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Computer based Instructions ! Good or bad.



shalini singh 14 / 23  
May 25, 2010   #1
Every year more and more computers are used for instruction .Is this good or bad? Discuss and explain your opinions on the growing use of computer assisted instruc tion in the class room. support your opinions with the specific examples from your personal experience, readings or general knowlege.

Computer is one of the blessings of technological inventions of twenty first century which has bought positive effect in our lives. Computer based instructions in colleges are one of the current technological achievement. In my opinion computer based instruction has positive impact on teacher as well as student and is one of the convenient way to deliver lecture.

With the advent of technological inventions in various fields in twentieth century. One of the major advancement visualized in schools and colleges is computer based instructions. Teachers now don't have to worry about preparing notes and preserving there old notes from getting damaged. They can prepare a lecture in a impressive way with the help of power point, more clear and understandable. Apart from this teacher now don't have to worry about carrying their lectures to the class, They can carry large number of pages of a lectures to the class in a small device like zip drive. They can also have backup of there documents to protect from being lost.

On the other hand students also don't have to concentrate on even single uttered word from their teacher to pen it down. They can concentrate more on lectures as they can receive handouts from teachers for the notes of the lectures. Nothing can be more convenient than having lecture through computer or computer based lectures.

Not only this, computer based instructions have also avail people an opportunity to study, who are at distant locations, have less time, new moms and many other such people who can't coming to the campus for the class. Nowadays physical presence in a class is not required, all they need is computer and an internet connection. If there is a need and desire to have a qualification, no matter wherever you live it is possible because of these computer based instructions.

Indeed computer has bought a revolution all over in various fields; Not only computers based instruction has benefited students and teachers in different ways. Now it is also possible to prepare impressive and clear lectures which helps students grasping better and also storage of humongous data is possible which has reduced bulk from cabinets and easier to carry and circulate .

name_here - / 35  
May 25, 2010   #2
Indeed the computer has r bought a revolution all over in various fields; Not only have computers based instruction has benefited students and teachers in different ways. N, n ow it is also possible to prepare impressive and clear lectures which helps students grasping betterto grasp the information better and also f storageto store humongous data is possible whichbecause it has reduced bulk from cabinets and easier to carry and circulate .

Hi shalini singh,
I hope this helps. Don't forget your articles.
Also, there describes a location. Their is a possessive word. And They're means they are. Remember to choose the right one.
OP shalini singh 14 / 23  
May 25, 2010   #3
Thanks
Name _here, I really appreciate your corrections and also keep them in my mind in future. I also appreciate you for catching critical minute mistakes. They are very important and I want to work on that. I always write in a hurry and make a critical mistake which you have marked.

Thank you very much for making my essay better !

Shalini
EF_Kevin 8 / 13053  
May 26, 2010   #4
Yes, good corrections here. You have some options:
Computers represent one of the...
or
The computer is one of the...

An let's use a hyphen (-)
Computer-based instructions in colleges are...

And keep it plural:
Computer-based instructions in colleges are one some of the current ...

In addition to this, computer-based instructions have also provided people an opportunity to study despite their difficult circumstances -- people who are at distant locations, have less time, are starting a family, and many other such people who can't come to the campus for the class.


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