The boss very important do work

the good boss

We believe a good boss fully important for work. Because my boss always understands and helps us critical thinking also he shared experience living by himself. The boss not only gives to us encourage active and the strong engineer to do work but also he makes us try hard in the company to develop the company in near time. He wants us to community-friendly with all the people as the smile exciting.

A formally written essay / sentence never begins with the conjunction "because". That is due to the word more often than not being used as a connecting word between two connected thought presentations. You should come across that lesson in your English writing classes soon. The rest of the essay is acceptable for an ESL writer. The thoughts you are conveying have a clear subject, an understandable idea, and an easy to follow, although often grammatically incorrect sentence presentation. You are doing well enough so far. I am sure you will become more skilled in English writing grammar over time. Keep writing in English. Continue to read English only materials. I am sure you can only get better from here.