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points on how to write an essay about myself; give me a sample



nanayaws 7 / 11  
Dec 10, 2008   #1
i need help on how to write an essay bout myself, background, family, etc and how i will bring the diverse culture of my country to the school. please if you can give me a sample to read to enable me write mine.

thank you

EF_Sean 6 / 3459  
Dec 10, 2008   #2
Start by brainstorming things about yourself, your background, and your culture that make you unique. So, in my case, since my parents come from England, I might choose to focus on how my British heritage has given me a dry sense of humor, an appreciation of verbal irony, a knowledge of British history, an understanding of how accents can convey social information about class, a realization that English is not a single language but several closely related ones, etc. Once you have a list of points that you can write about, decide which ones would most recommend you to the school you are applying to given the program you are applying for. So, in my case, if I were planning to major in English, I might play up the sense of humor and the appreciation of irony. If I were planning to major in history, though, I might focus more on how having British parents made me take an interest in where people come from. This sort of focused approach should be fairly easy for most of the humanities and social sciences. If you are applying for programs in math, engineering, or any of the hard sciences, you'll have to work a bit harder at it, but it should still be possible. So, for example, if I were applying for a degree in Chemistry, I might talk about how I have always viewed my parents as atoms of one element mixed into atoms of another, forming a cultural compound that is neither wholly British nor wholly American.
randomzm 10 / 20  
Dec 10, 2008   #3
"cultural compound"

Very nice, Sean.
OP nanayaws 7 / 11  
Dec 11, 2008   #4
thank you very much sean. any more views will be highly appreciated.
thank you
EF_Kevin 8 / 13052  
Dec 11, 2008   #5
Great advice here! Also, for more guidance:

Start by writing the most important truth you have to offer. What have you learned in life that you can tell the reader as the very first sentence?

If you have a certain truth you learned, tell it in the opening line. It will be too profound to explain with that one sentence, though, so add another sentence to ELABORATE on that truth. Then, use the next sentence to tell about a life experience that led you to this conclusion, this truth. After that, add a fourth sentence to the opening paragraph, a sentence that reflects on the IMPORTANCE of this truth.

Then, spend a few more paragraphs letting your wisdom spill out onto the page.
OP nanayaws 7 / 11  
Dec 11, 2008   #6
the prompt dwells much about you. your background your family and stuff . please help me with this that is the most important.
thank you.
EF_Kevin 8 / 13052  
Dec 11, 2008   #7
In this essay, I will explain how a particular value that is important in my family has inspired me to choose [name of school] as my top choice among the available schools. This value, which is common to both my upbringing and the philosophy of [name of school] is...

And then spend the essay explaining this value, which you inherited from your family, and how its importance to you makes this college an absolutely perfect choice.
gmailblows31 6 / 21  
Dec 17, 2008   #8
Sean hit the nail on the head. You want to just talk about yourself and why you are fit at a college.
MAKE YOURSELF STAND OUT!!!
OP nanayaws 7 / 11  
Dec 20, 2008   #9
david how do i hit the nail on the head. please help me i want to stand outstanding
tae9141 - / 2  
Jan 1, 2010   #10
Describe yourself, your strengths and what makes you a good candidate?

I really dont know what to write...

plz could you tell me some of your opnion and share feedbacks?

could you tell me some of examples??
qomoco 24 / 104  
Jan 1, 2010   #11
are you hardworking? smart? funny? etc...

I honestly don't know what kind person you are lol

you are the one that holds the answers, then just let your imagination run wild! and write!
tae9141 - / 2  
Jan 1, 2010   #12
ok... i was thinking that tooo hahah !!

anywayz thnx !


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