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|IELTS：Essay about people change the jobs frequently
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|essay about Techology in education
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|The growth of online shopping will one-day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing
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|should students have the same teacher for several years or have a new one each year?
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|Essay about the influence of advertising on small children
2 - Unfortunately, you did not write enough words for this essay for the examiner to consider giving you a passing...
Writing Feedbacklananhdoan2702 - 9 hrs ago / Holt - 5 hrs ago
|IELTS task 2: Essay about fast food is becoming increasingly popular in most countries.
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|Essay about improving standard of living through economic development..
2 - Your essay will definitely receive notable percentage deductions due to the 10 missing words that would have allowed you...
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|To solve the problem of crime is to provide people with a better education. Agree or disagree.
2 - Since this is a simple agree or disagree essay, you should not use the comparison format for the discussion....
Writing Feedbackhoanganh0124 - 1 day ago / Holt - 7 hrs ago
|Ielts: In some places, teenagers are motivated to get part-time jobs while they are still in school
Writing Feedbackhuyhoang02 - 1 day ago / huyhoang02 - 13 hrs ago
|IELTS WRITING TASK 2: Modern lifestyle means that many parents have little time for their children.
4 - according to my prosepective i agrre to the fact that with this modern lifestyle parent really find it hard...
Writing Feedbackmimi304 - May 31, 2020 / behty - 1 day ago
|A proposal is that the fuel price for every vehicle should be put up
Writing FeedbackDiepVu99 - 1 day ago / Holt - 1 day ago
|Communication via calling or texting?
2 - This essay asks you to take the first person approach to the discussion. Your examples and opinion should be...
Writing FeedbackDTMQ - 1 day ago / Holt - 1 day ago
|Lifelong lessons - Personal Eperience essay for CBEST.
Writing Feedbacksadat209 - 2 days ago / sadat209 - 1 day ago
|Punishment is necessary to help children distinguish between right and wrong
2 - This essay will get a failing score because it did not follow the required discussion format. Based on the...
Writing Feedbacklinhnguyen3108 - 2 days ago / Holt - 2 days ago
|Punish criminals and training courses and education offer
2 - As you did not include the original discussion instruction for this essay, I will omit reviewing it based on...
Writing FeedbackAmy9797 - 2 days ago / Holt - 2 days ago
|Working women culture affect juvenile development
2 - As an extent essay, you have to focus your response on showcasing why the argument in support of the...
Writing Feedbackmanan_pancholi - Jun 3, 2020 / Holt - 2 days ago
|IELTS: Whether to have a year to rest after high schools continues to be a controversial topic
2 - Your discussion is good but lacking. This comparison, not A/D essay is always discussed using the 5 paragraph format....
Writing Feedbackcatherinepan - Jun 3, 2020 / Holt - 2 days ago
|[IELTS TASK 2] Fixed or Flexible punishments for crimes.
4 - @Smile12_12 Thank you for your contribution. @Holt Thank you for your review. Your advices will help my upcoming essays....
Writing Feedbackhoalacanhdk - May 29, 2020 / hoalacanhdk - Jun 3, 2020
|People have been facing many environmental damages caused by gas emissions from private transport
5 - @Holt Yes, this is a practice test for Ielts Writing task 2, I'm still working on it. Based on...
Writing Feedbacklasouris - Jun 2, 2020 / lasouris - Jun 3, 2020
|Fatherhood out to be emphasised as motherhood, the idea that women are solely responsible for decidi
3 - Wow! You are using so many archaic words in his essay that the examiner will definitely see how you...
Writing FeedbackBhavi - Jun 3, 2020 / Holt - Jun 3, 2020
|MUSEUMS AND ART GALLERIES ARE NOT NEEDED TODAY
3 - You have written a good piece that is only marred by your vocabulary usage. You have chosen words that...
Writing Feedbackchinhsy2 - Jun 3, 2020 / Holt - Jun 3, 2020
|Every country should have a free health service even if this means that the latest medical treatment
Writing FeedbackBhavi - Jun 2, 2020 / kunalsikri - Jun 3, 2020
|Recently, abortion increases rapidly and becomes a controversial topic [IELTS]
3 - @chinhsy2 Yep, Thank you, got the conclusion error. However, I believe there must be more things to improve. Anyways,...
Writing Feedbackkunalsikri - Jun 2, 2020 / kunalsikri - Jun 2, 2020
|Some people today spend too much money on their phone. What do you think?
2 - I am preparing for IELTS as well and having hard time for correction so I would suggest you as...
Writing Feedbackdolphin93 - Jun 2, 2020 / kunalsikri - Jun 2, 2020
|The map below is the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. (cam 5 test 1)
Writing FeedbackNekoan - Jun 1, 2020 / Holt - Jun 2, 2020
|Nowadays young people spend too much of their free time in shopping malls.
2 - Your essay is incomplete. You need to post the complete prompt and the full 250 word minimum essay discussion...
Writing Feedbackthuyoanh159 - Jun 1, 2020 / Holt - Jun 1, 2020
|IELTS WRITING TASK 2: RADIO HAS TREMENDOUS EFFECT IN SHAPING PEOPLE'S IDEAS
2 - Your essay is going to get a failing score because you failed to show that you understood the discussion...
Writing Feedbackchinhsy2 - May 31, 2020 / Holt - Jun 1, 2020
|IELTS task1: Your friend has had his/her first book published
Writing Feedbacksat_8808 - May 29, 2020 / sat_8808 - Jun 1, 2020
|Essay about foreign visitors should pay more than local visitors for attraction - IELTS task 2
3 - Hi, I don't know if I'm capable of correcting your essay, however, there is an opinion I need...
Writing FeedbackSmile12_12 - May 29, 2020 / chinhsy2 - May 31, 2020
|TOFEL: Do you learn a new language by traveling to another country or in your own country?
2 - I can sense the effort that you placed into developing your response to the given discussion point. However, your...
Writing Feedbackyuier - May 31, 2020 / Holt - May 31, 2020
|Newly built houses - ESSAY IELTS WRITING TASK 2
3 - The prompt paraphrase still contains several original words from the original discussion presentation ( in local areas, be free...
Writing Feedbackhongnhung309 - May 31, 2020 / Holt - May 31, 2020
|IELTS WRITTING TASK 2 "Art classes should not be a compulsory subject"
4 - @quynh huong Hi, To this type of essay, in the introduction, you should paraphrase the topic In the thesis...
Writing Feedbackquynh huong - May 29, 2020 / Khangquynh257 - May 31, 2020
|The West Park Secondary School after the first construction in 1950 and development in 2010
Writing Feedbacksunaaa - May 30, 2020 / sunaaa - May 31, 2020
|"The death penalty is the best means of combating serious crimes."
Writing Feedbackheeyoung1079 - May 30, 2020 / heeyoung1079 - May 30, 2020
|Natural Resources - Explain a situation, using specific reasons and examples
3 - Correctness for spelling, punctuation, etc: 1. ... natural resources, such as animals, 2. ... importance of forests, which need...
Writing FeedbackKhangquynh257 - May 30, 2020 / syifabrina - May 30, 2020
|Genetic engineering is an important issue in society today. What is it's impact on the people?
2 - Your approach to the discussion is totally wrong. You need to accomplish the following first: 1. Give a...
Writing Feedbackdorisstse - May 30, 2020 / Holt - May 30, 2020
|Do you think being a celebrity is beneficial or troublesome?
2 - Okay, there are two discussion points offered int he original prompt. One for celebrities and one for athletes. So...
Writing FeedbackBen415 - May 30, 2020 / Holt - May 30, 2020
|The diagram demonstrates some proposed changes of the centre of a small town which named Islip
2 - You have to remember that the task 1 reporting essay requires you to present the information over a total...
Writing Feedbackvannam318 - May 30, 2020 / Holt - May 30, 2020
|Unemployment is a serious issue throughout the world. What should governments do to solve this issue
3 - technologies is making the unemployment is one of the pressing problems in the most countries.--> No THE, why is...
Writing Feedbackphuongtran2309 - May 23, 2020 / Khangquynh257 - May 30, 2020
|Spend money and save money. Discussion of both sides.
Writing FeedbackGATE - May 27, 2020 / thanhma07 - May 30, 2020
|Nowadays, the number of plants and animals is decreasing. What are the reasons and some solutions?
Writing FeedbackThu Nguyet - May 18, 2020 / Thu Nguyet - May 29, 2020
|Reasons why people commute to work by bicycle or by car - WRITTING
2 - You need uniformity in the way that you present your information to the reader. I do not advise the...
Writing Feedbackthanhma07 - May 29, 2020 / Holt - May 29, 2020
|Some people believe that longer imprisonment is the most effective method to lessen crime rate
Writing Feedbackbluewind - May 28, 2020 / Holt - May 29, 2020
|The dilemma of whether better opt to reside in apartments or tip in favor of living in houses
2 - Your essay does not flow naturally. The word "unequivocal" does not fit the statement you wrote. It sounds like...
Writing Feedbackkwason - May 28, 2020 / Holt - May 29, 2020
|Is online schooling as effective as in-class education ?
Writing FeedbackIcedMiloCanWrite - May 28, 2020 / Holt - May 29, 2020
|Are governments and corporations the only organizations that can enhance the environment?
Writing Feedbackthibe982001 - May 27, 2020 / thibe982001 - May 28, 2020
|The gap between the developed and the developing nations is increasing rapidly
3 - This is an issue that calls for immediate action. In my opinion, this sentence is not necessary. The prompt...
Writing FeedbackGATE - May 27, 2020 / RomanKoch - May 28, 2020
|What's better for students; to attending online classes or studying at traditional schools?
3 - Hi, While reading your essay, I feel it is very one sided. Your points in traditional school is...
Writing FeedbackHardy_tom - May 25, 2020 / IcedMiloCanWrite - May 28, 2020
|TOEFL The issue of the fuel's cost since the fuel itself has been fiercely polluting our environment
2 - You need an interesting hook for this essay. Your approach is unnecessary as you are giving a comparative discussion...
Writing Feedbackdan31652 - May 28, 2020 / Holt - May 28, 2020
|Benefits of Certified Nursing Assistant
2 - You have to clarify your thesis statement for this essay. If you are going to be discussing the progression...
Writing Feedbackahenry23 - May 27, 2020 / Holt - May 28, 2020
|(Ielts task1) how energy is used in an average Australian household and the greenhouse gas emissions
2 - For clarity requirements, you need to present the information from the charts (including the type of chart) in individual...
Writing FeedbackMrlong - May 27, 2020 / Holt - May 28, 2020
|TOFEL: choose a quality that you think is most important when doing a team project
Writing Feedbacklawyers - May 26, 2020 / lawyers - May 28, 2020
|Ielts2 - The equal amount of money to both medical research and the protection of environment
Writing Feedbackthuhabk - May 27, 2020 / thuhabk - May 28, 2020
|Do you like watching films at home or in the cinema? Why
7 - I wondering if the expression 'being freedom of myself' is correct. 'having freedom of myself' might be better? ...
Writing Feedbacklamkhanh - May 18, 2020 / Riley L - May 27, 2020
|Write-up for CPA Society's Magazine - Impact of Culture on the Accounting Profession
3 - Hi @Holt, thanks for such a thorough review!! Agreed on most counts. I did give some serious thoughts about...
Writing Feedbackckpckp1994 - May 27, 2020 / ckpckp1994 - May 27, 2020
|Task 1 - Line Graph indicates the average yearly money spent on mobile phones and stationary phone
5 - You could have done individually comparison like in one para you could have gave information about cellphone and in...
Writing FeedbackSam Sam Nguyen - May 18, 2020 / kamal_kour - May 27, 2020
|IELTS Writing Task 1 - money paid for books. (France, Italy, Germany, Austria,)
Writing Feedbackvuduytuandat - May 25, 2020 / kamal_kour - May 27, 2020
|More and more children are accessing the internet unsupervised at a younger age.
2 - There is a standard rule in writing the Task 2 test. To get a high score, keep sentences short...
Writing Feedbackkamal_kour - May 27, 2020 / Holt - May 27, 2020
|IELTS Task 2 It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food.
5 - Your essay is good, but it seems that the reason why government impose a higher tax on fast food...
Writing Feedbackjustinshek - May 26, 2020 / thuhabk - May 27, 2020
|ielts writing task2: wheter to accept bad situation or not?
3 - You failed to discuss the essay in the proper manner. You were supposed to provide a 5 paragraph essay...
Writing Feedbackhihithk - May 26, 2020 / Holt - May 27, 2020
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