...
Writing Feedbackkyanh0211 - May 22, 2023 / Holt - May 22, 2023
|In some countries, boys and girls are educated separately after the age of about ten years old.
2 - There are a few important mistakes made in the paraphrasing section. The first of which the information source. A...
Writing Feedbackcharissedna - May 20, 2023 / Holt - May 22, 2023
|Some people think that there should be strict laws to control the amount of noise a person makes.
2 - Since this is a part of your personal opinion, it should not be located in the paraphrasing sentence/s....
Writing FeedbackNhutherelie - May 19, 2023 / Holt - May 21, 2023
|Two distinct stages, which are conventional and modern methods in the production of black tea
Writing Feedbackmai phuong - May 18, 2023 / mai phuong - May 21, 2023
|The most important function of music is relieving people's stress. Do you agree/disagree?
2 - The arguments presented in this essay are very good but incorrectly presented. Since you are not contradicting your personal...
Writing FeedbackArinaNguyen - May 19, 2023 / Holt - May 20, 2023
|In this day and age, the number of aspiring teachers is on the decline
2 - The prompt restatement + writer's opinion paragraph is too busy, too confusing to read. You need to understand how...
Writing FeedbackTran Phuong Linh - May 18, 2023 / Holt - May 19, 2023
|The graph shows the number of boys and girls is playing sport in England town in 2012
Writing Feedbackhagis - May 18, 2023 / Holt - May 19, 2023
|A glance at graph provided reveals the individual carbon dioxide emissions in 4 European countries
Writing FeedbackCANDY ZHUANG - May 16, 2023 / CANDY ZHUANG - May 19, 2023
|The charts compare the number of people per household in the UK in 1981 and 2001
3 - I think you should add sentences that compare the numbers with each other because in the graphs in ielts,...
Writing Feedbackhopybuddy - May 15, 2023 / sooan - May 18, 2023
|Some people think that the use of plastic bags should be banned.
2 - This essay can only receive a partial score since the response is not aligned with the writing requirements. The...
Writing Feedbacksienna - May 15, 2023 / Holt - May 17, 2023
|TASK 2: Prioritising economic progress? The government should not overlook other types of growth
2 - The summary overview is incomplete. You must restate both public opinions before presenting your opinion in support of one...
Writing Feedbackscitechalon - May 15, 2023 / Holt - May 17, 2023
|Task 2: Games bring demerits in terms of physical health as well as mental behavior to children
2 - Do not use an empty response to the questions provided in your writer's opinion section. The examiner scores that...
Writing FeedbackAnnienguyen - May 15, 2023 / Holt - May 17, 2023
|Influence of human beings on the world's ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loss
NEW - Human activities indeed lead to the creatures facing extinction and damaging the ecosystem. This essay will discuss the rationale...
Writing Feedbackharryvn - May 17, 2023 / — -
|The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and its planned future development
NEW - planned future development The graphics illustrate how the industrial park of Norbiton town will be changed for development...
Writing Feedbackharryvn - May 17, 2023 / — -
|Unisex educational institutions better than single-sex education?
Writing Feedbacklinavu9x - May 7, 2023 / linavu9x - May 15, 2023
|Why should guns be enacted?
2 - The first paragraph should be revised to place the question about gun laws being enacted at the end. The...
Writing FeedbackJazming - May 14, 2023 / Holt - May 15, 2023
|Some people find advertisements amusing or annoying and they are not influenced by this
3 - In my point of view, i think that your essay have true reasons for annoying advertisements, but the problem...
Writing Feedbackmyahh - May 12, 2023 / vietnamkun - May 14, 2023
|TASK 1: The proportion of dwellers' increase in New Zealand between 1950 and 2020
2 - The word count is far more than what you can actually write during the actual test. Using a 20...
Writing FeedbackSallyTTT - May 14, 2023 / Holt - May 14, 2023
|IELTS Writing Task 2 - In many countries, a small number of people earn extremely high salaries
3 - Thank you so much for your detailed comment. Your advice is really valuable and helps me a lot to...
Writing FeedbackNgaZuna - May 10, 2023 / NgaZuna - May 12, 2023
|Two main tendencies in choosing subjects among different gender students
2 - Use the correct alternative gender assignment. While it is now commonplace to avoid using gender references, the English...
Writing Feedbackdiepnkn123 - May 11, 2023 / Holt - May 12, 2023
|In many countries, people are moving away from rural areas and towards urban areas why do you think
2 - You need to provide a sense of order in your prompt restatement and writer's opinion. Follow the flow of...
Writing Feedbacktungaan - May 11, 2023 / Holt - May 12, 2023
|Write a brief overall description of what happening in the following volcabulary:
Writing Feedbackquochoa01 - May 9, 2023 / quochoa01 - May 10, 2023
|Writing task 1 - The rate of women and men who passed their driving test in an Asia country
2 - The summary overview is a run-on sentence. This must be presented within 2 sentences since there are 2 different...
Writing FeedbackUang2307 - May 6, 2023 / Holt - May 8, 2023
|[WR T2] Is it necessary for schools to prize 'high-grade' students?
2 - You do not need to repeat the instructions to the examiner. He knows what you are supposed to...
Writing FeedbackDang Quy - May 6, 2023 / Holt - May 8, 2023
|[WRTING TASK 2] Some people think it is more beneficial to take part in team sports than solo sport
3 - + Opinions differ on ... I am of the opinion ... -> Ever since the emergence of sports, there...
Writing FeedbackVivian Slay - May 5, 2023 / myieltsw2sucks - May 7, 2023
|The proportion of travelers who visited Aquarium, Castle, Zoo and festivals in Scotland 1980-2010
2 - This essay cannot be reviewed as an accurate sample of your task 1 essay writing skills. That is because...
Writing FeedbackLinhtthao - May 5, 2023 / Holt - May 7, 2023
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