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|Ielts Writing task 2- Banning the use of mobile phones
2 - The opening, structure and conlusion of your essay is good, But there are mistakes in grammar and sentence formations....
Writing FeedbackHuyBryce - 5 hrs ago / sujith1993 - 4 hrs ago
|UK school spending - How to describe a pie chart in Ielts 8 writing task 1 ?
Writing FeedbackKaren Chick TY - Aug 13, 2019 / Karen Chick TY - 5 hrs ago
|Letter to a friend asking for help with translation of documents
3 - @coke Hi there. Thanks for consistently being a member of the forum. I hope you're doing well. I'll try...
Writing Feedbackcoke - 18 hrs ago / Maria - 10 hrs ago
|Ielts writing task 2 - technology impact on tradition
4 - @coke OK~thank you! I think maybe I should add more details there to explain my idea, so it would...
Writing Feedbackjocelyne001 - 20 hrs ago / jocelyne001 - 11 hrs ago
|Some people think that it is best to live in a horizontal city while others think of a vertical city
3 - Hello~ Personally speaking, I think you can explain more about this topic in the first phrase because you...
Writing Feedbackvuvietha - 14 hrs ago / jocelyne001 - 11 hrs ago
|Working before studying - paper
3 - @Cuong Trinh Hello! I have some suggestions for you 1. before coming to going to/attending the university 2....
Writing FeedbackCuong Trinh - 1 day ago / Veranda - 13 hrs ago
|You have seen an advertisement for a weekend job as a local tour guide showing visitors the city
Writing FeedbackQuoccuong - Aug 16, 2019 / coke - 18 hrs ago
|How to convince about an Open Education Organization's activities and goals
4 - Open Education Organization is dedicated to serve the needs of the Afghan women and girls in provinces by providing...
Writing Feedbackmasomakarimi - 1 day ago / masomakarimi - 20 hrs ago
|Pie charts - Result of surveys of visitor satisfaction-IELTS Writing task 1
2 - Hello~ I think the essay is generally good, only a little suggestion. Maybe you can try to change...
Writing FeedbackRhiza - 1 day ago / jocelyne001 - 1 day ago
|Work commuting transportation - Ielts writing task 1 pie charts
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|Factors contributing to job satisfaction and the prospect of job satisfaction for all workers.
Writing FeedbackVeranda - 1 day ago / Veranda - 1 day ago
|Essay about climate change and bringing awareness. (Rough Draft)
3 - @landon7192 Hi. Welcome, dear! All of this feedback is geared towards helping you in your writing endeavors. I hope...
Writing Feedbacklandon7192 - 2 days ago / Maria - 1 day ago
|Congressional Nomination Essay - beyond graduation from the Naval Academy
3 - @colt2002 Hi. It's good to see you here. As always, I truly hope this feedback becomes useful for you....
Writing Feedbackcolt2002 - Aug 17, 2019 / Maria - 1 day ago
|IELTS WRITING TASK 2: children are becoming overweight and unhealthy
4 - @longbango Hi there. Welcome to the forum. If you find this feedback helpful, I hope you come back for...
Writing Feedbacklongbango - Aug 16, 2019 / Maria - 1 day ago
|Some people believe that the host country should welcome cultural differences.
6 - I think it's better not to repeat too many times the same words from the title such as cultural...
Writing FeedbackKerlion - Aug 15, 2019 / jocelyne001 - 1 day ago
|ESSAY ABOUT INVESTING TO FAST-TRAIN OR PUBLIC TRANSPORTATION
3 - @GotoIelts Hi! I have some suggestions to improve your essay: 1. whether the government should spend. ("whereas" is inappropriate...
Writing FeedbackGotoIelts - Aug 16, 2019 / Veranda - 1 day ago
|An opinion: if someone pays for a private school, he or she also supports the state education system
3 - @emins Hello! I have some suggestions to improve your essay. 1. You should not explain anything in the introductory...
Writing Feedbackemins - 2 days ago / Veranda - 1 day ago
|IELTS Task1: the number of visitors and result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were
3 - Thank you so much Maria! Your suggestion is really helpful for me. Can you also give me some comment...
Writing Feedbackanggietw - Aug 16, 2019 / anggietw - 1 day ago
|A good sports person or musician are born or can be taught?
Writing FeedbackVeranda - 2 days ago / Veranda - 1 day ago
|Ielts writing task 2: education distance learning is quite efficient and convenient
Writing Feedbackjocelyne001 - 2 days ago / jocelyne001 - 1 day ago
|The report about ten nations dominating the world in the rice industry in thousands of tons
Writing FeedbackHannah Trang - Aug 16, 2019 / Hannah Trang - 2 days ago
|IELTS Writing TASK 1: Languages with the most native speakers
Writing FeedbackDanggDang - 2 days ago / DanggDang - 2 days ago
|Families who send their children to private school shouldn't pay taxes that support education system
5 - You should try avoiding using in conclusion as a way to close your essay out you want to have...
Writing FeedbackTrinhca - Aug 14, 2019 / colt2002 - 2 days ago
|IELTS Task1: Money Spent and Consumption of Fast Food in Britian
2 - @Rae Zhang Hello. Welcome here. I hope you're doing well in your learning journey. If you find this feedback...
Writing FeedbackRae Zhang - Aug 16, 2019 / Maria - 2 days ago
|IELTS TASK 1 (GENERAL) You are studying for a qualification, and you need some time off work
2 - @KAURNAVI Hello. It's nice to see people constantly coming back to the forum. I hope you find this feedback...
Writing FeedbackKAURNAVI - Aug 16, 2019 / Maria - 2 days ago
|Essay task 1 : the change in percentage of people joinning in seven sports in an European country
2 - @ronaldocr9803 Hi. Welcome to the forum! I hope you find this feedback helpful. If you do, you can come...
Writing Feedbackronaldocr9803 - Aug 16, 2019 / Maria - 2 days ago
|The climate changing - even more crucial than species extinction?
4 - With the advent of technology, environmental problems affecting the earth inadequately. One of these troubles is the loss of...
Writing Feedbackf22542727 - Aug 14, 2019 / KAURNAVI - Aug 16, 2019
|WRITING IELTS TASK 1: The process of milk production
Writing Feedbackzigzagboy001 - Aug 15, 2019 / zigzagboy001 - Aug 15, 2019
|The restoration of old buildings in major cities around the world costs enormous amounts of money
2 - @KAURNAVI Hello. It's great to see how enthusiastic you have been with all of this. I hope you find...
Writing FeedbackKAURNAVI - Aug 14, 2019 / Maria - Aug 15, 2019
|IELTS TASK 1(GENERAL) an advertisement for a community college that needs teachers for night classes
2 - @KAURNAVI Hi. Thanks for returning here! I hope to provide you with writing feedback for your essay. The...
Writing FeedbackKAURNAVI - Aug 14, 2019 / Maria - Aug 15, 2019
|Writing IELTS TASK 1: World Meat Production, 1950-1990
Writing FeedbackGrahyta24 - Aug 12, 2019 / ahsan_daniyal - Aug 14, 2019
|Some people think that newspapers are the best way to learn news
Writing Feedbackluuly24052002 - Aug 14, 2019 / Trinh Duy Hung - Aug 14, 2019
|Task 2: Internet problems and needed solutions like more rigorous regulations
3 - @Maria Thank you for spending time with my essays and giving me feedbacks! I really appreciate it...
Writing FeedbackThangnguyen315 - Aug 13, 2019 / Thangnguyen315 - Aug 14, 2019
|(150 words) support the argument that secondary school students shouldn't play too much
2 - ... students are had not better not to waste their time ... There are tons of some undeniable...
Writing Feedbackieltsforbest - Aug 14, 2019 / Grahyta24 - Aug 14, 2019
|More and more students are choosing to study at colleges and universities in a foreign country.
2 - In this globalization era, it can be seen that the number of students choosing to ... countries who study...
Writing Feedbackflinny_soll - Aug 14, 2019 / Grahyta24 - Aug 14, 2019
|IELTS TASK 2 The qualities and skills that a person requires to become successful
2 - You wrote the essay very good and also used uncommon words, such as triumphant, vehemently espouse, etc. I...
Writing FeedbackKAURNAVI - Aug 14, 2019 / Grahyta24 - Aug 14, 2019
|The pictures illustrate how Meadowside Village and its neighbouring town Fonton have developed
Writing Feedbackmoon812 - Aug 13, 2019 / moon812 - Aug 14, 2019
|Food waste is one of the biggest problems facing mankind today
3 - @Maria Thank you for your feedback. I've tried replacing the second sentence of my first paragraph by:" There are...
Writing FeedbackAnthony VuNguyen - Aug 13, 2019 / Anthony VuNguyen - Aug 14, 2019
|What does matter more: teaching domestic or international history?
3 - @vulong79 Hello there. Seeing as you are new here, I welcome you to the forum! I hope you find...
Writing Feedbackvulong79 - Aug 13, 2019 / Maria - Aug 13, 2019
|Job satisfaction. Is it possible to achieve this by all employees?
2 - @min0822 Hi there. Welcome back here to the forum. I hope you find this feedback helpful for your writing...
Writing Feedbackmin0822 - Aug 13, 2019 / Maria - Aug 13, 2019
|Causes and Results of Rising Global Population
2 - @jocelyn wang Hello. I hope you're learning from the feedback you're gathering here. I'm here to provide you with...
Writing Feedbackjocelyn wang - Aug 11, 2019 / Maria - Aug 13, 2019
|IELTS2- READING BOOKS VS COMPUTER & TV
2 - I think you should focus more on why you agree that reading is better for children. The second paragraph...
Writing Feedbacks410377088 - Aug 13, 2019 / min0822 - Aug 13, 2019
|More physical education lessons in schools to control the obesity
Writing Feedbackhusimplicity - Aug 12, 2019 / husimplicity - Aug 13, 2019
|IELTS writing task 2- global warming - cause and solution
Writing FeedbackTienhjhjhj0201 - Aug 13, 2019 / Tienhjhjhj0201 - Aug 13, 2019
|IELTS Writing Task 1 - Car ownership in Canada; how many citizens owns one car or more
Writing FeedbackA Jhaveri - Aug 11, 2019 / s410377088 - Aug 13, 2019
|IELTS task 1: sales of fairtrade-labeled coffee and bananas
3 - Try to post the picture on your article next time~ In your introduction, try to rephrase the sentence...
Writing Feedbackmin0822 - Aug 11, 2019 / s410377088 - Aug 13, 2019
|Solving traffic problems by taxing people who possess a car
2 - For the intro, you should: first, paraphrase the question. for example: Governments raise private car taxes and use the...
Writing Feedbacknguyenduc - Aug 12, 2019 / Grahyta24 - Aug 12, 2019
|The amount of goods transported in the UK from 1974 to 2002 included road, water, rail, pipeline
Writing Feedbacktienphuoc287 - Aug 11, 2019 / tienphuoc287 - Aug 12, 2019
|The number of queries collected by the Tourist Information Office over six months - IELTS1
Writing Feedbackhohatrang2002 - Aug 10, 2019 / hohatrang2002 - Aug 11, 2019
|Vocational training. There is a lack of qualified workers such as electricians and plumbers.
2 - Hi Chaule, I suppose the topic is vocational traning not vacational training. There are some spelling mistakes and...
Writing Feedbackchaule_17897 - Aug 11, 2019 / jocelyn wang - Aug 11, 2019
|Ielts 10 test 1 Australian household energy use - charts work
2 - 1.You can paraphase the question at the beginning of the essay 2. ... other appliance also account for ......
Writing Feedbackcarolwong625 - Aug 11, 2019 / min0822 - Aug 11, 2019
|You can buy everything from internet nowadays. Online shopping phenomenon.
2 - @angelvyle Hi there. Welcome! I'll provide you with writing feedback here on your essay. Firstly, I highly recommend...
Writing Feedbackangelvyle - Aug 11, 2019 / Maria - Aug 11, 2019
|Books and experience are fundamental tools to gain knowledge
3 - @hhhaye Hello there. Welcome to the forum. I hope you find this feedback helpful for your writing endeavors. ...
Writing Feedbackhhhaye - Aug 8, 2019 / Maria - Aug 10, 2019
|IELTS2- problem/solution essay: Not enough students choose science subjects in universities
3 - @s410377088 Hi there. Welcome back to the forum. I hope you find the feedback you see here to be...
Writing Feedbacks410377088 - Aug 9, 2019 / Maria - Aug 10, 2019
|Global climate change: individuals and government role
2 - @Winter Hello. It's nice to see you again here! I'm here once more to provide you with writing feedback....
Writing FeedbackWinter - Aug 10, 2019 / Maria - Aug 10, 2019
|An essay about discussing when it's better for children to learn a new language.
2 - @JackieMahamn Hi there. I'll provide you with writing feedback. I'm happy to see you here again! Keep being an...
Writing FeedbackJackieMahamn - Aug 9, 2019 / Maria - Aug 10, 2019
|IELTS TASK 2 : Everybody should donate a fixed amount of their income to support charity
2 - @amira11545 Hi there. Thanks for being back here! I'm here to give feedback on this essay. I hope you...
Writing Feedbackamira11545 - Aug 8, 2019 / Maria - Aug 10, 2019
|IELTS Writing task 1: Plan A below shows a health centre in 2005. Plan B shows the same place now
2 - @thuithuidangiu Hello there. You're welcome in advance! Just reach out to us if you have any other concerns or...
Writing Feedbackthuithuidangiu - Aug 8, 2019 / Maria - Aug 10, 2019
|A rising trend nowadays that urban residents live in small families instead of large families
2 - Your ideas for this essay is good, but be careful of overusing relative clauses. And try to express straightforward,...
Writing Feedbackrivathh - Aug 8, 2019 / thaolinhnguyen - Aug 9, 2019
|Effects of detailed crime descriptions
2 - @Winter Hello ! hope you find comment helpful: The overall structure is clear. Just little suggestion here. Undeniably, crime...
Writing FeedbackWinter - Aug 7, 2019 / htc - Aug 9, 2019
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