Help with Hook for my essay on Macbeth

abc1234 1 / -

Oct 16, 2019 #1

fate and freewill

My essay on Macbeth is regarding fate and freewill. I need an interesting and general statement to introduct the topic. I can't seem to come up with a good hook though.

I came up with this "From the early ages, people have debated the concept of fate vs freewill" but I think it takes away from the point I'm trying to make in my essay (topic is regarding how Macbeth demonstrates freewill"

ng864 4 / 6

Oct 16, 2019 #2

@abc1234
"From the early ages
I think this could be worded better. You could add "early ages of mankind" or a similar addition. Alternatively, you could start off with a different phrase that has the same meaning.

concept of fate vs. freewill
You should add the "." after "vs"

Other than that, what you came up with sounds okay to me. You should be able to link it to Macbeth demonstrating freewill without difficulty.