I love and admire my parents ; Essay on MYSELF

My name is Enkhsuren Tsevegsuren. I was born on the 7 th of May, 1994 in Dashinchileng of Bulgan aimak. Where I had been living together with my family untill I was 6 years old. When I was a childhood, a lot of happy memories from that place. My family have my parents and my 3 younger brothers. My father name is Tsevegsuren, he is 43 years old. My mother name is Enkhtuya. She is 44 years old. My younger brothers are students. They are very kindly and hardworker. We are very close to each other.I grew up into

a family of a cook and a businessman. I love and admire my parents for children, working hard everyday.Then We moved to the Ulaanbaatar city in 1999. The Ulaanbaatar city is the capital of Mongolia. I finished off my high school and took 2 years in the Enkh-Orchlon Institute. Then I plan to study abroad in the Republic of Korea. Then I came to study at the Korean language program of Chonnam National University.

I like to study because knowledge is useful sometimes. My favourite lessons are mathematics,world history, philosophy and foreign languages. I like to learn new foreign languages. Especially English, Korean, Japanese and Chinese. In my freetime, I like to reading books and cooking.I love to read books, because book can be always be true friend. I'm fond of reading as it gives not only knowledge,but also wonderful moments of joy and pleasure. I like to reading history books,that is very interesting. Last winter I read a book titled "You're also a Flower, now Blossom".It's an essay collection written by single mothers. When I read the book I could know how their lives were and are, and how they feel. I thought many people are so unkind them. Because of my memories and that book, I want to help children and women in difficult situations. So I have to study very hard for social circumstances. Cooking has been a huge interest of mine. My mother is a good cook, especially in Korean cooking. I think I have got it from her. Sometimes I pray. I also feel that whenever I pray, it helps me getting forward and achieving more and more.

My name is Enkhsuren Tsevegsuren, born on 7th May, 1994. I lived with my family at my birth place, Dashinchileng-Bulgan aimak, until I turned six. I had a very happy and memorable childhood. My father, Tsevegsuren, is 43 and my mother, Enkhtuya, is 44 years old. We are three brothers and I am the oldest one. We are very close to each other. I grew up in a family of cooks and businessmen. I admire my parents for being very kind and hardworking.

In 1999, we moved to Ulaanbaatar city, the capital of Mongolia. I completed my high school and later joined Enkh-Orchlon Institute, after which I decided to study abroad. Hence, I got myself enrolled at Chonnam National University in the Korean language program. I like to study because I believe knowledge is a powerful tool.

My favorite subjects are mathematics,world history and philosophy. I also like to study foreign languages, especially English, Korean, Japanese and Chinese. I love to cook whenever I get a chance. I learnt a lot about Korean cooking from my Mom. I think I got it from her.

I am fond of books and I love to read them in my free time. I find history books very interesting. I recollect reading a book last winter titled "You're also a Flower, now Blossom", an essay collection by single mothers. It was a very fascinating book and had a great impact on me. I have become more sensitive towards issues related to children and women. I am now determined to help them.

I often pray. It helps me to remain strong and stay focused on my goals.

... It's good if you said something about your dad and mom such as some of their qualities in order to introduce their characters better. This is what I suggest;

My name is Enkhsuren Tsevegsuren and I was born on the 7th May 1994 in Dashinchileng of Bulgan aimak where I spent my childhood with my family until I was six years old. I still have many fond memories of this place. I come from a very close knit family. My father, Tsevegsuren is now forty three years old while my mother, Enkhtuya is forty four. I have three younger siblings who are still studying.

Thank you a lot of, I'm studying english now. So again thanks. Dumi, Goodluck

You are welcome :)


In 1999, we moved to Ulaanbaatar city, the capital of Mongolia where I completed my high school and later joined Enkh-Orchlon Institute. After that I decided to study abroad and had myself enrolled with Chonnam National University in the Korean language program.

I am very keen on studying because I believe that knowledge is the most powerful tool available for a man.


Mathematics, world history, philosophy and foreign languages are my favorite subjects. Especially I have a great passion in learning foreign languages such as English, Korean, Japanese and Chinese. During my leisure time, I enjoy reading history books.

When I was childhood,I have a lot of happy memories from that place. My family was consist with my parents and three younger brothers.

It seems better if you express like that , i think ,good luck for you !

good one... keep it up...

Starting with introducing yourself seems to simple try a good attention grabber, maybe starting with a story

thanks all, goodluck!!!!

is this one right??
i think it must be like:
in my childhood or when i was a child

... yes you are right. It should be - " When I was a child" or "During/In my childhood"... childhood always refers to the time period one spends as a child.


... this is another essay and as per forum rules, you need to open a new thread for this. This one would be removed from this thread. Post this thread under "Undergraduate essays" . I will certainly help you with this, but you need to have a fresh thread for this :)