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Allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters or not

Writing Feedbackjust_writer - 3 hours ago / nemezidus - 3 hours ago
The diagram presents the process of generating electricity from geothermal energy in a power plant

Writing Feedbackjust_writer - 3 hours ago / Mara - 3 hours ago
Whoever controls the media also controls opinions and attitudes of the people

Writing FeedbackUmmu - Oct 16, 2017 / AliminHamzah - 6 hours ago
IELTS Task 2: International tourism brings negative consequences for visited countries.

Writing Feedbackpeachaddiction - Oct 5, 2017 / AliminHamzah - 6 hours ago
The difference of consumption between chicken beef lamb and fish in a European country

Writing Feedbackcherry_amour - 19 hours ago / cherry_amour - 9 hours ago
The place where students hang out

Writing FeedbackSheGoesLalala - 22 hours ago / SheGoesLalala - 12 hours ago
Some people think that boarding schools are an exellent option for children, while others disagree

Writing FeedbackUkiUsman - Oct 5, 2017 / eddies - 17 hours ago
IELTS TASK 2: much higher standards of living in urban areas but not in the country side

Writing FeedbackAliminHamzah - Oct 9, 2017 / LadyOfClockwork - 22 hours ago
The bar chart illustrates the Biritish male and female employees working in different occupations

Writing Feedbackhapi_hana9 - Oct 10, 2017 / LadyOfClockwork - 23 hours ago
Students want to live away from home while they continue to study

Writing Feedbackaliceliang - 1 day ago / aliceliang - 23 hours ago
Kids can learn from the very first days by their parents, but other say it's the task of the school

Writing FeedbackUmmu - Oct 9, 2017 / LadyOfClockwork - 1 day ago
A person's worth should be judged by social status, material possessions or traditional values

Writing Feedbacktadey - Oct 5, 2017 / LadyOfClockwork - 1 day ago
People should sometimes do things that they do not enjoy doing

Writing Feedbackpier - 1 day ago / pier - 1 day ago
The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurant between 2003,2013

Writing Feedbackjust_writer - 1 day ago / Holt - 1 day ago
[task 1] line graph - the revenue of a New York City Bookstore

Writing Feedbackphduyenngo - 2 days ago / phduyenngo - 1 day ago
IELTS task 2: The advantages and disadvantages of the current population structure

Writing Feedbackmonopolymi - Oct 8, 2017 / LadyOfClockwork - 1 day ago
Why grand and expensive marriages became more and more common in recent years?

Writing FeedbackEcirtaeb - Oct 8, 2017 / LadyOfClockwork - 1 day ago
Taking a gap of one year after completing high school and before taking admission

Writing Feedbacknguyencaocuong - Oct 7, 2017 / LadyOfClockwork - 1 day ago
Writing Task 2. Small Village and City Center

Writing FeedbackUmmu - Oct 12, 2017 / LadyOfClockwork - 1 day ago
Is it better to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway or on public transport?

Writing Feedbackjust_writer - 1 day ago / nemezidus - 1 day ago
The official forbiddance of smoking in public places - IELTS writing practice task 2 academic

Writing Feedbacklhy1216 - Oct 19, 2017 / LadyOfClockwork - 1 day ago
[task 1] bar chart writing - where people live in the Northwest region

Writing FeedbackLadyOfClockwork - 2 days ago / ah_zafari - 1 day ago
The proportion of men and women from the Aussie country who did systematic physical activity

Writing Feedbackjust_writer - Oct 18, 2017 / Holt - 1 day ago
The bar chart compares the worldwide sales figures for four different games over 6 years period

Writing Feedbackmonopolymi - Oct 6, 2017 / IELTS_Academic - 2 days ago
IELTS Task 1 - Bar chart - Population distribution in the Northwest region (1900 to 2050)

Writing FeedbackTran Minh Hien - Oct 15, 2017 / IELTS_Academic - 2 days ago
IELTS Task 1: The trend of GDP growth in post-reform China

Writing Feedbackwinky_wong - Oct 9, 2017 / IELTS_Academic - 2 days ago
[task1] map writing: the evolution of a villege

Writing FeedbackLadyOfClockwork - Oct 20, 2017 / LadyOfClockwork - 2 days ago
Punishment for each type of crime was often a prominent rule in societies

Writing FeedbackSol19921992 - 2 days ago / Holt - 2 days ago
When proffesors give project on which students must work together, the students learn more effective

Writing Feedbackpier - Oct 18, 2017 / Onyinye123 - Oct 20, 2017
Use of animals for testing medicines is cruel or not ?

Writing Feedbackjayy98 - Oct 20, 2017 / pier - Oct 20, 2017
Is it essential for newcomers to get used and follow the traditions and culture in a foreign country

Writing Feedbackhoanghienktvn141 - Oct 19, 2017 / pier - Oct 20, 2017
[task1] Three possible sites for a new hypermarket, which will be built in the city of Pellington

Writing FeedbackLadyOfClockwork - Oct 19, 2017 / LadyOfClockwork - Oct 20, 2017
A school has been given money to spend on one thing to improve the school.

Writing FeedbackLauraMoriarty - Oct 19, 2017 / Holt - Oct 20, 2017
Academic IELTS task 1-The maps of town center of Islip now and in the future

Writing FeedbackChi Han - Oct 19, 2017 / Holt - Oct 20, 2017
The population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults. good or bad?

Writing Feedbackjust_writer - Oct 19, 2017 / Holt - Oct 20, 2017
Communication and trust are considered to be indispensable parts of social life

Writing FeedbackRubenstein - Oct 19, 2017 / Rubenstein - Oct 19, 2017
Maps below show the centre of small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development

Writing Feedbackjust_writer - Oct 19, 2017 / Chi Han - Oct 19, 2017
Television, newspapers, magazines, and other media pay too much attention to VIP's personal lives

Writing Feedbackpier - Oct 19, 2017 / TJLuschen - Oct 19, 2017
Whether taking a gap year is a reasonable idea? (help, rescue poor writting)

Writing Feedbackchche - Oct 18, 2017 / happyfunny - Oct 19, 2017
IELTS WRITING TASK 2: Is local history more important than world history? Opinion essay.

Writing Feedbackscully_vananh - Oct 18, 2017 / scully_vananh - Oct 19, 2017
IELTS Task 2: Many countries increase the amount of household garbage going to landfill every year.

Writing FeedbackHannielee - Oct 19, 2017 / Holt - Oct 19, 2017
It is now possible for scientist and tourist to travel remote natural environment eg. the south pole

Writing FeedbackUmmu - Oct 19, 2017 / Holt - Oct 19, 2017
IELTS2 - it is necessary for parents to attend parenting training course to bring their children up

Writing FeedbackAliminHamzah - Oct 19, 2017 / happyfunny - Oct 19, 2017
Children raised in the countryside have better than those from urban areas?

Writing Feedbackpier - Oct 18, 2017 / Hannielee - Oct 19, 2017
Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research

Writing Feedbackjust_writer - Oct 18, 2017 / Holt - Oct 19, 2017
Dependance on mobile phones. Everyone is using them more or less intensively.

Writing Feedbacktieunuhuyenbi207 - Oct 18, 2017 / Holt - Oct 19, 2017
Should long-term job-seekers in receipt of government benefits be made to do voluntary work

Writing Feedbackitsme2216 - Oct 17, 2017 / itsme2216 - Oct 18, 2017
Many people think that every individual is responsible for their own healthy lifestyle.

Writing Feedbackitsme2216 - Oct 16, 2017 / itsme2216 - Oct 18, 2017
IELTS writing task 1: Accommodations for holidaymakers

Writing Feedbacksarahna - Oct 3, 2017 / sarahna - Oct 18, 2017
[task 1] Below is a map of the city of Brandfield - investments plan

Writing FeedbackLadyOfClockwork - Oct 18, 2017 / LadyOfClockwork - Oct 18, 2017
Providing different kind of support to improve the quality of life of citizens in poorer nation

Writing FeedbackSummer1994 - Oct 18, 2017 / Holt - Oct 18, 2017
Some people believe that the amount of time that is put into art could be better managed

Writing Feedbackjust_writer - Oct 17, 2017 / Competent_Anna - Oct 18, 2017
IELTS task 1-The charts below give information on the ages of people when they got married...

Writing Feedbackmadeline8484 - Oct 18, 2017 / Holt - Oct 18, 2017
The bar charts compares the percentage of Australian men and women who do regular exercise

Writing FeedbackChi Han - Oct 16, 2017 / AliminHamzah - Oct 18, 2017
IELTS Task 2: Discuss the causes and some effects of widespread drug

Writing Feedbackjust_writer - Oct 16, 2017 / AliminHamzah - Oct 18, 2017
The unpaid community service is not necessary to be a compulsory program in high school

Writing Feedbackhiimsandra - Oct 17, 2017 / just_writer - Oct 17, 2017
[IELTS] We lived in a world of technology these days. Opinion essay.

Writing FeedbackJimmy879873 - Oct 17, 2017 / itsme2216 - Oct 17, 2017
Nowadays, a lot of new, big supermarkets are appearing every day - what about local business?

Writing Feedbackjust_writer - Oct 17, 2017 / TJLuschen - Oct 17, 2017
[IELTS Task2] learning a different language benefits our lives apart from working and traveling

Writing Feedbackkatty1234600 - Oct 5, 2017 / Jimmy879873 - Oct 17, 2017
Some parent offer their school-age children money for each high grade (mark) they get in school.

Writing Feedbackpier - Oct 17, 2017 / Holt - Oct 17, 2017

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