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4 - @Hannah Robjn Thanks for your feedback. Maybe i typed too fast so i made a lot unexpected mistakes. I...
Writing Feedbackelliemiller - Oct 13, 2020 / elliemiller - Oct 14, 2020
|(IELTS P2)Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live
NEW - It is widely believed that people should find an approach to live with global warming instead of preventing it....
Writing Feedbackmimimeo - 2 hrs ago / — -
|People believe that the government should make college free. AGREE OR DISAGREE?
2 - There are 2 schools of thought provided for this prompt and yetonly one is reflected in the restatement. The...
Writing FeedbackLina nguyen - 15 hrs ago / Holt - 2 hrs ago
|The given diagram illustrates the complex procedures required to produce liquid chocolate
2 - The writer must be more familiar with the image types. While the prompt provides a clue to the type...
Writing FeedbackHelenN - 17 hrs ago / Holt - 2 hrs ago
|1. Some people think that it is better to work for different organisations during the career
2 - Donot turn the discussion intea controversy. That statement is unnecessary as the writer is altering the original statement presentation....
Writing Feedbackmaichi13 - 18 hrs ago / Holt - 2 hrs ago
|Global product and economy - CAMBRIDGE IELTS 10 Test 3 Writing Task 2
2 - There is no prompt attached to this essay which makes it difficult to review. As there are several similar...
Writing FeedbackMinhnek4 - 20 hrs ago / Holt - 2 hrs ago
|One thing that makes me happy this week.
2 - This essay is meant to be a deep reflection of your relationship with your sister. If should cover at...
Writing Feedbackeffiechen22 - 21 hrs ago / Holt - 3 hrs ago
|[IELTS WRITING TASK 2] WHETHER COMPUTERS ARE THE MOST SIGNIFICANT INNOVATION...
2 - Let's be clear, a reference to the "last century" means the most recent 100 years (20th century). The reference...
Writing Feedbackphcnguyen - 1 day ago / Holt - 3 hrs ago
|IELTS TASK 2: Individuals have changed their way in interaction
NEW - NOWADAYS THE WAY MANY PEOPLE INTERACT WITH EACH OTHER HAS CHANGED BECAUSE OF TECHNOLOGY. IN WHAT WAYS HAS TECHNOLOGY...
Writing FeedbackDoris1712 - 5 hrs ago / — -
|(IELTS) Home schooling vs School education
2 - Proper vocabulary usage is of the utmost importance in these essays. Word references help to bring clarity to the...
Writing FeedbackCrazy Snake - 1 day ago / Holt - 6 hrs ago
|Researchers and travelers are now more easily able to visit remote areas such as the South Pole
2 - This 209 word essay starts at a scoring disadvantage for not meeting the 250 minimum word count. The percentage...
Writing Feedbackthutrangg - 1 day ago / Holt - 8 hrs ago
|[TOEFL WRITING TASK 2] Grades encourage students to learn.
NEW - Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Grades encourage students to learn. Use specific reasons and examples...
Writing Feedbackprann189 - 12 hrs ago / — -
|TOEFL TASK-2 Some people say that computers have made life easier and more convenient
3 - @shivam1687 ... faster than a average human being. For instance, if you are incharge of a local ......
Writing Feedbackshivam1687 - 2 days ago / HelenN - 16 hrs ago
|WRITING TASK 1- the proportion total expenditure in a certain European country between 1960 and 2000
3 - Hi @stella nguyen ... on five sectors increased decreased (?) from 1960 to 2000. ... money for transportation...
Writing Feedbackstella nguyen - 2 days ago / HelenN - 16 hrs ago
|The large number of people are drawing attention to communicating online
4 - Hi @mymyt ... that a large number of people... ... this is a highly problematic issue... Therefore, some main...
Writing Feedbackmymyt - 2 days ago / HelenN - 16 hrs ago
|Allowing children to decide on matters such as food, clothes and entertainment is beneficial or not?
Writing FeedbackVictoriaVu - 1 day ago / Mekonguyen - 19 hrs ago
|Raising petrol prices as an effective measure to ease environmental problems
NEW - government should increase the cost of fuel ielts writing task2: People think that government should increase the cost...
Writing Feedbackhathuvu - 1 day ago / — -
|Essay about if self-acceptance is the most important trait a teacher can have
2 - A teacher of the English language should have proficient English vocabulary. Lecturers are supposed to have enough English know-hour...
Writing FeedbackQL91 - 1 day ago / Holt - 1 day ago
|"the solution for using technological devices too much to organise a meeting with other peolple"
2 - The first paragraph is confusing. It does not make a logical representation of the base presentation. It appears to...
Writing Feedbackducanh123 - 2 days ago / Holt - 1 day ago
|People from some nations often attach more importance to possessing a home than having rented one
2 - The topic restatement is properly done. AIthough it would benefitted from better synonym usage for the word " rented"....
Writing Feedbackhoangtuanhthu - 2 days ago / Holt - 1 day ago
|Different types of activities in the American senior citizens' leisure time from 1980s to 2010s
3 - Thank you for giving me a feedback. It is really helpful for my improvement. Hope to get more feedback...
Writing Feedbackkimcat2207 - Jun 14, 2021 / kimcat2207 - 1 day ago
|Some people claim that studying overseas will bring considerable benefits to the country
2 - The presentation is mostly on track and relevant to the prompt. However, issues with grammar in terms of vocabulary,...
Writing Feedbackphamtamm2508 - 2 days ago / Holt - 2 days ago
|IELTS WRITING PART 2 - working while studying teenagers
2 - Word usage accuracy is important when writing. Simply stating " working while studying does not carry the same meaning...
Writing Feedbackgiangninh - 2 days ago / Holt - 2 days ago
|IELTS TASK 2: Describe causes and effects of extended working hours
2 - Okay. Put away the dictionary and stop looking up representative complicated words that do not help with the clarity...
Writing FeedbackkuroshiroP - Jun 16, 2021 / Holt - 2 days ago
|Writing paragraphs about life goals
2 - Since this is only a single paragraph, you need not lead into your explanation with "To begin with". Go...
Writing Feedbackmanchint - Jun 16, 2021 / Holt - 2 days ago
|The causes of water pollution, and what effects does this have on animal life and human society
2 - The prompt paraphrase lacks coherence. The amount of words used in reference to the original discussion topic does not...
Writing FeedbackTrag1112 - Jun 16, 2021 / Holt - 2 days ago
|Writing Task 2 IELTS - conflicts about deciding subjects at university
2 - The validity of the personal opinion you present should be in the 3rd paragraph of the essay. It is...
Writing FeedbackTinhAnhNguyen - Jun 16, 2021 / Holt - 2 days ago
|IELTS WRITING TASK 2 about impact of social media on both individuals and society.
2 - Keep track of your word count. Always present 250 words or accept the penalties for not presenting the minimum...
Writing FeedbackAli20 - Jun 16, 2021 / Holt - 2 days ago
|The pie charts compare household expenditure spending on five different items in UK and New Zealand
2 - The summary overview is the presentation that gives you the opportunity to run down important information for the leader....
Writing Feedbackhanh_1 - Jun 16, 2021 / Holt - 2 days ago
|Bullying at schools. How to have a good structure in cause-solution writing type?
2 - There are a few things you have to remember when creating your restatement: - Don't refer to a debate...
Writing FeedbackHolan1712 - Jun 16, 2021 / Holt - 2 days ago
|Toefl Independent Writing - "Never, never give up" means to keep trying and working for own goals
Writing Feedbackackit - Jun 14, 2021 / ackit - 2 days ago
|The major environmental issue of our time is the extinction of many living creatures on earth
3 - This does not contain a complete thought. You probably mean that there are other pressing environmental...
Writing Feedbacktrangntt255 - Jun 15, 2021 / niesaysi - Jun 16, 2021
|Most people try to balance between work and other parts of theirs lives.
Writing Feedbackkhanhthu292002 - Jun 15, 2021 / Holt - Jun 16, 2021
|The graph depicts the percentage of four different materials recycled over the period of 28 years
2 - Incomplete image identifier. What type of graph? Review and memorize the differences. Your first trending sentence should...
Writing FeedbackNalanguyen - Jun 15, 2021 / Holt - Jun 16, 2021
|Harder to study at school.
2 - [quote=YeuRosie19]I believe that some solutions can be carefully considered to tackle with it.[/quote] The first part of this sentence...
Writing FeedbackYeuRosie19 - Jun 15, 2021 / Holt - Jun 16, 2021
|Writing #1: The graph gives information about male and female gym membership between 1980 and 2010
2 - For clarity purposes, you must present the year coverage upfront. While the reference works as a time reference....
Writing Feedbackyiwenwen - Jun 15, 2021 / Holt - Jun 16, 2021
|Children should be encouraged to play outdoors games that require physical activity?
Writing Feedbackphucnguyen0409 - Jun 14, 2021 / Ali20 - Jun 16, 2021
|Focus on traditional classes more or practical subjects more?
NEW - Some people said that school should focus more on teaching practical subjects such as car maintenence or managing the...
Writing Feedbackphucnguyen0409 - Jun 15, 2021 / — -
|Computers are believed to be smarter than humans by several scientists in no time
5 - You have an inaccuracy understanding the topic. Thus, i think you can change "On top of that" ==> "Moreover"...
Writing FeedbackVyvy201197 - Jun 11, 2021 / phucnguyen0409 - Jun 15, 2021
|In many cities more and more people are living alone. Is this a positive or negative trend?
3 - There are some replacement needed: paraphrasing carefully about the question so you can have a better view and range...
Writing Feedbackcongbeo95 - Jun 14, 2021 / phucnguyen0409 - Jun 15, 2021
|Task 1: Relationships at work with supervisors and companions (survey of workers 2005 and 2009)
2 - Relationships with whom? Refer to the groups in this section first then repeat later. This is...
Writing FeedbackSally_Dao - Jun 14, 2021 / Holt - Jun 15, 2021
|Reasons why adults pursue education at their age and how their education costs should be allocated
2 - You missed the minimum word count by 4 words. The standard is 150 - 200 words, you wrote only...
Writing FeedbackLE THI QUYNH NHU - Jun 14, 2021 / Holt - Jun 15, 2021
|The benefits of social skills and qualification skills to the company
2 - The phrase still refers to the original key phrase. LR scores are only increased by your alternate word...
Writing Feedbackthao van - Jun 14, 2021 / Holt - Jun 15, 2021
|Popularity of fish and three kinds of meat including lamb, beef and chicken in a European country
2 - [ Make this sound more professional. You could say; "The line chart shows the comparative consumption..." to...
Writing FeedbackHarinn - Jun 14, 2021 / Holt - Jun 15, 2021
|Learning about the past IELTS task 2
2 - There is no collosal issue being presented. Merely a difference of belieffs. You are trying to use a...
Writing FeedbackPaul16 - Jun 14, 2021 / Holt - Jun 15, 2021
|A breakdown of male and female inhabitants passing the driving test in a particular Asian nation
Writing Feedbackhuyenhoanglekhan - Jun 14, 2021 / Holt - Jun 15, 2021
|Traditional newspapers are believed to hold the most vital position among news readers
3 - You just need to paraphrase the statement: Although more and more people read news on the Internet, newspapers...
Writing Feedbackmorce183 - Jun 13, 2021 / niesaysi - Jun 14, 2021
|Bullying is a big problem in many schools. What do you think are the causes of this? Any solutions?
5 - In this sentence, you have incorrectly restated the idea from the topic (Bullying is a big problem in...
Writing FeedbackMinh Hang Le - Jun 13, 2021 / niesaysi - Jun 14, 2021
|WRITING TASK 1 : The line graph shows the percentage of New Zealand population from 1950 to 2050
4 - "From 1950 to 2050" is different from "between 1950 and 2050." In other words, "between...and" and "from...to" should...
Writing Feedbackthanhtrang - Jun 10, 2021 / niesaysi - Jun 14, 2021
|Some people argue job satisfaction is more important than job security.
3 - You should look over your essay because there are some basic mistakes like: "I tend towards the viewpoint...
Writing Feedbackmoe0 - Jun 12, 2021 / Paul16 - Jun 14, 2021
|Many think that artificially intelligence robots will do all jobs eventually. Do you agree or not?
Writing Feedbacknam2662004 - Jun 13, 2021 / Holt - Jun 14, 2021
|The budgets should be centered on illness prevention services by fostering a healthy lifestyle
2 - When you say"to a certain extent ", that indicates a limitation to your agreement. While saying " I...
Writing Feedbacknhinguyen2611 - Jun 13, 2021 / Holt - Jun 14, 2021
|The bar chart compares the number of crimes in five different countries of the world (1930-1980)
2 - A properly analyzed task 1 essay must be completed within 20 minutes and between 175 - 200 words. Though...
Writing Feedbackreginaphalangee - Jun 13, 2021 / Holt - Jun 14, 2021
|IELTS writing: the most common mistakes that students make when translating Vietnamese into English
2 - You should have included a clear reference to the fact that the info is based on collated opinion...
Writing Feedbackquynhhoang2k - Jun 12, 2021 / Holt - Jun 13, 2021
|IELTS task 2: EDUCATION-TEACHERS (both views and opinion)
2 - You are the author right? Why are you referring to yourself in 3rd person when your opinion should...
Writing FeedbackPaul16 - Jun 12, 2021 / Holt - Jun 13, 2021
|Should countries around the world establish close connections regarding culture and business?
2 - You need to better reference your restatement of the 2 ideas that were provided. Long sentences such as these...
Writing Feedbackimahunnn - Jun 12, 2021 / Holt - Jun 13, 2021
|Write a paragraph (110 - 150 words) about what job would you like to choose in the future.
2 - You do not really prove that your father's occupation and your exposure to it influenced you to become a...
Writing Feedbacklck283 - Jun 12, 2021 / Holt - Jun 13, 2021
|It is said that children are able to get their goals if they try their best to do it
2 - The first 2 sentences in your restatement paragraph do not reflect a version of the original. Rather, it is...
Writing FeedbackTrinh Mera - Jun 12, 2021 / Holt - Jun 13, 2021
|People being monitored are often unaware that this is happening - what you think about this?
2 - No such word. The word is simply "unaware", specially when describing an ongoing action. Wrong word...
Writing Feedbackunknown vn - Jun 12, 2021 / Holt - Jun 13, 2021
|IELTS WRITING TASK 2 - SAVING ANIMAL SPECIES
4 - You are expressing an unclear opinion, you both agree and disagree. You should choose one side and explain with...
Writing Feedbackstevenlxag - Jun 11, 2021 / Paul16 - Jun 12, 2021
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