Thesis for Paradise Lost about the maintainance and establishment of social order

Hi,

I need some help with coming up with a good thesis and title for my paper on the establishment and maintainance of social order in Paradise Lost. I also ahve to include another text we have read in this semester which involves the same thing. I in essence have to compare them. I haave that one picked out. I love the book but I have never been good at coming up with a thesis or title. The paper is argumentative which makes these two things a little more complicated for me. I hope someone can help me. Thanks in advance, Jen

Hi Jen, watch the scene in Karate Kid where Mr. Miyagi prunes the Bonsai tree. That is how to carve out a thesis statement.

It's actually easy.

Do not do it until after you write at least 2 or 3 paragraphs.

Write one paragraph about Paradise Lost and another about the other book. Make them paragraphs about social order.

That is all you nee to do for now. Don't think about anything else. Write one paragraph about each. You'll be able to reread the paragraph and perceive the thesis statement easily.

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