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Writing IELTS Task 2 - Culture and Tradition

5 - The way you describe the problem is good and you have a quite concrete beginning, but in relation to...

Writing Feedbackkhanhu010101 - 2 days ago / MariaP24 - 6 hrs ago
Ielts writing task 2 animal exploitation

2 - In my opinion the wording of the answer is well executed, but you shouldn't be biased, because in the...

Writing FeedbackSweetinside - 9 hrs ago / MariaP24 - 6 hrs ago
Present received from someone

NEW - a self-help book On my latest birthday, I received a lovely present from my special friend. I was...

Writing Feedbackthuthao19321 - 11 hrs ago / — -
WRITING TASK 2 (CAUSE AND SOLUTION) - A LOTS OF HIGHLY QUALIFIED GRADUATES WITHOUT EMPLOYMENT

3 - @Holt Thanks for your comment ^^ I'll try to improve it !!...

Writing FeedbackJen Shin - 22 hrs ago / Jen Shin - 16 hrs ago
WRITING TASK 2: Global warming and the rise of sea levels. Problems associated to this and solution?

2 - Your discussion is really wrong and not properly focused. You have not managed to keep a focus on the...

Writing Feedbackhlosad - 21 hrs ago / Holt - 16 hrs ago
Writing task 2 : The cause and solution (stress from work)

4 - @Holt Yes. In the second paragraph I mentioned the reasons why people were stressed from their works. They are...

Writing FeedbackNgocanhdhsphn - 2 days ago / Ngocanhdhsphn - 22 hrs ago
Writing task 2: Argument essay (Food and Diet)

4 - @Holt so I have to write this essay in one-sided view, right?...

Writing FeedbackNhu ngo - 2 days ago / Nhu ngo - 1 day ago
Parents to show their children the way to become a significant person in the society

3 - Well the length of the passage does not meet the minimum length required. Moreover, there are some phrases that...

Writing Feedbacktranduchuytung - 1 day ago / mlee - 1 day ago
Nowadays, there are a number of people who are unable to read or write. Causes and solutions.

2 - Well, I think that it would be better if you can write more in the opening, although it is...

Writing Feedbackbdmqnh - 1 day ago / mlee - 1 day ago
IELTS WRT: CAUSES AND SOLUTIONS TO DEAL WITH OBESITY

3 - In the example you gave in the third paragraph, you should avoid using the word "you" in an essay,...

Writing FeedbackQuocHuu - 1 day ago / bdmqnh - 1 day ago
Only a few achieve the success in literature or writing fields

2 - You immediately changed the prompt discussion focus in your essay. Your restatement is off topic. You are being asked...

Writing FeedbackHannathao - 1 day ago / Holt - 1 day ago
Writing task 2: ADVERTISEMENT MAKES PEOPLE TO BUY UNNECESSARY THINGS.

2 - Band scoring is part of our advanced services. You can avail of band scoring either through our private review...

Writing Feedbackhannah1999 - 1 day ago / Holt - 1 day ago
Colour plays an important role in everyday life

3 - There is a problem with your prompt paraphrase. It does not accurately restate the prompt nor provide direct responses...

Writing Feedbackmlee - 1 day ago / Holt - 1 day ago
IELTS- Task 2: permanent job is more important than job satisfaction.

3 - There are 3 avenues for discussion in this essay that should have been properly represented in the prompt paraphrase....

Writing Feedbackbaotram1812 - 2 days ago / Holt - 1 day ago
IELTS Writing task 1 - Line graph and table about water use worldwide and water consumption

3 - You have too many run on sentences in every paragraph. This has affected the presentation format of your report....

Writing FeedbackFU YU WEI - 2 days ago / Holt - 1 day ago
Traffic and congestion - IELTS II: problem and solution

3 - You must outline your direct response to the questions in the prompt restatement. Direct question responses are part of...

Writing Feedbackcookie115 - 2 days ago / Holt - 1 day ago
Mental strength for success? - IELTS Writing task 2

3 - Firstly i have to say that your ideas, grammar, vocabularies are very well. However, stressors synonymous with stresses, so...

Writing FeedbackKimthoang98 - 2 days ago / Hannathao - 1 day ago
Writing task 2: newly built houses should follow the old style or people can choose freely

4 - @Holt Thank you for giving me your valid comment! It takes a time for me to understand and revise...

Writing FeedbackDiepVu99 - Aug 4, 2020 / DiepVu99 - 1 day ago
Many criminals commit crimes after they are set free. Opinion and solutions.

2 - In the beginnign when you put [personally, though], "though" seems to be an uneccesary filler word so I'd take...

Writing Feedbackbdmqnh - 2 days ago / tendo - 1 day ago
Various methods to get information - which are the most effective?

3 - You should properly restate the prompt for this essay and indicate which 3 methods of communication you will be...

Writing Feedbackamy322 - 2 days ago / Holt - 1 day ago
Some people believe that the salary plays the most vital role when opting for a job

2 - There is actually a direct question being asked in the essay. The question that was asked is what dictates...

Writing Feedbacklamdu - 2 days ago / Holt - 2 days ago
Rising gas prices is an impressive and effective way to decrease the traffic and polluted problem

5 - I think you should add an example for each body paragraph. it should be detail and more realistic such...

Writing Feedbackletrang1998 - Aug 8, 2020 / tishai - 2 days ago
IELTS WRITING; a recycling law is not a vital factor to change the public awareness of recycling

3 - I think your example like an explanation. An example should be more detail and realistic such as a story,...

Writing Feedbackwayne33 - Aug 10, 2020 / tishai - 2 days ago
It is argued that scientific findings should be implemented and controlled by the authorities

2 - This is only a 4 paragraph essay. It requires only 2 reasoning paragraphs. It does not require a 5...

Writing Feedbacknpthaooo - Aug 10, 2020 / Holt - 2 days ago
[IELTS] Many job seekers believe that the most vital part in their career is the salary level

3 - You have to rework your essay in terms of word count. The minimum word count is 250 per essay...

Writing Feedbackngvan0807king - Aug 10, 2020 / Holt - 2 days ago
IELTS TASK 2: It is beneficial for students to study with different teachers...

3 - @Holt Ah, I got it. Thank you so much for your contribution....

Writing FeedbackJasmineee - Aug 9, 2020 / Jasmineee - Aug 10, 2020
IELTS Cambridge 13 test 2 writing task 1: bar chart on households owning and renting accommodation

3 - I think you are showing me the outline of your report prior to your using an essay format for...

Writing Feedbackceliachiu - Aug 10, 2020 / Holt - Aug 10, 2020
Talent shows - a good method of finding talented people, or just entertainment?

3 - Ohh I think you're right! Thanks for your opinion. It's completely useful and practical....

Writing FeedbackPham Phuong Thao - Aug 9, 2020 / Pham Phuong Thao - Aug 9, 2020
Task II- It is thought by some that it is better to live in a city while others disagree

4 - @Holt Hi Holt, I couldn't disagree more! I believe my essay is discrete enough and has an acceptable format....

Writing Feedbackalistersingh - Aug 8, 2020 / alistersingh - Aug 9, 2020
{IELTS} Task 2: agriculture, famine

3 - @Holt Thanks a lot for the useful information! It's my first time writing an essay for tasks 1 and...

Writing FeedbackSoyValerie - Aug 9, 2020 / SoyValerie - Aug 9, 2020
{IELTS} Task 1: line and bar chart of monthly temperature and precipitation

3 - I have to offer you apologies because scoring is no longer part of the free essay review services at...

Writing FeedbackSoyValerie - Aug 8, 2020 / Holt - Aug 9, 2020
GRE Argument; Organization engineered a new breed of millet high in vitamin A

2 - *I just have some feedbacks with respect to grammar of your writing. - "Millet rich with Vitamin A" should...

Writing Feedbackkays - Aug 6, 2020 / JackieMahamn - Aug 9, 2020
The national news should be prioritized over international news as it may relate to our daily lives

2 - Hey! You have some good ideas with respect to your essay.I have a few suggestions that I feel can...

Writing Feedbackbaotram1812 - Aug 8, 2020 / DoctorWho - Aug 9, 2020
IELTS Writing task 2: Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged to control car ownership

3 - Hello! You have some good thoughts with your essay. Here are a few small suggestions I have for you....

Writing FeedbackDNFU - Aug 9, 2020 / DoctorWho - Aug 9, 2020
The use of the internet has brought many problems.

5 - Your restatement did not directly respond to the questions being asked. There are 2 questions that require you to...

Writing FeedbackRachelDo299 - Aug 8, 2020 / Holt - Aug 8, 2020
Implementing same national curriculum for students until entering college - GRE Issue

4 - @Holt Thank you very much for your feedback, much appreciated. I'll keep trying to improve my essay within your...

Writing Feedbackkays - Jul 25, 2020 / kays - Aug 7, 2020
GRE issue; Over the past year, our late-night news... Memorandum from business manager of TV station

3 - @Holt Thank you very much for your feedback, much appreciated. I'll keep trying to improve my essay within your...

Writing Feedbackkays - Jul 25, 2020 / kays - Aug 7, 2020
Ielts Task 2: advantages and disadvantages of economic development.

3 - Without the exact original prompt I cannot judge your response for accuracy. Kindly remember to post the prompt next...

Writing Feedbackltn1234 - Aug 7, 2020 / Holt - Aug 7, 2020
Writing task 1: The chart below shows the propotion of profits made from seven most viewed movies

2 - 261 words means that you took at least 40 minutes to write this task. You over wrote the reporting...

Writing Feedbackmaianht64 - Aug 7, 2020 / Holt - Aug 7, 2020
Are boarding schools (students can live there during the term) an excellent option for children?

3 - I believe that you just made up the prompt for this essay. Why do I say that? The prompt...

Writing Feedbacktung491 - Aug 7, 2020 / Holt - Aug 7, 2020
Today, TV channels provide man's sport shows more than women's sport shows, why? personal opinion?

3 - Your prompt paraphrase is incomplete. You did a good job restating the topic and responding to the personal opinion....

Writing Feedbacknhiuyen - Aug 7, 2020 / Holt - Aug 7, 2020
IS IT IMPORTANT TO OWN A HOME ?

3 - hey , there are some grammar mistakes in your writing , i would like to help fixed + when...

Writing Feedbackmonica0407 - Aug 6, 2020 / nhiuyen - Aug 7, 2020
IELTS WRITING TASK 2 : HOUSES VS APARTMENTS

3 - these are sentences you are wrong in grammar : fixed +regard to houses ,some ... +... are chosen to...

Writing Feedbacknotbythemoon - Aug 6, 2020 / nhiuyen - Aug 7, 2020
Write sentences to answer the questions: about a teacher

3 - Many thank @Holt Firstly, my teacher has a Vietnamese name, but if the Vietnamese name is left, the English...

Writing FeedbackTungTung - Aug 6, 2020 / TungTung - Aug 7, 2020
IELTS - Graph people who are 65 and over in Japan, Sweden, American

5 - Hi, I would like to give some opinions for your essay. Your essay is written well. Using fluctuation...

Writing FeedbackAnnaWaston - Aug 4, 2020 / kays - Aug 6, 2020
Whether people should choose high paid jobs that they dislike or low-paid jobs that they enjoy.

4 - Hi, I would like to provide my thoughts of your essay. Your essay has a very strong stance...

Writing FeedbackVeronica11 - Aug 5, 2020 / kays - Aug 6, 2020
IELTS- Task 2: Selection of students based on their qualifications

4 - Your opinion should not have been stated in the opening paraphrase. You should only be repeating the discussion instructions...

Writing Feedbackbaotram1812 - Aug 5, 2020 / Holt - Aug 6, 2020
It is argued that railways are taking over roads as the most important transport

3 - You are misleading the reader. YOu have changed the discussion topic and discussion slant because of your improper prompt...

Writing Feedbackgotruugotruugotr - Aug 5, 2020 / Holt - Aug 6, 2020
Influence of human beings on the world's ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loss.

3 - thank you !!!...

Writing Feedbackparadis_149 - Aug 2, 2020 / paradis_149 - Aug 5, 2020
Ielts task2: computers are considered to be the most crucial and noticeable invention

3 - This is not a comparative essay discussion. Why did you approach it as such? You cannot "partly" agree with...

Writing Feedbackminhquan20 - Aug 5, 2020 / Holt - Aug 5, 2020
Due to unemployment should students learn the work skills instead of studying?

4 - Your paragraph presentations tend to be confusing at times. The confusion most likely comes from your lack of proper...

Writing Feedbackminhthptbg - Aug 5, 2020 / Holt - Aug 5, 2020
Controversial information should be kept as secret or not.

3 - There are supposed to be 5 paragraphs for this essay: Par. 1: Prompt Paraphrase + discussion instruction Par. 2:...

Writing Feedbackemillia2003 - Aug 5, 2020 / Holt - Aug 5, 2020
Ielts Task 1: The table given depicts forest area in six distinct regions in 15 years from 1990

5 - Thank you very much Holt, now I realize that, this is my mistake. I am just afraid of not...

Writing Feedbackminhquan20 - Aug 5, 2020 / minhquan20 - Aug 5, 2020
Whether smartphones have caused more harm than good to our society.

6 - @Holt Thanks for your help. I'll try harder next time!...

Writing FeedbackVeronica11 - Aug 5, 2020 / Veronica11 - Aug 5, 2020
The Intake of four different kinds of meat in a European country

4 - You should merge the first and second paragraphs to create a single presentation. That way the sentences are not...

Writing Feedbacktraitorakali - Aug 5, 2020 / Holt - Aug 5, 2020
Some people assume that university education should be free of charge for all students

3 - There is a minimum of 3 sentences and a maximum of 5 sentences per paragraph. Your introduction and conclusion...

Writing Feedbacklekimha1999hy - Aug 4, 2020 / Holt - Aug 5, 2020
LIVING ALONE OR IN SMALLY FAMILY UNITS - POSITIVE OR NEGATIVE ?

3 - The paraphrase you created is missing one sentence to meet the minimum paragraph requirement. You did not paraphrase the...

Writing Feedbackbdmqnh - Aug 4, 2020 / Holt - Aug 5, 2020
Whether it is better to work as a team than as an individual to succeed

4 - @Holt Thank you so much!...

Writing FeedbackVeronica11 - Aug 4, 2020 / Veronica11 - Aug 4, 2020
IELTS Writing Part 2: HEALTH TOPIC / Walking

3 - You are using too many word fillers in this essay. You need to learn to open your paragraphs with...

Writing Feedbackjustikatanu - Aug 4, 2020 / Holt - Aug 4, 2020
IELTS WRITING PART 2 : EDUCATION and Exams

2 - Normally, the extent essay does not accept a "partly" response because it does not create a clear opinion for...

Writing Feedbackalice06 - Aug 4, 2020 / Holt - Aug 4, 2020

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