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|Sticky: [WRITING TASK 1] The average on cell phone, national fixed line amd international fixed line service
4 - @Hannah Robjn Thanks for your feedback. Maybe i typed too fast so i made a lot unexpected mistakes. I...
Writing Feedbackelliemiller - Oct 13, 2020 / elliemiller - Oct 14, 2020
|Some people believe that reading stories from a book is better than watching TV or playing computer
4 - Those stories are touched- touching and educational Playing video games sometimes can cause addiction and misbehaviors ...
Writing Feedbacknguyethoang - 21 hrs ago / Vanphan - 2 hrs ago
|[Writing IELTS Task 2] Childhood obesity
3 - Parents want their children to eat more and not the like are all-time favorites..... Be afraid of crowds...
Writing FeedbackMio_phoenix - 12 hrs ago / Vanphan - 2 hrs ago
|IELTS Task 1: Process- Sugar producing process
4 - removed- removing all the leaves to become the raw material .... separates-separating solid and liquip parts...
Writing Feedbackt3miml - 1 day ago / Vanphan - 2 hrs ago
|IELTS: When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration
NEW - Topic: When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration. To what extent do you agree or...
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|It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age.
NEW - Topic: It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment...
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|It is now possible for scientists and tourists to travel to remote natural environment,such as the
Writing Feedbackkhanh chau - 14 hrs ago / hoa nguyen - 7 hrs ago
|Writing Task 1 ( The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010)
2 - The explanation is difficult to follow. The writer does not successfully inform the reader as to how the place...
Writing Feedbacknhilyy - 17 hrs ago / Holt - 7 hrs ago
|If I could meet anyone in history, I would like to meet Steve Jobs.
3 - @Holt Thank you so much for your review and your comments. They are well-noted! I will send you an...
Writing FeedbackPhong Nguyen - 2 days ago / Phong Nguyen - 8 hrs ago
|Task 2: positive or negative about computer technology is more and more easily accessible and cheape
2 - The provided position statement of the writer is meant for a different discussion prompt. The advantage or disadvantage format...
Writing FeedbackVanphan - 1 day ago / Holt - 8 hrs ago
|Many people go to university for academic study. More people should be encouraged to do vocational.
2 - The writer must never include a personal opinion when restating the prompt. There should not be any claims made...
Writing Feedbacknam163be - 1 day ago / Holt - 9 hrs ago
|The chart shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational.
3 - In my opinion, you use too much "percentage", "ratio", ect. The ways you describe the charts and give the...
Writing Feedbackvolevy02009 - 1 day ago / Mio_phoenix - 12 hrs ago
|Task 1 : the percentage of uk population following the radio and television during the octorber - de
3 - "People in the UK were tend... fluctuate and then reach..." This sentence has 2 verbs, "were tend" (actually, "tend"...
Writing FeedbackVanphan - 1 day ago / Mio_phoenix - 12 hrs ago
|[IELTS WRITING TASK 2] - controversy surrounding the equalization of gender in tertiary education
3 - The topic is about whether the NUMBER of male or female students should be equal or not in terms...
Writing FeedbackCharliePoo - 1 day ago / vukhanhvan - 12 hrs ago
|IELTS WRITING TASK 2- Nowadays more tasks at home and work are being performed by robots.
Writing Feedbackvukhanhvan - 1 day ago / vukhanhvan - 12 hrs ago
|[IELTS task 2] Discuss both views and give opinion about spend money on improving transport
2 - Focus on the discussion instruction in totality. Do not focus on the last part of the discussion. It is...
Writing Feedbacknguyen3899 - 1 day ago / Holt - 13 hrs ago
|WRITING TASK 2: LEISURE TIME; activities that improve the mind, or another - to rest the mind
2 - The instruction asks you to provide an agreement with one of the 2 opinions after discussing the public supportfor...
Writing Feedbackaestheticluv - 1 day ago / Holt - 13 hrs ago
|Essay about the way media reports the lives of celebrities than others
Writing FeedbackNhat Ha - Jul 24, 2021 / Vanphan - 1 day ago
|IELTS WRITING TASK 1 - The bar chart below shows shares of expenditures for five major categories
4 - The information given in the chart makes comparisons in the number of money was spend spent on five catagories...
Writing Feedbackjaynguyen - 2 days ago / Vanphan - 1 day ago
|Information: sharing information freely for scientific research
Writing FeedbackKhanh Minh - 2 days ago / Khanh Minh - 1 day ago
|Are management and leadership different?
Writing Feedbackdaisy5623 - 2 days ago / Holt - 1 day ago
|IELTS Essay Music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together.
2 - The opinion statement is only partially correct. The thesis tells the examiner of the writers opinion, that partially addresses...
Writing Feedbackhuyenphuong - 2 days ago / Holt - 1 day ago
|IELTS writing Task 2 (University students are increasingly studying abroad as part of their studies)
2 - The writer has neglected to restate the original topic in a manner similar to the original discussion. Rather than...
Writing Feedbackwannapassielts - 2 days ago / Holt - 1 day ago
|In the past, people store knowledge in books. Nowadays, they store knowledge on the Internet
Writing Feedbackhung1992 - Jul 18, 2021 / hung1992 - 1 day ago
|Spending money on existing public transport or constructing new railway lines for very fast trains?
3 - @Holt Thank you so much for your time and your advice. I will check again and improve my skills....
Writing Feedbackshuyuan - 2 days ago / shuyuan - 1 day ago
|The graph below shows information about US government spending on research between 1980 and 2008
2 - For comparison measurements, the writer will do well to use any of the following comparison standards: - Year...
Writing Feedbackhoan - 2 days ago / Holt - 1 day ago
|IELTS task 2 - opinion: whether the personality we re born with or life experience matter more
2 - The writer has written an opinion article instead of a task 2 response essay. The essay is clearly over-witten...
Writing Feedbackowuduc - 2 days ago / Holt - 1 day ago
|Tourism: if we should ban tourism
2 - The writer misrepresented the opposing discussion in the restatement. There is a fictitious reason provided for the opposition to...
Writing Feedbackhasone - 2 days ago / Holt - 2 days ago
|University places for a large number of youngsters
2 - While the essay is relatively well composed, the tendency of the writer to present a secondary reason in his...
Writing Feedbackgintoki7 - Jul 24, 2021 / Holt - 2 days ago
|Writing task 1: Pie chart - The pie charts compare the number of owned and rented houses in the UK
2 - When indicating more than one image, specify the number of images. For clarity purposes, identify the images by year...
Writing Feedbackhthesheep - Jul 24, 2021 / Holt - 2 days ago
|Writing ielts task 2. The advantages and disadvantages of living with others
2 - While the essay may not be grammatically accurate, there are no word choice errors that would affect the LR...
Writing FeedbackHermionevk24 - Jul 24, 2021 / Holt - 2 days ago
|IELTS WRITING TASK 1 - The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who pass
Writing Feedbackjaynguyen - Jul 24, 2021 / jaynguyen - 2 days ago
|The rise of fuel price is one of the most effective ways to protect the environment
2 - The introduction paraphrase needs to be better presented. The discussion should be divided into at least 3 sentences. The...
Writing Feedbackthjn - Jul 24, 2021 / Holt - 2 days ago
|Zoos are cruel and should be closed down
2 - When assessing how the essay should be written, the writer must consider the number of discussions as indicated in...
Writing Feedbacktony98s - Jul 24, 2021 / Holt - 2 days ago
|Ielts task 2: Discuss both views and give your opinion about newspapers and media
Writing FeedbackVinhhppt - Jul 23, 2021 / Vinhhppt - 2 days ago
|Modern technology advances have paved the way for the popularity of working and studying from home
3 - 1.only support one opinion 2. because they are considered For example, people who do freelance->freelancers pointed out that they...
Writing Feedbackwatermelon - Jul 22, 2021 / gintoki7 - Jul 24, 2021
|A common tendency of self-employment among those who are eager to establish their own companies
4 - "consequence" means a result of a particular action or situation, often one that is bad or not convenient so...
Writing FeedbackAnnie241104 - Jul 23, 2021 / gintoki7 - Jul 24, 2021
|The comparison of water usage in different regions: San Diego, California, and the rest of the world
Writing Feedbackhanaquynh - Jul 23, 2021 / hanaquynh - Jul 24, 2021
|Is the trends of living alone a positive or a negative development ?
2 - The inclusion of marriage as a discussion reference point in the restatement paragraph has added a personal opinion in...
Writing Feedbackdoanminhduy - Jul 23, 2021 / Holt - Jul 24, 2021
|The line chart about people living in Australia who were born in Asia, the UK, and other regions
2 - The task 1 essay should not contain more than 200 words. This is a direct and simple report presentation....
Writing Feedbackcallmelagom - Jul 23, 2021 / Holt - Jul 24, 2021
|IELTS Academic writing task 2: The advantages and disadvantages of living in a large city
2 - The essay is almost 400 words. A word count that cannot be presented within 40 minutes if writing within...
Writing Feedbackta manh 2401 - Jul 23, 2021 / Holt - Jul 24, 2021
|Art and music classes should not be mandatory at school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
2 - The essay is well developed and sticks to the discussion basis requirements for the most part. These essays are...
Writing FeedbackSun Mint - Jul 23, 2021 / Holt - Jul 24, 2021
|IELTS Writing Task 1: People arrested in the five years and the most recent reasons for arrest
Writing FeedbackHermes42 - Jul 23, 2021 / Hermes42 - Jul 24, 2021
|Discuss both views and give opinion about encouraging young people to leave home or staying atome .
Writing FeedbackBao Bao - Jul 22, 2021 / Bao Bao - Jul 23, 2021
|TOEFL writing task: The marketing tools used by companies to promote their products to children
2 - The writer should choose to discuss only one of the two choices provided for the sake of clarity. Which...
Writing FeedbackJA2121 - Jul 22, 2021 / Holt - Jul 23, 2021
|A table illustrating information about consuming goods purchasing in five European countries
2 - The summary overview failed to indicate a trending statement based on the highs and lows of a specific country....
Writing Feedbacktred - Jul 22, 2021 / Holt - Jul 23, 2021
|Alternative source of renewable energy
2 - It is difficult to assess the type of Task 2 essay the student is trying to write. The prompt...
Writing Feedbackometslamet - Jul 22, 2021 / Holt - Jul 23, 2021
|What are the reasons for rising wealth inequality and what problems could it cause?
2 - The prompt restatement is an inaccurate, and therefore, invalid representation of the original prompt. It fails to deliver a...
Writing FeedbackHainguyen28 - Jul 22, 2021 / Holt - Jul 23, 2021
|Nowadays people use bicycles less as a form of transport? Why is that? What can we do to encourage .
Writing Feedbackchonhi2004 - Jul 3, 2021 / Uchihaminh04 - Jul 23, 2021
|Many people argue that salary should be the top priority for applying for a position. Do you agree?
Writing FeedbackNancie110 - Jul 21, 2021 / Uchihaminh04 - Jul 23, 2021
|The diagram shows the university sport center in the present and future
Writing FeedbackAlicePhuongAnh - Jul 20, 2021 / Hoshikolucy - Jul 22, 2021
|more and more people becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building
NEW - In several nations, a soaring quantity of people have a tendency to learn about the background of their accommodation....
Writing Feedbackhongquan1311 - Jul 22, 2021 / — -
|The provided table represents the figures for employees and factories over a period of 50 years
2 - A summary overview is only complete when the miter provides short details about the image type, what it represents,...
Writing FeedbackNadeleine - Jul 21, 2021 / Holt - Jul 22, 2021
|It is argued that only governments and large companies are able to improve the environment crucially
2 - If the writer wishes to discuss this single opinion extent essay in a comparative format, a paragraphical compare and...
Writing FeedbackNadeleine - Jul 21, 2021 / Holt - Jul 22, 2021
|It is true that in the modern world, many couples decide to defer procreation
2 - When interpreting the original topic, it is best that the writer does not affirm anything that was not done...
Writing Feedbackqtrang2410 - Jul 21, 2021 / Holt - Jul 22, 2021
|Computers among the best inventions over centuries
2 - Is the writer presenting a case in court? Perhapsdebating someone? Task 2 essays rely on everyday English words for...
Writing Feedbackvinhhoang78 - Jul 21, 2021 / Holt - Jul 22, 2021
|WRITING TASK 2: New technologies and ways of buying and selling
Writing FeedbackKatta_78 - Jul 21, 2021 / Katta_78 - Jul 22, 2021
|Writing task 1 ielts: the percentage of students giving good ratings for various aspects of Mcgrill
2 - There are several types of tables. The writer did not offer a complete image identification. The description from the...
Writing Feedbackhienbui081105 - Jul 21, 2021 / Holt - Jul 22, 2021
|WRITING TASK 1 - the percentage of people living in Australia who were born in Asia, the UK,...
2 - This is a pretty good presentation that falls within the requirements of a passing task 1 analysis report. The...
Writing Feedbacknhaatle - Jul 21, 2021 / Holt - Jul 22, 2021
|The causes of success in college
2 - The first sentence of the restatement does not sound like a trophic restatement that was based on a previous...
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