I'm a biotechnology engineer, who has big ambition and many motives to prove himself - Motiv. letter

Ghazi Antep, Turkey
26/2/2015

Dear Madam/Sir,
I'm Ahmad Khoja from Aleppo, Syria. I'm a biotechnology engineer, who has big ambition and many motives to prove himself. I graduate from Aleppo University but now I don't work in the fields of my study, I work in a transport company in Turkey as a Supervisor Engineer for loading, unloading and calculating the quantity of goods/cargos. Also, working in weight section, in addition to making software/fixing to the devices and internet networks in the company. Behind to my study, I tried to improve my skills in many fields, I have a very good experience in working in groups and I have good ability to guid groups, I have an excellent ability to communicate with others and share new science, ideas and informations with them. I interest in computer and I have many skills like ICDL, C++,and others. In addition, I had many tracing courses in many fields , also I can prepare and deliver research and scientific lectures strongly depending on what I presented during my university study.

I heard about your organization from my friend who works with you and I read about this big organization in many websites and I'll achieve a big chance If I can work with you because I'll have a chance to offer some aid to people who in need and I'll be more relax because because charitable work and assistance makes you feel comfortable and gives you a psychological more activity and motivation to provide more.

If I work with you, I think I'll be a success and benefit one because of my experience in communicating with others and my ability in solving problems and my ability to persuade and develop myself and those people around me.

I have a big ambition and dreams for the future and I'll achieve all my dreams when the war finish and the peace prevails throughout the world.

I have a real ability to change my reality to the best. I hope that I can benefit myself, my community and others around me.

I approach your time in reading my letter and I hope that I can work with humanity people like you in a big organization.

Best Regards
Ahmad Khoja

who has big ambitions and many motives to prove himself...

Also, I work in the weight section ...

in addition, I make software/fixing devices and internet networks for the company...

have good ability to guide/lead groups

share new sciences , ideas and information with them

I interest in computer and I have many skills in ICDL, C++,and others

and I red about it on many websites - in case if you do not want to repeat the phrase "your organization"

I'll achieve a big chance If I can work with you because I'll have a chance to offer some aid to people who in need and I'll be more relax because charitable work and assistance makes you feel comfortable and gives you a psychological more activity and motivation to provide more. - you should try to break this sentence into shorter sentences, it may help the reader easier to understand. also, try to write it in a more simple way because I can hardly get your ideas.

I think I'll be your success and a beneficial one ... because of my experience in communicating with others and the ability in solving problems, persuading those around me and always develop myself.

I have big ambitions and dreams for the future and I'll achieve all of it when the war end