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|Sticky: [WRITING TASK 1] The average on cell phone, national fixed line amd international fixed line service
4 - @Hannah Robjn Thanks for your feedback. Maybe i typed too fast so i made a lot unexpected mistakes. I...
Writing Feedbackelliemiller - Oct 13, 2020 / elliemiller - Oct 14, 2020
|Air pollution's problems, its effect on Earth's creatures, and possible solutions
NEW - Writing Task 2: Air Pollution. People are doing many things that make air pollution, and it has made...
Writing FeedbackNguyen Thu Thuy - 10 hrs ago / — -
|Schools should emphasize national literature and history for various reasons
NEW - The importance of literature and history for pupils I feel that school should emphasize national literature and history...
Writing FeedbackPham Hoai Trang - 10 hrs ago / — -
|With the flourish of technology, working online has increasingly emerged as a new development
NEW - distance working pros and cons With the flourish of technology, working online has increasingly emerged as a new...
Writing FeedbackHiimmy - 10 hrs ago / — -
|Beside maximizing profit, all the companies should care about making benefits for society
Writing Feedbacknnbapbap - Sep 23, 2021 / skinnypeter - 11 hrs ago
|Writing task 2: University or college is the best route to a successful career
3 - Your essay is so cohesive and logical, but you should have divided the body of the essay into 2...
Writing Feedbackmegazetz - Sep 23, 2021 / skinnypeter - 11 hrs ago
|Love always wins! REVIEW OF A FILM
Writing Feedbackisamj - Sep 11, 2021 / hazelbas - 12 hrs ago
|IELTS WRITING TASK 2 - ENVIRONMENT PROBLEMS: THE LOSS OF ANIMALS AND PLANTS OR OTHER ISSUES?
9 - @Ranee This needs improvement in grammar and sentence structure. It might help to construct short sentences. Good luck....
Writing FeedbackRanee - Sep 14, 2021 / hazelbas - 12 hrs ago
|Four main reasons why teenagers from one African country use their phones
NEW - results of surveys about mobile phones in Africa The pie charts demonstrate the proportion of 4 primary reasons...
Writing Feedbackcinaque - 13 hrs ago / — -
|Ielts - data on the spendings of citizens in the UK on three categories of fast food in 1990
2 - Seperate the data presentation. Pizza was consumed ata different financial representation. Do not assume shared data. This error...
Writing FeedbackMinhhanh5120 - 1 day ago / Holt - 13 hrs ago
|IELTS writing academic about divorce; spikes in break-ups and divorces
2 - The prompt restatement is acceptable. The opinion part though, is not represented at all since there are no direct...
Writing Feedbackngochanh123 - 2 days ago / Holt - 13 hrs ago
|The process of transforming geothermal energy from cold water into electricity
NEW - Please help me better my writing by giving your feedbacks on my structure, grammar, vocabulary and idea. I will...
Writing FeedbackPikaNam - 14 hrs ago / — -
|The prompt: Many people leave their home country and go to other countries to live and work.
NEW - MANY PEOPLE LEAVE THEIR HOME COUNTRY AND GO TO OTHER COUNTRIES TO LIVE AND WORK. WHY DO YOU THINK...
Writing FeedbackThuyan1211 - 21 hrs ago / — -
|The map with potential sites for two new shopping malls & major transportation features of a town
NEW - Task 1 - Planned Shopping Centre Locations Given is a town planning map that reveals the potential sites...
Writing FeedbackZZack0501 - 1 day ago / — -
|Given are the pie charts comparing two sexes in terms of the proportion of occupations in the UK
2 - Clarify that the pie charts for each gender is seperate. This confusing reference to the number of pie...
Writing Feedbackpapcaii - Sep 23, 2021 / Holt - 1 day ago
|ESSAY ABOUT THE REASONS AND SOLUTIONS OF WATER POLLUTION
2 - This is not a direct response to the reason and solution question presented. A lack of discussion topic...
Writing FeedbackHarper - Sep 23, 2021 / Holt - 2 days ago
|The two pictures illustrate how the layout of the ground floor in this house will be changed
2 - The word presentation, though passing in minimum consideration, does not allow for a maximum scoring consideration. If the writer...
Writing Feedbackambery - Sep 23, 2021 / Holt - 2 days ago
|Increasing the price of fuel as the optimal solution to solve environmental problems
2 - The prompt restatement should never be over discussed. The topic presentation should not alter the original presentation by digressing...
Writing Feedbacknartarus2000 - Sep 22, 2021 / Holt - 2 days ago
|The number of students in both genders who graduated in Canada between 1992 and 2007
4 - Started Starting is the number/quantity of both female and male students are were finish finished can could goes went...
Writing Feedbackivyisstudying - Sep 14, 2021 / papcaii - Sep 23, 2021
|IELTS Essay about DANGEROUS SPORTS needed
2 - The first paragraph does not provide a restatement + opinion. Rather, the writer entered into a direct discussion in...
Writing Feedbackjangchul - Sep 21, 2021 / Holt - Sep 23, 2021
|The amount of people who took train at London Underground Station in a day for sixteen hours
4 - I can spot some grammar errors in your essay as below for your review: Overall, people generally take...
Writing Feedbackmonicaaa0017 - Sep 18, 2021 / Kim2989 - Sep 23, 2021
|Discuss both views. Cheap products or long lasting product. This is an IELTS essay
Writing Feedbacktuonghuy - Sep 21, 2021 / tuonghuy - Sep 22, 2021
|Lots of teenagers today would rather socialize online than communicate in person
2 - Repetitive word meaning. Both refer to the 21st century. Use one reference only. There is no need...
Writing Feedbackqnhuluong - Sep 21, 2021 / Holt - Sep 22, 2021
|How to build the medical health care system
2 - This is not an acceptable statement response. Consider the focus of the prompt which is building a health care...
Writing FeedbackPubricahealth - Sep 21, 2021 / Holt - Sep 22, 2021
|People are interested in finding out about the history of the house they live in. Why ? How ?
NEW - Exploring stories about the past of their accommodation is becoming increasingly popular for many people in some nations. This...
Writing Feedbackhtphats - Sep 22, 2021 / — -
|Information about the travelling tendency (cities visited) by people from the USA, Canada and Mexico
Writing Feedbackpapcaii - Sep 20, 2021 / papcaii - Sep 22, 2021
|Essay about the factors bringing success - advise
2 - This creates a problem with the orginal topic rephrasing. There is no question being asked of the writer...
Writing Feedbackhelloitssheila - Sep 20, 2021 / Holt - Sep 22, 2021
|Ielts task on public, private and self-employed sectors of the economy in the UK
3 - in my point of view, you should have one more sentence in your overview ( like which field had...
Writing Feedbacknobodycares19 - Sep 20, 2021 / papcaii - Sep 21, 2021
|IELTS WRITING TASK 2: Will libraries be relevant in the future?
2 - The opinion of the writer is unclear. Do you agree or disagree? The response can only support one...
Writing Feedbackchantran - Sep 20, 2021 / Holt - Sep 21, 2021
|[IELTS WRITING TASK 2] SHOULD CHILDREN DECIDE THEIR OWN CAREER?
2 - This is a topic reason deviation. It is not supported in the orginal statement. It has altered the...
Writing FeedbackItsthu - Sep 20, 2021 / Holt - Sep 21, 2021
|The data on the occupation of graduated and post-graduate students after finishing college in the UK
Writing Feedbackkimkhanhnguyen - Sep 19, 2021 / spandya - Sep 21, 2021
|Developing nations are often financially supported by prosperous nations, but poverty still remain
2 - Do not exaggerate your response. Format the answer as needed or indicated in the discussion question. This is...
Writing Feedbackvvananh88 - Sep 19, 2021 / Holt - Sep 21, 2021
|What can art tell us about life that science and technology cannot?
2 - Kick off the discussion with a proper topic outline. The reader needs to know that you have a...
Writing Feedbackdanlenze - Sep 19, 2021 / Holt - Sep 21, 2021
|Developing countries need financial help or practical aid and advice
Writing Feedbackgintoki7 - Aug 18, 2021 / spandya - Sep 21, 2021
|The line graph illustrates the amount of people who bought music over seven years time frame
4 - i think a conclusion is unnecessary in WR task 1. instead of that you should write one more sentence...
Writing FeedbackMrshangaung - Sep 18, 2021 / papcaii - Sep 20, 2021
|[IELTS WRITING TASK 2] DISCUSS THE VIEWS OF ADVERTISING AND GIVE YOUR OPINION.
Writing FeedbackTraphan - Sep 20, 2021 / Traphan - Sep 20, 2021
|Beside studying, there are more significant factors that pupils have to explore
NEW - Task 2: Everybody should stay at school until the age of 18. What extent do you agree or disagree?...
Writing Feedbackpaleodietcorner - Sep 20, 2021 / — -
|People are damaging the environment. What goverments and individuals can do to address this problem
3 - Here is my feedback Firstly, the way linking words such as "and", "so" used throughout this essay is...
Writing Feedbackminh14012000 - Sep 3, 2021 / nartarus2000 - Sep 20, 2021
|Higher number of youngsters move from developed to poorer countries, to do some charitable work
2 - The student cannot recieve a passing score for this essay. The discussion response provided does not align itself with...
Writing FeedbackHuyne - Sep 19, 2021 / Holt - Sep 20, 2021
|Giving jobless people access to the Internet will help reducing unemployment issue. Agree/disagree?
2 - The student did an acceptable job in the prompt restatement but failed to provide an appropriate question response. Refer...
Writing Feedbacksourisdefoudre - Sep 19, 2021 / Holt - Sep 20, 2021
|The line charts below illustrate the amount of energy consumed in the UK from 1980 to 2030
3 - Thanks for your advice! I forgot to upload an image for the report. I will reinforce my English words...
Writing FeedbackTurtle2000 - Sep 18, 2021 / Turtle2000 - Sep 20, 2021
|What is more vital: communication through word by mouth, or written language?
2 - Not a controversy. This has always been a topic for discussion. Avoid using sensationalist terms as these do...
Writing Feedbackngominhphuong - Sep 18, 2021 / Holt - Sep 20, 2021
|WRITING IELTS ESSAY: Mothers should spend most of their time raising their children
2 - Hanging sentence. There must be a reason provided either before or after the word " while". This is...
Writing Feedbackgianggiangvn - Sep 18, 2021 / Holt - Sep 20, 2021
|AGREE/DISAGREE - CLEARING PUBLIC PARKS
NEW - Although many people value their public parks, this space could be better used for other purposes such as residential...
Writing Feedbacknartarus2000 - Sep 19, 2021 / — -
|Task 2: Traffic - a problem in major cities. Causes and solutions.
2 - The task 2 essay is the opportunity for the test taker to show his ability to explain his opinion...
Writing Feedbackpaleodietcorner - Sep 18, 2021 / Holt - Sep 19, 2021
|Real or imaginary that you plan to do this summer. Try to think topic about time with friends
2 - What? This presentation does not connect well with the previous presentations. Avoid vague references since the letter calls...
Writing Feedbackjadevinct - Sep 18, 2021 / Holt - Sep 19, 2021
|Past and present views on damaged items
2 - Do not focus solely on the vocabulary aspect of the score. Such a presentation shows that the writer does...
Writing Feedbackspandya - Sep 18, 2021 / Holt - Sep 19, 2021
|Money distribution from developed countries to those underdeveloped, does not stop poverty there
2 - If the writer completely disagrees with an opinion, then he must have the conviction to defend it. One...
Writing Feedbackmonicaaa0017 - Sep 18, 2021 / Holt - Sep 19, 2021
|The amount of money invested to study by the American government over a 28-year period
2 - The overall essay is well developed. It shows a great deal of time spent in analyzing the image. Next...
Writing Feedbackpapcaii - Sep 18, 2021 / Holt - Sep 19, 2021
|The essay topic: It is said that children need time to rest than just focus on studying.
2 - The prompt restatement is confusing. The writer is combining unrelated ideas in the presentation sentences, leaving the reader confused.The...
Writing FeedbackStewieHarison278 - Sep 18, 2021 / Holt - Sep 19, 2021
|The estimated jeans sales of the two Turkish companies and their projected market share
3 - First of all, there are other patent information that u can outlined, including a small decrease at first in...
Writing FeedbackAnhThi - Sep 17, 2021 / paleodietcorner - Sep 19, 2021
|Hunger problem despite launched and implemented many advancements and breakthroughs in agriculture
Writing Feedbackgianggiangvn - Sep 17, 2021 / gianggiangvn - Sep 18, 2021
|Number of controversies about gender equality in community, especially in educational environments
Writing FeedbackNhung0211 - Sep 17, 2021 / megazetz - Sep 18, 2021
|Nowadays some people choose to live in the city while other chooses to stay in the countryside.
4 - Firstly, I think you misunderstood the prompt. You were asked to discuss the advantages and disadvantages for people who...
Writing FeedbackNguyet Ha - Sep 16, 2021 / megazetz - Sep 18, 2021
|IELTS WRITING TASK 1: The graph shows information regarding the birth and death rates in New Zealand
Writing Feedbackmegazetz - Sep 17, 2021 / megazetz - Sep 18, 2021
|There are good reasons for students to be compelled to wear uniform at schools
3 - For the first sentence of the conclusion you can add: Requiring students to wear a uniform is definitely...
Writing Feedbackkhanh ly - Sep 14, 2021 / monicaaa0017 - Sep 18, 2021
|Public spending on promoting a healthy lifestyle in order to prevent illness and medical expenses
3 - For the introduction you can say like this: It is often argued by some that spending public money...
Writing Feedbackanth2407 - Sep 16, 2021 / monicaaa0017 - Sep 18, 2021
|Social media are popular but the nature of online platform presents a myriad of potential issues
3 - When writing an essay, you need to make sure your answer complied with the given question. Question: Do you...
Writing FeedbackKylietran - Sep 15, 2021 / gianggiangvn - Sep 18, 2021
|The number of hours, which women and men spend doing different, unpaid works
Writing Feedbackthien le - Sep 13, 2021 / thien le - Sep 17, 2021
|International students in the UK attending and achieving second or even higher class degrees
4 - First of all, I would like to understand where this note was written. This is definitely not an article,...
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