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Sticky: [WRITING TASK 1] The average on cell phone, national fixed line amd international fixed line service

4 - @Hannah Robjn Thanks for your feedback. Maybe i typed too fast so i made a lot unexpected mistakes. I...

Writing Feedbackelliemiller - Oct 13, 2020 / elliemiller - Oct 14, 2020
Can discrimination be escaped?

NEW - I need a peer review on my rough draft for my future research paper. If someone can take a...

Writing Feedbackquynnesanity - 2 hrs ago / — -
Are famous celebrities 'role models' for young generations?

NEW - In many parts of the world, some famous people are considered 'role models', and they are having an increasing...

Writing Feedbackwslgods - 12 hrs ago / — -
Competition or cooperation in our society - IELTS 2

NEW - Topic: Some people think that competition at work, at school and in daily life is a good thing. Others...

Writing FeedbackHoangminh06 - 13 hrs ago / — -
The use of mobile phones should be banned in public places like libraries and shops. (Dis)agree?

3 - @Holt Thanks for your feedback...

Writing Feedbackthutran - Jul 22, 2024 / thutran - 14 hrs ago
The charts below give information about the number of hours that students study each day

NEW - The given chart revealed the details about the average number of hours students spend for education at five separate...

Writing Feedbackhaidang1010 - 14 hrs ago / — -
It is important for all towns and cities to have large public outdoor places like squares and parks.

2 - Kindly remember that you have to clearly format the essay using the expected paragraph presentation. You need 4 paragraphs,...

Writing FeedbackRamona07 - Jul 22, 2024 / Holt - 20 hrs ago
IELTS Academic Writing Task 1: Tables, Exports by Michael

NEW - You should spend about 20 minutes on this Task. The charts give information about the amount of exports (millions...

Writing FeedbackMichaelc - 1 day ago / — -
IELTS Writing task 1 - Production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000

2 - First of all, let me clarify the word count number for this task. You cannot write more than 200...

Writing Feedbacknhungcoi - 1 day ago / Holt - 1 day ago
Problems with overfishing and the Environment that is impacted

2 - You have too much going on in your head that tries to translate itself onto the paper. The first...

Writing Feedbackjak001 - Jul 22, 2024 / Holt - 1 day ago
Ielts writing task 2: To what extent has the internet made life more convenient?

2 - This is your personal opinion as the writer of this essay. It is not referred to in the...

Writing FeedbackMintlev - Jul 21, 2024 / Holt - 1 day ago
the merits and demerits of taking a gap year and your own opinion

NEW - In this contemporary era, such is taking a gap year a contentious issue that there has been increasing numbers...

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IELTS WRITING TASK 2: Essay about doing an enjoyable activity with a child and reading books

NEW - Task 2: Doing an enjoyable activity with a child can develop better skills and more creativity than reading. To...

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Essay about the proposed new town plan

NEW - The picture sketches a proposed new town outline. Overall, this land will be constructed innovative facilities and infrastructure, including...

Writing Feedbackindustrious - 2 days ago / — -
IELTS Writing Task 2: A majority of nations are striving forward to economic growth

NEW - Most countries aim to improve their standard of living through economic development, but many important social values can be...

Writing Feedbackthanhxia293 - Jul 24, 2024 / — -
Some universities offer online courses as an alternative to classes delivered on campus.

2 - This is an automatic failing essay since it only has 247 words in it. The main word requirement is...

Writing FeedbackQuangTa - Jul 21, 2024 / Holt - Jul 24, 2024
Writing Task 1: Daily oil production in four countries from 2000 to 2004

2 - Please remember the basic rule when it comes to writing a sentence. A sentence is composed of 1 idea...

Writing FeedbackYashainu - Jul 21, 2024 / Holt - Jul 24, 2024
The majority of news being reported is bad news such as wars, famines, accidents and crime.

NEW - Topic:The majority of news being reported is bad news such as wars, famines, accidents and crime. Why do you...

Writing FeedbackEmilia hihi - Jul 24, 2024 / — -
The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years.

2 - The summary overview needs one more sentence, that would help the paragraph achieve a 40 word presentation, to qualify...

Writing Feedbackleehyy - Jul 21, 2024 / Holt - Jul 24, 2024
The Impact of Divorce on Children and How it Affects their Childhood Development

2 - The presentation is mostly based on theories and academic studies. What we actually need more of in this presentation...

Writing Feedbackmslifka0326 - Jul 21, 2024 / Holt - Jul 24, 2024
Many think that in today's world it is very difficult for people to maintain a healthy lifestyle.

4 - Your essay does not meet the requirement of 250 words in Ielts Writing task 2 and try to improve...

Writing Feedbackvuthuha19 - Jul 17, 2024 / Yashainu - Jul 21, 2024
Soccer journey - an identity, an interest, or a talent that defines them in an essential way.

2 - The essay is too long. I found myself becoming bored by the third paragraph and wishing you would get...

Writing Feedbacknadine_pf - Jul 18, 2024 / Holt - Jul 19, 2024
What problem does cyber insecurity cause? How to solve it

2 - This term does not exist in the English vocabulary. Either you mean "hyper-connected" or "cyber connected". This lack...

Writing FeedbackThanhTai - Jul 18, 2024 / Holt - Jul 19, 2024
high school entrance exam - the most difficult time in your life

2 - Is this a statement meant to respond to an English writing task or are you writing this as an...

Writing Feedbackfefeq - Jul 18, 2024 / Holt - Jul 19, 2024
Writing Task 1 - The chart below ahows the percentage of female members of parliament in 5 European

3 - I think once the information in your paragraph matches the information in the graph, you will be set. You...

Writing Feedbacktikafebriyani - Jul 18, 2024 / nadine_pf - Jul 18, 2024
Many people around the world use social media every day to keep in touch with other people

2 - Your essay is over discussed and will not be completed within the 40 minute time frame. Aside from that,...

Writing Feedbacktaurus - Jul 17, 2024 / Holt - Jul 17, 2024
Universities and colleges are now offering qualifications through distance learning from the net

2 - The paraphrasing of the original topic is incorrect. You have not provided the correct field of focus for...

Writing FeedbackTong Phuong Anh - Jul 16, 2024 / Holt - Jul 17, 2024
Environmental protection is the responsibility of politicians, not individuals

2 - The question provided for the discussion is "To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement provided?"....

Writing Feedbackcuongng123 - Jul 17, 2024 / Holt - Jul 17, 2024
Without capital punishment our lives are less secure and crimes or violence increase.

3 - In fact, many -> Many part in -> part of police stations of Viet Nam -> police...

Writing Feedbackannguyenhoang - Jul 15, 2024 / taurus - Jul 17, 2024
Modern medical science has made it possible to combat many diseases.

3 - health care -> the health care known fatal in past time -> known as fatal in past time...

Writing FeedbackPooneh1994 - Jul 14, 2024 / taurus - Jul 17, 2024
Some countries achieve international success by building specialized facilities to train top athlete

2 - You are altering the original statement. There is no controversy. There is only a statement of fact. This...

Writing Feedbacktaurus - Jul 16, 2024 / Holt - Jul 17, 2024
Advertisements are becoming more and more common in everyday life. Is it a positive or negative

3 - Your essay contains several grammatical mistakes, you also relies too much on providing example instead of explain your points...

Writing Feedbacksundiee ne - Jul 13, 2024 / lanadelrey - Jul 16, 2024
How an island has change before and after the construction of tourist amenities

2 - The problem with this analysis is that you are not completely analyzing the before aspect of the map illustration....

Writing Feedbacklanadelrey - Jul 15, 2024 / Holt - Jul 15, 2024
[ WRITING TASK 1] The charts below show annual average spending on clothes per person in the US in

2 - Your summary overview should be at least 2 sentences long. You should add an enumeration of the sources of...

Writing Feedbackhana115 - Jul 14, 2024 / Holt - Jul 15, 2024
The diagram below shows how recycled paper is made. Summarise the information.

2 - Yes, an image was provided. It may be considered a picture. However, since it explains a 4 step...

Writing FeedbackHoangPhuong2010 - Jul 13, 2024 / Holt - Jul 15, 2024
Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport, while other people think

2 - This type of discussion requires you to use a comparison point of view for each reasoning paragraph. You must...

Writing Feedbacktheanh1204 - Jul 12, 2024 / Holt - Jul 15, 2024
It is a natural process for animal species to become extinct (e.g. dinosaur, dodo...)

2 - You have actually spent too much time justifying the causes of extinction as caused by man when you should...

Writing Feedbackevelynsayhii - Jul 12, 2024 / Holt - Jul 15, 2024
The chart below shows the amount of energy generated from wind in four countries from 1985 to 2000.

2 - Avoid writing in run-on mode for your summary overview. You are given a sentence allowance of 3-5 sentence per...

Writing Feedbackdaohientrang - Jul 10, 2024 / Holt - Jul 14, 2024
It is predicted that with the development of technology, people in the 21st century free time

2 - You did not respond to the given writing prompt. There is a question and request for reasons that...

Writing Feedbackpnhphuong - Jul 10, 2024 / Holt - Jul 14, 2024
Subjects such as Art, Sport and Music must being rejected from the school.Do you agree or disagree?

2 - The severe shortness of this discussion will ensure that it gets a failing score. Aside from the word count,...

Writing FeedbackLucasvn - Jul 10, 2024 / Holt - Jul 13, 2024
the advantages and disadvantages of shopping online.

2 - Well, your essay would get an automatic failing score because you wrote less than 250 words, did not follow...

Writing FeedbackDaz Nguyen - Jul 9, 2024 / Holt - Jul 13, 2024
Reasons and effects of income disparity between celebrities and politicians nowadays (IELTS task 2)

2 - Do not make boastful claims like these. There are some who would oppose this statement and say that...

Writing Feedbackhann130002 - Jul 7, 2024 / Holt - Jul 9, 2024
Discuss pros and cons of working or studying at home

2 - This is a misleading statement. There is no information nor reference in the original prompt that would indicate...

Writing FeedbackPerthy - Jul 7, 2024 / Holt - Jul 9, 2024
Many people believe that the increased interaction between nations through globalization

2 - What? You did not offer a writer's opinion with a thesis statement in the first paragraph. You did...

Writing FeedbackHarryNguyen041 - Jul 6, 2024 / Holt - Jul 6, 2024
IELTS WRITING TASK 2 : Many young people today change their jobs or careers every few years.

2 - Your English competency level is that of a beginner and yet, you are trying to use an advanced sentence...

Writing Feedbacklucyle0802 - Jul 6, 2024 / Holt - Jul 6, 2024
people should be able to keep all the money they earn and not pay tax to the state. agree or not

3 - While the idea of keeping all earned income sounds appealing in principle, it's important to consider the broader implications....

Writing Feedbacknorah14 - Jun 13, 2024 / markzily - Jul 6, 2024
The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income

3 - The chart highlights changes in how families allocated their weekly income in a specific country between 1968 and 2018....

Writing FeedbackAngrycat - Jul 3, 2024 / markzily - Jul 5, 2024
IELTS WRITING TASK 2- Some people think young people should be required to have full time education

2 - The term younger generations is too vague. Be more specific and limit the description to one closer to the...

Writing Feedbackdinhhieu2910 - Jul 4, 2024 / Holt - Jul 4, 2024
IELTS WRITING TASK 1 - MAP OF CENTRAL LIBRARY 20 YEARS AGO AND TODAY

2 - The summary overview should have at least 2 sentences in it. The image identification is lacking. You are indicating...

Writing Feedbackngocquyen - Jul 3, 2024 / Holt - Jul 3, 2024
write paragraph about avantages of playing sports

2 - There is no need to write a conclusion statement when you are being asked to develop a paragraph based...

Writing Feedbacklinda2 - Jul 2, 2024 / Holt - Jul 3, 2024
IELTS Task 2 - Essay on computers being the most important invention of the last century or not

2 - Kindly refrain from writing more than 300 words for the task 2 essay. This essay is composed of 440...

Writing Feedbackminhduc0806 - Jul 2, 2024 / Holt - Jul 3, 2024
IELTS WRITING TASK 1 - UNEMPLOYMENT

2 - Your report is difficult to read due to the lack of punctuation usage. The GRA score for this essay...

Writing Feedbackclaserpy - Jul 1, 2024 / Holt - Jul 3, 2024
Ielts writing task 1: average CO2 emissions per person in the UK, Sweden, Italy, Portugal

4 - The overall essay is good, but I recommend you compare the data of the countries rather than just stating...

Writing Feedbackkvpa915gstn - Jun 26, 2024 / ngocquyen - Jul 3, 2024
IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (PIE CHART) - TRANSPORTATION

3 - The lengths of your 2 paragraphs are not balanced, probably because of your approach to divide the information. I...

Writing Feedbacklinh_030671 - Jun 28, 2024 / ngocquyen - Jul 3, 2024
IELTS WRITING TASK 1 - GLOBAL MOBILE PHONE SALES BY BRAND

3 - Fascinating breakdown of global mobile phone sales trends from 2009 to 2013! Samsung and Apple saw substantial growth, while...

Writing Feedbackngocquyen - Jun 30, 2024 / markzily - Jul 2, 2024
IELTS Academic-Essay about whether group activities teach more important skills than individual ones

3 - Your essay makes a strong case for the valuable skills gained through group activities like communication and leadership. I...

Writing Feedbackbyn - Jun 30, 2024 / markzily - Jul 1, 2024
IELTS Academic Writing "Persuasive Power vs. Waning Influence: Debating the Impact of Advertising"

2 - You are writing a debate paper based on the given topic. Therefore, you should have a clear thesis statement...

Writing Feedbackjckian - Jun 27, 2024 / Holt - Jun 27, 2024
Friendships that take place online are not as meaningful as those where people meet each other face

3 - It's an interesting perspective on the value of friendships in today's digital age. While online friendships offer convenience and...

Writing Feedbackhoainhu - Jun 25, 2024 / markzily - Jun 27, 2024
task 2 social skills should be emphasized?

2 - You chose to use your first reasoning paragraph to introduce an explanation the topic, rather than a supporting statement...

Writing Feedbackngoc khue - Jun 24, 2024 / Holt - Jun 25, 2024
Pharmacy chose me - Graduate Statement of Purpose

3 - Thank you for the feedback. Very much appreciated....

Writing Feedbackshegzdr - Jun 23, 2024 / shegzdr - Jun 25, 2024

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