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|Do you agree that free trade makes rich countries richer and poor countries poorer?
2 - Great essay and logic! Has concern about- has concerned about everything has its both sides- every coin has two...
Writing FeedbackNguyen Minh Tram - 14 hours ago / dawez - 6 hours ago
|In the chart the amount of global water use in three different sectors over 10 decades (1900-2000)
2 - Hi Syamsiah, I will try giving a few suggestions for finalizing your essay. First, be careful of putting information....
Writing FeedbacksyamsiahRahim - 14 hours ago / akbarmappiare - 11 hours ago
|Some people think that people who choose a job early and keep doing it are more likely to succeed
NEW - benefits of choosing a job early In contemporary world, opinions are divided whether people should decide their career...
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|Information about global water use and water consumption
NEW - water use worldwide The graph illustrates information about global water use for some sectors while the table provides...
Writing FeedbackReza_Hidayat - 13 hours ago / — -
|Having a gap-year is more and more common in recent years. IELTS Writing Task 2
6 - @benz0127 I would like to say that you present information with lack of coherence, and there is no clear...
Writing Feedbackbenz0127 - Apr 23, 2017 / Reza_Hidayat - 13 hours ago
|[IELTS] Summarise the information by reporting the main features of cement and concrete production
6 - @mandyduong I have red your essay and I just concern on how you arrange the sentence and your lexical...
Writing Feedbackmandyduong - Apr 23, 2017 / Reza_Hidayat - 13 hours ago
|Causes and effects of using eBooks
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|Some people think that it is good for a country's culture to import foreign movies and TV programs.
3 - @PHUONGMIN I have red your essay, and I think that you just use some of simple sentences in your...
Writing FeedbackPHUONGMIN - 1 day ago / Reza_Hidayat - 13 hours ago
|Causes of agricultural land productivity including three areas in 1990s. IELTS task 1
Writing FeedbackRahma vety - Apr 5, 2017 / Reza_Hidayat - 14 hours ago
|The causes of eBook trend and its problem related to the libraries
NEW - More and more people prefer to read eBooks rather than paper books. What are the reasons for this? What...
Writing Feedbackagus_mono - 14 hours ago / — -
|More and more people prefer to read e-books rather than paper books
NEW - More and more people prefer to read e-books rather than paper books. What are the reason for this? What...
Writing FeedbacksyamsiahRahim - 14 hours ago / — -
|WT 1 - Water consumption in different purpose and areas
3 - hay @Diahkn93 i have several advice to boost your score in this writing firstly, in introducing the chart, you...
Writing FeedbackDiahkn93 - 15 hours ago / agus_mono - 14 hours ago
|The preference of people on E-Books and Paper Books
2 - @Anhy Thus, it also relating to the recent condition that preference (...) books has been raising (risen) by...
Writing FeedbackAnhy chan - 15 hours ago / syamsiahRahim - 14 hours ago
|Ielts writing task 2: Social networking sites-------A blessing or a curse?
Writing Feedbackbtho - 1 day ago / syamsiahRahim - 14 hours ago
|Water use worldwide and water consumption
2 - hello @tamtamii you explain the multiple charts very well, but i still found little error such as ;...
Writing Feedbacktamtamii - 16 hours ago / Diahkn93 - 16 hours ago
|WT 2 - Why do offenders commit more crimes after serving the first punishment?
NEW - Reasons for recidivism Villains freed from the prison usually commit more crimes. This statement leads to the question...
Writing Feedbacktnritika - 17 hours ago / — -
|Optimal method to acquire knowledge by students
Writing FeedbackAvyuktbgdc2017 - 1 day ago / tnritika - 17 hours ago
|How to help recidivist to get a proper life?
2 - if you want to give the solution about specific training program in order to provide the prisoners a skill...
Writing FeedbackReza_Hidayat - 1 day ago / tnritika - 17 hours ago
|Percentage of spending in three categories of goods in several countries in 2000
NEW - WT 1 - Percentage of National Consumer Expenditure by Category (2002) expenditures proportion for goods in Europe ...
Writing Feedbacktnritika - 18 hours ago / — -
|Global Water use and comparison between Brazil and Congo
NEW - The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries ...
Writing Feedbackagus_mono - 21 hours ago / — -
|What students did after leaving college, without job? Describing The Graph.
8 - @syita_arc as far as i read your essay, i think to improve your score, you have to pay attention...
Writing Feedbacksyita_arc - Apr 12, 2017 / agus_mono - 21 hours ago
|The amount of water used by sectors, also the water utilisation in Brasil and Congo
NEW - The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries. ...
Writing FeedbackAnhy chan - 21 hours ago / — -
|Line chart - IELTS task 1
2 - Hi @teephan226 there are several suggestion for you to make your essay more powerfull: 1. It is good that...
Writing Feedbackteephan226 - 1 day ago / Anhy chan - 21 hours ago
|Criminalism and various measures to lower this anomaly
2 - Hi Restu, I have read your essay closely and a few problems in yours. As we see, you presented...
Writing Feedbackrestuanlubis - 1 day ago / akbarmappiare - 1 day ago
|Most of criminals are notorious offenders - what to do with them?
2 - ... people less willing to commit crime again. ... be applied in all countries in the world. Be...
Writing FeedbacksyamsiahRahim - 1 day ago / btho - 1 day ago
|Percentage of spending on different needs in several European countries in 2002
NEW - consumers money spending for their needs The table illustrates information about the percentage of spending on different needs...
Writing FeedbackReza_Hidayat - 1 day ago / — -
|causes and measures for offenders who commit more crimes after serving the first punishment
3 - Below is my revised and recommended various of your essay, I rectified some grammatical mistakes and make a few...
Writing Feedbackagus_mono - 1 day ago / btho - 1 day ago
|Ielts writing task 1: Info about British sporting activities
Writing Feedbackbtho - 1 day ago / Reza_Hidayat - 1 day ago
|The chart below shows participation in certain leisure activities by children in Australia
Writing FeedbackASooshd - Apr 16, 2017 / Reza_Hidayat - 1 day ago
|The proportion of National Consumer Expenditure in Five countries
Writing FeedbackAnhy chan - 1 day ago / Anhy chan - 1 day ago
|Writing task 2 - causes and solution for offender commit more crimers after they was free
2 - @Diahkn93 Your essay idea managing is good. As your request first and foremost your introduce, I think there are...
Writing FeedbackDiahkn93 - 1 day ago / restuanlubis - 1 day ago
|Where went majority of UK students since they finished their school?
Writing Feedbackaini fidhni - Apr 12, 2017 / Reza_Hidayat - 1 day ago
|The percentage of three kind of items which were purchased by consumers
3 - @syamsiahRahim Your essay manage is going with well. Explaining data is solid, the overview I thought it is repetition...
Writing FeedbacksyamsiahRahim - 1 day ago / restuanlubis - 1 day ago
|The provided table illustrates about people have expenditure on different goods in 2002
2 - @tamtamii Your essay manage is going with well. Sadly, it is too short only more 2 words, that is...
Writing Feedbacktamtamii - 1 day ago / restuanlubis - 1 day ago
|Transportation facilities and shopping mall. Describing maps IELTS TASK 1
3 - Hi @aman12 The most important part that you should put attention in this essay is the way you describing...
Writing Feedbackaman12 - Apr 12, 2017 / Anhy chan - 1 day ago
|Commit crimes and first punishment - death penalty?
Writing FeedbackAnhy chan - 1 day ago / Anhy chan - 1 day ago
|First Punishment for many offenders
2 - Ummm With all due respect, I think the first thing you need to work on is your grammar accuracy....
Writing Feedbacktamtamii - 1 day ago / btho - 1 day ago
|IELTS TASK 2 Cause and effect. Topic: Crime and safety in a society
8 - Hi @Trista5577 , I have read your essay closely. Therefore, there are several suggestions to make your essay more...
Writing FeedbackTrista5577 - Apr 23, 2017 / Anhy chan - 1 day ago
|Expenditure of five countries by category
2 - GRAMMAR what isthe biggest proportion of ... -------------------- use past tense because the year is 2002 firstly, all people...
Writing Feedbackagus_mono - 1 day ago / hasanah_13 - 1 day ago
|The First Day on My New Job
3 - @Holt Thank you for your advice, especially that of protect other's privacy. I will try to do it better...
Writing Feedbackspringblossoms - Apr 20, 2017 / springblossoms - 1 day ago
|New medicines on the market at the expense of animals
3 - Hi Fiza, these below are my thoughts for finalizing your essay. Please, meet my notes and fix them. Fiza,...
Writing Feedbacksfiza - Apr 22, 2017 / akbarmappiare - 2 days ago
|Advantages and disadvantages of Fairmont Island - chart summary
3 - hy @michsimo i have read your essay clearly i think, in your second paragraph, you have to give comparison...
Writing Feedbackmichsimo - Apr 22, 2017 / agus_mono - 2 days ago
|Ielts task 1: A line graph describing waste production of three companies
4 - Wong, considering that writing task 1 always involves description, comparing and contrasting the information presented in a line graph...
Writing Feedbackmasami - Apr 23, 2017 / okorobiadimma14 - Apr 24, 2017
|The transformation that happened on Taft University's campus from 1980 to 2005 is depicted on maps
3 - Huong, you again failed to provide a copy of the illustration that you were provided with for the summary....
Writing Feedbackmandyduong - Apr 23, 2017 / Holt - Apr 23, 2017
|Whether luck is important to success? TOEFL
3 - @Holt I think I understand what you mean. For instance, I delete the first sentence of my last paragraph...
Writing FeedbackSelaf - Apr 23, 2017 / Selaf - Apr 23, 2017
|Choosing the Urban Life - to live in the city or the countryside？
Writing FeedbackBlairlau - Apr 23, 2017 / Blairlau - Apr 23, 2017
|Clothes, travel, film and music's online sale of four different retailers
3 - Ahmad, I think that this essay presentation of worthy of a band score of 7. It is highly accurate...
Writing FeedbackAhmadham - Apr 22, 2017 / Holt - Apr 22, 2017
|Excessive usage of cars - problems and solutions
Writing FeedbackThuy Linh - Apr 22, 2017 / Holt - Apr 22, 2017
|Speaking same language in the future is good or bad?
Writing FeedbackTai - Apr 22, 2017 / Holt - Apr 22, 2017
|IELTS Writing Task 2 - Causes and solutions (Topic: Museums and Historical sites)
2 - Vuu, good work on writing 200 words for this essay. That sort of word count can definitely increase your...
Writing FeedbackTogepiLinhVuu - Apr 22, 2017 / Holt - Apr 22, 2017
|Topic: key problems facing the world's cities in the 21st century and solutions
Writing Feedbackmichsimo - Apr 20, 2017 / michsimo - Apr 21, 2017
|Advertising analysis essay "The cultural expansion of Vietnam Airlines"
Writing Feedbacksarah2015 - Apr 20, 2017 / michsimo - Apr 21, 2017
|Writing Task I People living in three different countries of U.S.
3 - From the grammatical side, a partical is missing "human" should be "a human". The "quantity " word seem not...
Writing FeedbackAhmadham - Apr 20, 2017 / NurulNaval - Apr 21, 2017
|Topic : best way to solve the problem of poverty is to set up businesses with rich countries
2 - Huy, it is usually difficult to tell if your draft has answered the prompt of the essay if we...
Writing Feedbackguydragon - Apr 19, 2017 / okorobiadimma14 - Apr 21, 2017
|Advertising and Consumers relation
Writing Feedbackalextran2215 - Apr 19, 2017 / alextran2215 - Apr 20, 2017
|Some people believe that imprisonment is the most successful way to deal with criminals. Others thin
3 - @gabby12345 : I am also practising writing for the IELTS. There are some comments on your essay from my...
Writing Feedbackgabby12345 - Apr 19, 2017 / binhminh2507 - Apr 20, 2017
|IELTS TASK 2 exclusion of women in certain jobs
2 - @ayat_555 I think you need to change your introduction paragraph. The first sentence should be the topic of your...
Writing Feedbackayat_555 - Apr 19, 2017 / adib_yz - Apr 19, 2017
|Future IELTS exam preparation. The graph compares the number of visits to two new music sites on web
3 - @akbarmappiare Thank you very much. I didn't realize those big mistakes in the writing. I spent money on a...
Writing Feedbackdilink - Apr 18, 2017 / dilink - Apr 19, 2017
|I decided to do running - there are many advantages of running to our body
2 - Weijjiang, you should focus on only one aspect of running for your essay instead of trying to develop a...
Writing FeedbackWeijiang123 - Apr 17, 2017 / Holt - Apr 18, 2017
|Which media do you prefer? Why? 100-125 WORDS
2 - Hello Ismael, your sentences in this have needed improvement. If you wanna answer the question, please you don't give...
Writing Feedbackismaelvr - Apr 17, 2017 / akbarmappiare - Apr 17, 2017
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