Please help me check this summary.
The Westing game is a very interesting book. It is about a man who is murdered and leaves 200,000,000(200 million) dollars to a person. The man's name is Sam Westing. In Sam Westing's will, he states that the But the catch is that one person out of sixteen people is actually the true heir. The sixteen people are paired up into groups of two and each group is given a clue to the mystery. This book is filled with ghosts, bombings, a girl who kicks people, and a salesman who stalks his customers.
If you would like to know the conclusion, I strongly recommend this book to you.
"Westing game"
The name of a book should be capitalized and underlined.
"In Sam Westing's will, he states that the But the catch is that one person out of sixteen people is actually the true heir. "
He states what? What is "that"? "But" doesn't need to be capitalized.
"It is about a man who is murdered and leaves 200,000,000(200 million) dollars to a person. The man's name is Sam Westing. In Sam Westing's will, he states that the But the catch is that one person out of sixteen people is actually the true heir."
Very wordy and confusing. "The man's name is Sam Westing" should be combined with another sentence.
"The sixteen people are paired up into groups of two and each group is given a clue to the mystery. "
What mystery?
Frankly, you need to provide a bit more detail about the book. Make it concise and interesting. Also, your title says "one page summary"; this is nowhere near one page.
Good luck!
Great advice from Henry!
This essay is only a paragraph, and it needs to be much longer. Your grammar is generally correct, but the presentation is lifeless. Give a sentence about this book that is rhythmic like the start of a long drum solo. Or, better yet, say something that other people might not agree with -- something controversial involving a theme of the book.
Use this formula for each paragraph:
Topic sentence must be captivating, inspiring curiosity. Body sentences must explain the interesting topic sentence. The conclusion sentence must reflect on the that truth, the thought you expressed in the topic sentence.
This way, every paragraph is like one thought beautifully explained. You can write a brilliant, rhythmic essay about this book.
This is a great book, at least the first time through. Like many mysteries, it loses a lot of its reread value once you know the solution. Still, if I hadn't read the book before, your description of it would have been manifestly unhelpful. You might want to mention the names of some of the sixteen people, who they are, how they view each other, what tensions that creates, and so on. You also might want to look at themes the author develops.
