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(how technology will impact their businesses) writing a dynamic introduction



babygirl36 1 / 2  
Dec 1, 2011   #1
I am using the cause & effect pattern for my paper titled Technology's Impact on Small Businesses. I am having a writer's block, and some help will be useful. My thesis statement is "Many small businesses are skeptical about how technology will impact their businesses on a daily basis"

Any help?! Please??!! Thank you!!

behrouz 1 / 4  
Dec 1, 2011   #2
in my opinion there are two fileds to discuss about this topic:
1- by promoting of technology, step by step small businesses become limited.
2- technology help to small businesses by creating new job positions. because every technology create new requirements.
i hope it be useful for you.
OP babygirl36 1 / 2  
Dec 1, 2011   #3
Thank you so much...However, I am not following you on point #1, can you elaborate a little more? What do you mean by step by step small businesses become limited? Limited how?

Also you mention that technology can help a small business, how?
behrouz 1 / 4  
Dec 2, 2011   #4
Firstly, new technology paves the way for disappearing of small business; let me to help you with an example: fishing is the way of life and income in some places in the world, but with the advancement of fishing technology with huge ships, in this aspect small ship cannot compete and at result they are disappearing.

Secondly, in other aspect new technology help to small business, for example Microsoft by creating computers and then internet, have created many businesses in societies.

I hope it be useful.
and it is necessary to inform you, English is not my first language, it is useful if you edit my statements and aware me for it mistakes,

Thank you
B.Mohammadi


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