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the best way to understand other cultures is working in multinational organizations. agree/disagree

2 - The essay will get an automatic failing score with this type of response. The reasons are clear for...

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Popular hobbies and interests change over time and are more a reflection of trends and fashions

2 - There are only 202 words in this essay. That is an automatic failing score during an actual test. If...

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Public-Private Sector Interdependence: A Case Study of the "Visit Qatar" Tourism Drive

2 - Hello there Moncef. There was something too smooth and polished about this case study that you presented here for...

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ENG102: ROUGH DRAFT - OPIOID CRISIS

2 - A proper topic introduction should be presented in the first paragraph. The thesis statement, by format, should not contain...

Writing Feedback snbrigp3 - Sep 5, 2026Holt - Sep 5, 2026
ENG 102 Research Essay: Data Centers

2 - Hi Jason. I can only provide you with a limited review of your paper based on the questions you...

Writing Feedback CornyRex - Aug 28, 2026Holt - Aug 29, 2026
Essay based on the question "How should we celebrate our individual differences?"

3 - I think your personal experiences fit the question well specially the parts about being seen as the "weird kid"...

Writing Feedback ryvenne - Aug 22, 2026emillindberg - Aug 23, 2026
Fossil fuels, such as coal, oil and natural gas, are the main source for many countries.

3 - Your point is clear but I think the second paragraph is stronger than the first as the point about...

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Health and Diet - writing task

3 - @Holt thanks so much, dear....

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Should Students Be Allowed to Have Their Cell Phones at School During Emergencies?

3 - @Holt Thank you for the feedback!...

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Factors That Contribute to Long Term Recovery - ENG102

2 - I noticed that the paper seemed to written I a rushed manner. It is almost as if you were...

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IELTS Essay - Scientific Research

2 - I would like to remind you that the alloted writing time for this task is only 40 minutes. The...

Writing Feedback thanhdan00 - Aug 2, 2026Holt - Aug 2, 2026
Analyzing the Impact of Television Wardrobe Trends on Consumer Media Writing

2 - You might want to include references to actual clothing trends from television that actually made it to reality. Something...

Writing Feedback arthurmercer - Jul 24, 2026Holt - Jul 26, 2026
Even with improved access to education, a significant number of adults today remain illiterate. What

2 - Okay. The essay that you wrote is too long. You only have 40 minutes to write this paper in...

Writing Feedback thanhdan00 - Jul 18, 2026Holt - Jul 26, 2026
As a high schooler who is do her own entrepreneurship, This is my personal statement draft essay

2 - This is a wonderful personal statement that indicates all of the information you consider important to your application. It...

Writing Feedback sogemppangz - Jul 15, 2026Holt - Jul 23, 2026
English Draft Essay on The Dangers of Water Scarcity, looking to improve writing & citations

2 - The first paragraph feels empty aside from a single line of usable information. The rest of the content is...

Writing Feedback mia00978244 - Jun 26, 2026Holt - Jun 26, 2026
The best way to solve the world's environmental problem is to increase the price of fuel

2 - There is no appropriate prompt restatement provided in the opening paragraph. The information is a direct cut and paste...

Writing Feedback brian0408 - Jun 3, 2026Holt - Jun 5, 2026
Parents should encourage children to spend less time studying and more time doing physical activity

2 - While you can use this as a response to the essay, the score it will bring in for...

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Hamlet's progression through grief - advice on on final essay.

2 - Please allow me to commend you on doing your utmost best in developing this draft, without turning to AI...

Writing Feedback tlsmith - May 27, 2026Holt - May 28, 2026
The effects of vaping on teen health

2 - I believe that this would be improved much more if you present a comprehensive history of vaping at the...

Writing Feedback ellhdz - May 22, 2026Holt - May 23, 2026
Buying goods from all over the world - IELTS Essay Writing task 2

3 - I thank you for your genuine help of my essay Holt. I now clearly understand what to improve in...

Writing Feedback thanhdan00 - May 22, 2026thanhdan00 - May 22, 2026
The graph below shows information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries

2 - One of the main problems in your presentation is the lack of punctuation mark usage. This creates confusion while...

Writing Feedback ngocmyy - May 16, 2026Holt - May 16, 2026
Bring awareness to the Fentanyl Crisis - Essay for ENG102

2 - The first thing that I would have you check with your paper are your vocabulary usage and grammar. You...

Writing Feedback monica01 - May 4, 2026Holt - May 4, 2026
Discuss the relative news and people.

2 - This is not a reference that can be found in the original topic provided for discussion. This is...

Writing Feedback thebenjamin - May 3, 2026Holt - May 4, 2026
Four-type of housing - Report table chart in 2001 and in 2006

2 - The summary overview does not follow the required formatting for the presentation. It must summarize the information by indicating...

Writing Feedback thebenjamin - May 3, 2026Holt - May 4, 2026
Connected or Controlled? The reality of Social Media Use

2 - It is important that you do not start the essay in the middle of the presentation. Your first paragraph...

Writing Feedback gabriellaA - May 1, 2026Holt - May 3, 2026
The role of physical strength in sports - IELTS test

2 - While I admire your desire to show your capacity to use English words, oftentimes, you are not using the...

Writing Feedback raffaahmad - Apr 26, 2026Holt - Apr 27, 2026
News and Life Connection - Ielts 2 (agree or disagree?)

2 - Your reasoning approach to the essay is not on the level that the examiner will be expecting. Since this...

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English Essay Assignment-People should work out more

3 - If you want to get a higher score, you should include personal view point, real life examples and more...

Writing Feedback Trevortheman - Apr 23, 2026Tamphan - Apr 24, 2026
Responsibility and principles

2 - A personal definition of responsibility would be a fantastic way of opening this opinion essay. What is responsibility in...

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Essay for ENG 102 - Mental Health Crisis

2 - The writing contained in this paper is very choppy. The tone is not consistent. It provides giveaway AI written...

Writing Feedback FufuBalbastro - Apr 19, 2026Holt - Apr 19, 2026
Ethnic studies - College Essay (MLA)

2 - The essay sounds repetitive at times and does not seem to move forward in terms of information dissemination. The...

Writing Feedback Haqiqkhan4456 - Apr 5, 2026Holt - Apr 12, 2026
Helping The Homeless: Whose Problem Is It?

2 - There are a few grammatical concerns that need to be corrected in the essay. You can easily spot these...

Writing Feedback Ademing67 - Apr 11, 2026Holt - Apr 12, 2026
Essay for ENG102 - The Present Dangers of AI: Causing More Harm Than Good

3 - @Holt Thank you for you for reading my paper and for your feedback! However, I wanted to correct your...

Writing Feedback DALS1 - Apr 9, 2026DALS1 - Apr 9, 2026
Challenges & Learnings from Running a Small Museum in Virginia

2 - I had a sense that this essay was AI generated, I ran it through a few tests and was...

Writing Feedback rixcy - Apr 2, 2026Holt - Apr 3, 2026
Unconscious Bias in the Maternal Health Care - Undergraduate Essay

2 - I think that the first thing you should do is fix the format of the paper. It is not...

Writing Feedback dedee79 - Mar 27, 2026Holt - Mar 29, 2026
Limiting Cruise Ship Tourism to Protect Coastal Communities

2 - The content of this essay is not human written. It is coming across as 95 % AI generated. It...

Writing Feedback Nicajah05 - Mar 27, 2026Holt - Mar 29, 2026
ENG 102- Teaching Religion in Public Schools: Is it rude to speak of Religion and Politics?

2 - This is a well written essay that focuses properly on the discussion of religion in relation to upbringing, morality,...

Writing Feedback smithjarod325 - Mar 27, 2026Holt - Mar 29, 2026
Mental health awareness in schools

2 - The format of the paper is very AI generated. You kept the bullet points intact, which is a dead...

Writing Feedback Gflun5 - Mar 26, 2026Holt - Mar 27, 2026
IELTS Writing Task 2 - Some think that young people should be free to choose any career they like

2 - You have to understand that I cannot help you improve your writing skills for as long as you use...

Writing Feedback anuse25 - Mar 9, 2026Holt - Mar 13, 2026
IELTS Writing Task 2 - In many workplaces online communication has overtaken face to face meetings

2 - Come on, stop fooling yourself. You cannot ask me to assess an essay that is 100% AI generated in...

Writing Feedback anuse25 - Mar 2, 2026Holt - Mar 2, 2026
Healthcare Worker Burnout Research paper (ENG102)

2 - I am not going to respond to your questions when you are asking me to review a research paper...

Writing Feedback dysonsam - Feb 26, 2026Holt - Feb 28, 2026
Talking to a restaurant business owner - IELTS General Writing Task 1

2 - This letter could have been better formatted. You could have opened with the reminder to Mr. John about how...

Writing Feedback skatare100 - Feb 25, 2026Holt - Feb 27, 2026
The Effect of Social Media on the Mental Health of College Students

2 - This is one of the better, I would say 50-50 split, AI and human writing papers that has been...

Writing Feedback dhwani - Feb 21, 2026Holt - Feb 21, 2026
IELTS Writing Task 2 - More and more people participate in extreme sports

2 - The prompt restatement is well done. It does not deviate from the original topic and the writer's opinion shows...

Writing Feedback anuse25 - Feb 16, 2026Holt - Feb 16, 2026
IELTS Writing task 2 - Agree & Disagree - Topic Transport (Cyclists should pass a test)

2 - A suggestion is different from an argument. This shows a lack of English vocabulary skills on your part. by...

Writing Feedback Mon4615 - Feb 15, 2026Holt - Feb 16, 2026
IELTS Writing Task 2 - Many museums charge for admission while others are free

2 - Your prompt restatement is inaccurate and will receive a failing TA score. You are referencing reasons as a part...

Writing Feedback anuse25 - Feb 9, 2026Holt - Feb 9, 2026
Clean water. Free or charged?

2 - It is incorrect for you to make a presumptive statement in the prompt restatement section. You are to...

Writing Feedback quasal - Feb 7, 2026Holt - Feb 8, 2026
Rising prevalence of travelling.

2 - While the essay comes in at more than the minimum word requirement, it does not fully allow the examiner...

Writing Feedback quasal - Feb 6, 2026Holt - Feb 8, 2026
Technology regarding relationship. Positive or negative?

2 - The essay is well developed and written in a highly coherent manner. It successfully transitions within sentences, for the...

Writing Feedback quasal - Feb 6, 2026Holt - Feb 8, 2026
IELTS TASK 2: Younger people replacing older people at work

2 - You need to learn how to properly allot your time when writing the task 2 essay. The more common...

Writing Feedback quasal - Feb 5, 2026Holt - Feb 6, 2026
IELTS Writing Task 2 - Newspapers have a significant influence on people's ideas and opinions

2 - The essay shows a good thought process coming from you. You obviously brainstormed the content of the essay prior...

Writing Feedback anuse25 - Feb 2, 2026Holt - Feb 2, 2026
Wirting Ielts part 2: Pros & Cons remote natural

2 - The essay counts only 246 words in the total writing, which means this essay would receive an automatic failing...

Writing Feedback HelenNguyen712 - Feb 1, 2026Holt - Feb 2, 2026
Procrastination is a Primary Cause of Low-Quality Academic Work - English 102

2 - The paper is badly missing an effective thesis statement at the start. This can easily be remedied by combining...

Writing Feedback ecelaya - Feb 1, 2026Holt - Feb 2, 2026
Writing Part 2 - Discuss and give opinion about Television

2 - This statement will make the restatenebt+ writer's opinion paragraph fail. The lack of your opinion statement, which would...

Writing Feedback thebenjamin - Jan 29, 2026Holt - Jan 31, 2026
The Government Should Provide Free Public Libraries - IELTS WRITING TASK 2

2 - The topic restatement will not pass the plagiarism check of the test. You have used almost 80 of the...

Writing Feedback datmt333 - Jan 28, 2026Holt - Jan 31, 2026
IELTS Writing Task 2 - Many countries are experiencing population growth and need to build more home

2 - While this is an acceptable presentation that will receive a fair scoring consideration, it is not totally within the...

Writing Feedback anuse25 - Jan 26, 2026Holt - Jan 27, 2026
Some people think that a job provides not only an income but also a social life.

2 - You need not repeat the discussion instruction to the examiner. You will receive point deductions for not meeting...

Writing Feedback danh123 - Jan 23, 2026Holt - Jan 24, 2026
People In Developed Countries living Alone Or In Small Family Units - IELTS WRITING TASK 2

3 - @Holt Thank you so much for your feedback to my essay. You're absolutely right! I spent nearly 50...

Writing Feedback datmt333 - Jan 19, 2026datmt333 - Jan 21, 2026
Australia physical activity - For ESL

2 - The first error in the presentation can be found in the summary overview. You did not completely identify the...

Writing Feedback plaxnew - Jan 18, 2026Holt - Jan 19, 2026
IELTS Writing Task 2 - The best way to reduce traffic accidents is to raise the age limit

2 - There is a discussion disconnection in this essay. Although the restatement and writer's opinion is very well presented and...

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