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Even with improved access to education, a significant number of adults today remain illiterate. What

NEW - Even with improved access to education, a significant number of adults today remain illiterate. What challenges do adults who...

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As a high schooler who is do her own entrepreneurship, This is my personal statement draft essay

NEW - Hiii,this is my personal statement for my GKS-U regarding I will intake in 2027, I wrote this essay with...

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English Draft Essay on The Dangers of Water Scarcity, looking to improve writing & citations

2 - The first paragraph feels empty aside from a single line of usable information. The rest of the content is...

Writing Feedbackmia00978244 - Jun 26, 2026 / Holt - Jun 26, 2026
The best way to solve the world's environmental problem is to increase the price of fuel

2 - There is no appropriate prompt restatement provided in the opening paragraph. The information is a direct cut and paste...

Writing Feedbackbrian0408 - Jun 3, 2026 / Holt - Jun 5, 2026
Parents should encourage children to spend less time studying and more time doing physical activity

2 - While you can use this as a response to the essay, the score it will bring in for...

Writing FeedbackBrooklyn2211209 - Jun 2, 2026 / Holt - Jun 5, 2026
Hamlet's progression through grief - advice on on final essay.

2 - Please allow me to commend you on doing your utmost best in developing this draft, without turning to AI...

Writing Feedbacktlsmith - May 27, 2026 / Holt - May 28, 2026
The effects of vaping on teen health

2 - I believe that this would be improved much more if you present a comprehensive history of vaping at the...

Writing Feedbackellhdz - May 22, 2026 / Holt - May 23, 2026
Buying goods from all over the world - IELTS Essay Writing task 2

3 - I thank you for your genuine help of my essay Holt. I now clearly understand what to improve in...

Writing Feedbackthanhdan00 - May 22, 2026 / thanhdan00 - May 22, 2026
The graph below shows information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries

2 - One of the main problems in your presentation is the lack of punctuation mark usage. This creates confusion while...

Writing Feedbackngocmyy - May 16, 2026 / Holt - May 16, 2026
Bring awareness to the Fentanyl Crisis - Essay for ENG102

2 - The first thing that I would have you check with your paper are your vocabulary usage and grammar. You...

Writing Feedbackmonica01 - May 4, 2026 / Holt - May 4, 2026
Discuss the relative news and people.

2 - This is not a reference that can be found in the original topic provided for discussion. This is...

Writing Feedbackthebenjamin - May 3, 2026 / Holt - May 4, 2026
Four-type of housing - Report table chart in 2001 and in 2006

2 - The summary overview does not follow the required formatting for the presentation. It must summarize the information by indicating...

Writing Feedbackthebenjamin - May 3, 2026 / Holt - May 4, 2026
Connected or Controlled? The reality of Social Media Use

2 - It is important that you do not start the essay in the middle of the presentation. Your first paragraph...

Writing FeedbackgabriellaA - May 1, 2026 / Holt - May 3, 2026
The role of physical strength in sports - IELTS test

2 - While I admire your desire to show your capacity to use English words, oftentimes, you are not using the...

Writing Feedbackraffaahmad - Apr 26, 2026 / Holt - Apr 27, 2026
News and Life Connection - Ielts 2 (agree or disagree?)

2 - Your reasoning approach to the essay is not on the level that the examiner will be expecting. Since this...

Writing FeedbackQuangNguyenn - Apr 24, 2026 / Holt - Apr 25, 2026
English Essay Assignment-People should work out more

3 - If you want to get a higher score, you should include personal view point, real life examples and more...

Writing FeedbackTrevortheman - Apr 23, 2026 / Tamphan - Apr 24, 2026
Responsibility and principles

2 - A personal definition of responsibility would be a fantastic way of opening this opinion essay. What is responsibility in...

Writing Feedbacktaya - Apr 20, 2026 / Holt - Apr 21, 2026
Essay for ENG 102 - Mental Health Crisis

2 - The writing contained in this paper is very choppy. The tone is not consistent. It provides giveaway AI written...

Writing FeedbackFufuBalbastro - Apr 19, 2026 / Holt - Apr 19, 2026
Ethnic studies - College Essay (MLA)

2 - The essay sounds repetitive at times and does not seem to move forward in terms of information dissemination. The...

Writing FeedbackHaqiqkhan4456 - Apr 5, 2026 / Holt - Apr 12, 2026
Helping The Homeless: Whose Problem Is It?

2 - There are a few grammatical concerns that need to be corrected in the essay. You can easily spot these...

Writing FeedbackAdeming67 - Apr 11, 2026 / Holt - Apr 12, 2026
Essay for ENG102 - The Present Dangers of AI: Causing More Harm Than Good

3 - @Holt Thank you for you for reading my paper and for your feedback! However, I wanted to correct your...

Writing FeedbackDALS1 - Apr 9, 2026 / DALS1 - Apr 9, 2026
Challenges & Learnings from Running a Small Museum in Virginia

2 - I had a sense that this essay was AI generated, I ran it through a few tests and was...

Writing Feedbackrixcy - Apr 2, 2026 / Holt - Apr 3, 2026
Unconscious Bias in the Maternal Health Care - Undergraduate Essay

2 - I think that the first thing you should do is fix the format of the paper. It is not...

Writing Feedbackdedee79 - Mar 27, 2026 / Holt - Mar 29, 2026
Limiting Cruise Ship Tourism to Protect Coastal Communities

2 - The content of this essay is not human written. It is coming across as 95 % AI generated. It...

Writing FeedbackNicajah05 - Mar 27, 2026 / Holt - Mar 29, 2026
ENG 102- Teaching Religion in Public Schools: Is it rude to speak of Religion and Politics?

2 - This is a well written essay that focuses properly on the discussion of religion in relation to upbringing, morality,...

Writing Feedbacksmithjarod325 - Mar 27, 2026 / Holt - Mar 29, 2026
Mental health awareness in schools

2 - The format of the paper is very AI generated. You kept the bullet points intact, which is a dead...

Writing FeedbackGflun5 - Mar 26, 2026 / Holt - Mar 27, 2026
IELTS Writing Task 2 - Some think that young people should be free to choose any career they like

2 - You have to understand that I cannot help you improve your writing skills for as long as you use...

Writing Feedbackanuse25 - Mar 9, 2026 / Holt - Mar 13, 2026
IELTS Writing Task 2 - In many workplaces online communication has overtaken face to face meetings

2 - Come on, stop fooling yourself. You cannot ask me to assess an essay that is 100% AI generated in...

Writing Feedbackanuse25 - Mar 2, 2026 / Holt - Mar 2, 2026
Healthcare Worker Burnout Research paper (ENG102)

2 - I am not going to respond to your questions when you are asking me to review a research paper...

Writing Feedbackdysonsam - Feb 26, 2026 / Holt - Feb 28, 2026
Talking to a restaurant business owner - IELTS General Writing Task 1

2 - This letter could have been better formatted. You could have opened with the reminder to Mr. John about how...

Writing Feedbackskatare100 - Feb 25, 2026 / Holt - Feb 27, 2026
The Effect of Social Media on the Mental Health of College Students

2 - This is one of the better, I would say 50-50 split, AI and human writing papers that has been...

Writing Feedbackdhwani - Feb 21, 2026 / Holt - Feb 21, 2026
IELTS Writing Task 2 - More and more people participate in extreme sports

2 - The prompt restatement is well done. It does not deviate from the original topic and the writer's opinion shows...

Writing Feedbackanuse25 - Feb 16, 2026 / Holt - Feb 16, 2026
IELTS Writing task 2 - Agree & Disagree - Topic Transport (Cyclists should pass a test)

2 - A suggestion is different from an argument. This shows a lack of English vocabulary skills on your part. by...

Writing FeedbackMon4615 - Feb 15, 2026 / Holt - Feb 16, 2026
IELTS Writing Task 2 - Many museums charge for admission while others are free

2 - Your prompt restatement is inaccurate and will receive a failing TA score. You are referencing reasons as a part...

Writing Feedbackanuse25 - Feb 9, 2026 / Holt - Feb 9, 2026
Clean water. Free or charged?

2 - It is incorrect for you to make a presumptive statement in the prompt restatement section. You are to...

Writing Feedbackquasal - Feb 7, 2026 / Holt - Feb 8, 2026
Rising prevalence of travelling.

2 - While the essay comes in at more than the minimum word requirement, it does not fully allow the examiner...

Writing Feedbackquasal - Feb 6, 2026 / Holt - Feb 8, 2026
Technology regarding relationship. Positive or negative?

2 - The essay is well developed and written in a highly coherent manner. It successfully transitions within sentences, for the...

Writing Feedbackquasal - Feb 6, 2026 / Holt - Feb 8, 2026
IELTS TASK 2: Younger people replacing older people at work

2 - You need to learn how to properly allot your time when writing the task 2 essay. The more common...

Writing Feedbackquasal - Feb 5, 2026 / Holt - Feb 6, 2026
IELTS Writing Task 2 - Newspapers have a significant influence on people's ideas and opinions

2 - The essay shows a good thought process coming from you. You obviously brainstormed the content of the essay prior...

Writing Feedbackanuse25 - Feb 2, 2026 / Holt - Feb 2, 2026
Wirting Ielts part 2: Pros & Cons remote natural

2 - The essay counts only 246 words in the total writing, which means this essay would receive an automatic failing...

Writing FeedbackHelenNguyen712 - Feb 1, 2026 / Holt - Feb 2, 2026
Procrastination is a Primary Cause of Low-Quality Academic Work - English 102

2 - The paper is badly missing an effective thesis statement at the start. This can easily be remedied by combining...

Writing Feedbackecelaya - Feb 1, 2026 / Holt - Feb 2, 2026
Writing Part 2 - Discuss and give opinion about Television

2 - This statement will make the restatenebt+ writer's opinion paragraph fail. The lack of your opinion statement, which would...

Writing Feedbackthebenjamin - Jan 29, 2026 / Holt - Jan 31, 2026
The Government Should Provide Free Public Libraries - IELTS WRITING TASK 2

2 - The topic restatement will not pass the plagiarism check of the test. You have used almost 80 of the...

Writing Feedbackdatmt333 - Jan 28, 2026 / Holt - Jan 31, 2026
IELTS Writing Task 2 - Many countries are experiencing population growth and need to build more home

2 - While this is an acceptable presentation that will receive a fair scoring consideration, it is not totally within the...

Writing Feedbackanuse25 - Jan 26, 2026 / Holt - Jan 27, 2026
Some people think that a job provides not only an income but also a social life.

2 - You need not repeat the discussion instruction to the examiner. You will receive point deductions for not meeting...

Writing Feedbackdanh123 - Jan 23, 2026 / Holt - Jan 24, 2026
People In Developed Countries living Alone Or In Small Family Units - IELTS WRITING TASK 2

3 - @Holt Thank you so much for your feedback to my essay. You're absolutely right! I spent nearly 50...

Writing Feedbackdatmt333 - Jan 19, 2026 / datmt333 - Jan 21, 2026
Australia physical activity - For ESL

2 - The first error in the presentation can be found in the summary overview. You did not completely identify the...

Writing Feedbackplaxnew - Jan 18, 2026 / Holt - Jan 19, 2026
IELTS Writing Task 2 - The best way to reduce traffic accidents is to raise the age limit

2 - There is a discussion disconnection in this essay. Although the restatement and writer's opinion is very well presented and...

Writing Feedbackanuse25 - Jan 16, 2026 / Holt - Jan 17, 2026
In some countries today, many people are having their first child at an older age.

2 - Okay, if you write a task 2 essay at almost 500 words with a time allotment of 40 minutes,...

Writing Feedbackadadeee - Jan 15, 2026 / Holt - Jan 17, 2026
Some people think that governments should change the way individuals live

2 - There exists a faulty parallesim in this presentation. There are 2 contrasting clauses that require a proper parallel structure...

Writing Feedbackthaianhiuiu - Jan 14, 2026 / Holt - Jan 15, 2026
The charts below give information about the weather for Glasgow, a city in Scotland.

2 - The essay shows a highly limited English vocabulary on your part. The redundant use of "number", instead of more...

Writing Feedbackwanthyu - Jan 13, 2026 / Holt - Jan 14, 2026
Should the U.S. Government Forgive All Federal Student Loan Debt?

2 - The student did not even bother to try and humanize the writing of this paper. It is almost fully...

Writing Feedbackjonnycal14 - Jan 12, 2026 / Holt - Jan 13, 2026
Private equity in hospitals and healthcare systems Eng102

2 - This is a well thought out and properly presented research and opinion paper. You have given great thought to...

Writing FeedbackZarecka - Jan 8, 2026 / Holt - Jan 10, 2026
Ambition in Society - IELTS TASK 2

2 - The essay is being written from your personal point of view and therefore, should reflect an "I" statement in...

Writing Feedbackdatmt333 - Jan 5, 2026 / Holt - Jan 7, 2026
The graph - common activities of children of different ages

2 - This essay is not one that can be completed withing 20 minutes during the actual test. The 1 hour...

Writing FeedbackHuypham - Jan 5, 2026 / Holt - Jan 7, 2026
[IELTS TASK2]celebrities complain the way the media publicize their private lives.(AGREE DISAGREE)

2 - This is an over discussed essay that cannot be completed within the alloted 40 minutes of actual test writing...

Writing Feedbacktrangtrangsigmaa - Jan 5, 2026 / Holt - Jan 7, 2026
IELTS Writing Task 2 - Nowadays many people choose ready-made food and refuse to cook at home

2 - The discussion is well developed. The prompt restatement is accurate and the writer's opinion is based upon valid thesis...

Writing Feedbackanuse25 - Jan 5, 2026 / Holt - Jan 7, 2026
IELTS WRITING - Transportation of products and people cause the most pollution worldwide

2 - I have a problem with reviewing this essay because the prompt that has been provided is confusing. It is...

Writing Feedbackbonguyen - Dec 31, 2025 / Holt - Jan 1, 2026
IELTS WRITING TASK 2 Employers should give their staff at least a 4-week holiday

3 - Thanks for your advice...

Writing Feedbackbonguyen - Dec 27, 2025 / bonguyen - Dec 31, 2025
How Fashion Reflects Personality and Confidence

2 - I will applaud you for the good writing that you have presented in these 2 paragraphs. While there are...

Writing FeedbackLeonn - Dec 29, 2025 / Holt - Dec 29, 2025

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