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I remember my father's existence in our house since I was born. Even though, his body was there, his mind was always flying far away to his job. Unfortunately, our between relationship was always an acrobatic one; we had few good moments and many upturns.
The fact is that my father used to be a very handsome, contemporary man in his 30s; medium-height about 1m75, with a slim figure. He had long wavy dark hair, framing his oval face. Furthermore, he had big almond-sized dark-brown eyes, a medium-sized nose and a big straight-lined mouth. But not anymore. Today, he is apparently an old man at his 60s; a little overweight with a flabby stomach and no hair on his head.
His appearance now, and then, hides a very strict and selfish personality when it comes to doing or getting what he wants. Despite of our family stoutness, he is really a stingy man that reminds me of Skroutz McDuck, sometimes. I remember him becoming too critical and judgmental as it concerned our grades on our report cards. Although, he has soft features surrounding his face, he hides a blunt, arrogant and many times rude person.
However, past is past. Looking back to my life with my father and thinking skeptically about his behavior, I assume that I could not ever love him honestly as a son loves his father. Though, I will try hard not to make his same mistakes to my own family.
I remember my father's existence in our house since I was born. Even though, his body was there, his mind was always flying far away to his job. Unfortunately, our between relationship was always an acrobatic one; we had few good moments and many upturns.
The fact is that my father used to be a very handsome, contemporary man in his 30s; medium-height about 1m75, with a slim figure. He had long wavy dark hair, framing his oval face. Furthermore, he had big almond-sized dark-brown eyes, a medium-sized nose and a big straight-lined mouth. But not anymore. Today, he is apparently an old man at his 60s; a little overweight with a flabby stomach and no hair on his head.
His appearance now, and then, hides a very strict and selfish personality when it comes to doing or getting what he wants. Despite of our family stoutness, he is really a stingy man that reminds me of Skroutz McDuck, sometimes. I remember him becoming too critical and judgmental as it concerned our grades on our report cards. Although, he has soft features surrounding his face, he hides a blunt, arrogant and many times rude person.
However, past is past. Looking back to my life with my father and thinking skeptically about his behavior, I assume that I could not ever love him honestly as a son loves his father. Though, I will try hard not to make his same mistakes to my own family.