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The Power of Emotion
The power of the human mind is remarkable. The emotions the mind creates influence the decisions and actions of individuals; these feelings can leads to one's success or one's failures. In William Shakespeare's Hamlet, the emotion of fear plays a significant role in the advancement of the plot through Hamlet's fear of the unknown, Claudius' fear of retribution, and Gertrude's fear of loneliness.
Due to the unpredictable outcome of the future, Hamlet fears taking action in the present. Through out the play procrastination in one of Hamlet's predominant flaws that keeps him from following through with his course of action. Hamlet feels the needs to ensure that Claudius is responsible for his father's untimely death and does so by sharing his plan with Horatio. He instructs him to:
"Observe mine uncle: if his occulted guilt
do not unkennel in one speech,
It is a dammed ghost that we have seen..." (3.2. 79-81)
Hamlet continuously delays his plan for revenge by going to great lengths in order to prove Claudius' guilt. He needs confirmation numerous times before he takes action. These delays are a result of his fear for his unknown future.
The immediate remarriage between Gertrude and Claudius following the death of Hamlet Sr demonstrates the vulnerability and fear of loneliness that Gertrude possesses. The sudden romance has an impact on Hamlet that causes him to display his distaste towards his mother when he says:
Let me not think on't -- Frailty, thy name is woman!--
A little month, or ere those shoes were old
With which she followed my poor father's body,
Like Niobe, all tears;--why she, even she,--
O God! a beast that wants discourse of reason
Would have mourn'd longer,-- married with mine uncle,
My father's brother, but no more like my father
Than I to Hercules: within a month; (1.2. 147-153)
Gertrude uses the attention of another man to overcome her grief. In this speech Hamlet compares her to a beast and expresses his feelings of betrayal by his mother. He recognizes her lack of independence and he refers to her as a disgrace. Gertrude's fear of loneliness affect her emotions and contribute to Hamlet's reasoning.
Hamlet's unpredictable state of mind and impetuous actions leave Claudius uncertain and in fear of retribution. Following the performance The Mousetrap Claudius expresses his outrage towards Hamlet. He comes to the realization that Hamlet is aware of his sinful acts and becomes fearful of Hamlet's plan for revenge. He convinces himself and others that Hamlet has gone mad when he warns:
I like him not, nor stands it safe with us
To let his madness range. Therefore prepare you;
I your commission will forthwith dispatch,
And he to England shall along with you:
The terms of our estate may not endure
Hazard so dangerous as doth hourly grow
Out of his lunacies. (3.3. 1-7)
Claudius experiences feelings of paranoia and he divulges a plan to obliterate Hamlet. The fear of retribution influences Claudius' impetuous actions on Hamlet, leading to his downfall. The control that fear places on Claudius is evident through his panic and thoughtless plans.
The power of emotion is undeniable. The influence and tole it takes on oneself can over power one's reasoning and a single emotion can have an impact on individuals in multiple ways. The role of fear in William Shakespeare's Hamlet takes the characters on a journey past the point no return which in turn leads to the tragic downfall of Hamlet, Gertrude, and Claudius. Fear plays a significant role in the advancement of the plot, through Hamlet's fear of the unknown, Claudius' fear of retribution, and Gertrude's fear of loneliness.
The Power of Emotion
The power of the human mind is remarkable. The emotions the mind creates influence the decisions and actions of individuals; these feelings can leads to one's success or one's failures. In William Shakespeare's Hamlet, the emotion of fear plays a significant role in the advancement of the plot through Hamlet's fear of the unknown, Claudius' fear of retribution, and Gertrude's fear of loneliness.
Due to the unpredictable outcome of the future, Hamlet fears taking action in the present. Through out the play procrastination in one of Hamlet's predominant flaws that keeps him from following through with his course of action. Hamlet feels the needs to ensure that Claudius is responsible for his father's untimely death and does so by sharing his plan with Horatio. He instructs him to:
"Observe mine uncle: if his occulted guilt
do not unkennel in one speech,
It is a dammed ghost that we have seen..." (3.2. 79-81)
Hamlet continuously delays his plan for revenge by going to great lengths in order to prove Claudius' guilt. He needs confirmation numerous times before he takes action. These delays are a result of his fear for his unknown future.
The immediate remarriage between Gertrude and Claudius following the death of Hamlet Sr demonstrates the vulnerability and fear of loneliness that Gertrude possesses. The sudden romance has an impact on Hamlet that causes him to display his distaste towards his mother when he says:
Let me not think on't -- Frailty, thy name is woman!--
A little month, or ere those shoes were old
With which she followed my poor father's body,
Like Niobe, all tears;--why she, even she,--
O God! a beast that wants discourse of reason
Would have mourn'd longer,-- married with mine uncle,
My father's brother, but no more like my father
Than I to Hercules: within a month; (1.2. 147-153)
Gertrude uses the attention of another man to overcome her grief. In this speech Hamlet compares her to a beast and expresses his feelings of betrayal by his mother. He recognizes her lack of independence and he refers to her as a disgrace. Gertrude's fear of loneliness affect her emotions and contribute to Hamlet's reasoning.
Hamlet's unpredictable state of mind and impetuous actions leave Claudius uncertain and in fear of retribution. Following the performance The Mousetrap Claudius expresses his outrage towards Hamlet. He comes to the realization that Hamlet is aware of his sinful acts and becomes fearful of Hamlet's plan for revenge. He convinces himself and others that Hamlet has gone mad when he warns:
I like him not, nor stands it safe with us
To let his madness range. Therefore prepare you;
I your commission will forthwith dispatch,
And he to England shall along with you:
The terms of our estate may not endure
Hazard so dangerous as doth hourly grow
Out of his lunacies. (3.3. 1-7)
Claudius experiences feelings of paranoia and he divulges a plan to obliterate Hamlet. The fear of retribution influences Claudius' impetuous actions on Hamlet, leading to his downfall. The control that fear places on Claudius is evident through his panic and thoughtless plans.
The power of emotion is undeniable. The influence and tole it takes on oneself can over power one's reasoning and a single emotion can have an impact on individuals in multiple ways. The role of fear in William Shakespeare's Hamlet takes the characters on a journey past the point no return which in turn leads to the tragic downfall of Hamlet, Gertrude, and Claudius. Fear plays a significant role in the advancement of the plot, through Hamlet's fear of the unknown, Claudius' fear of retribution, and Gertrude's fear of loneliness.