Lying is to keep the child in the healthy mental condition. Advice on Debatable thesis

The Curious incident of the dog in the night-time- Advice on Debatable thesis

Here is my thesis statement: Lying is to keep the child in the healthy mental condition. The reason to maintain the health psychological for the child is the reason to lie. The justified of the father's lies, can be justifiable base from his son's health condition and the family problem between the mother and father.

As this paper is a critical essay, Please check my grammar and sentence structure. Is my thesis debatable??? i will continue to find the quotes from the book and critical about it. later on i will put it

Lying is necessary in order to maintain a child's mental health

I think this thesis is debatable :-)

how can this thesis statement to be longer???? cuz my paper have to be 1500 words. it is kind of tough for me please help me

Well, what will your paper be about?
What arguments support your opinion?
What arguments disagree with your opinion?
Your thesis is like a trailer for a movie, a sneak preview that lets the viewer know what your essay is supposed to be about.

Say I was writing about cheese.
While cheese is a substantial source of cholesterol, cheese should be eaten because it tastes really good and is a great source of calcium.

Opposing argument, opinion, reason 1, reason 2

You can try adding on more arguments that you will discuss in your paper, like what I did with cheese.
A suggestion. You are the director, you want to get the reader interested, how will you do this with your trailer?

I think it is sort of debatable subject, espicially the child have some kind of problem such as the kid can recieve big shock from them, and it will make kid put some physical or mental problems.

you can make it related with medical problem, it will make it is more proper reasons for lies.

For example, the kid had a phoia for death. When the kid saw some person was death, he/she couldn't speak at all a few periods. Otherwise the kid has asthma. If he/she get a shock, he/she can get asthma attack, it will make severe respiration problem.

In general, medical's issue has relative to lie. One person has severe medical problem, so he has one weeks life. We have to let he know it or we have to keep the secret for him.

I know in US's role. Usually, everytime medical staffs discuss with patient, but some of countries discuss his family or attoney...

I don't know how much help you~
anyway good luck~!!! : )

have anybody read about this book???