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|Essay on Why are you an ideal candidate for MSc in Business Analytics and how program will help?
NEW - why am i ideal candidate? My decision to pursue the Ivey MSc in Business Analytics is rooted in...
GraduateLove478 - Sep 17, 2023 / — -
|Statement of purpose for MS in Computer Science programs. I'm not sure how I should structure it.
Graduateanu_mh - Sep 16, 2023 / — -
|Personal statement for NUS maritime program application
2 - Well, a personal statement should not be an extensive academic biography of the student. So that is where the...
Graduateshowmaker - Sep 5, 2023 / Holt - Sep 16, 2023
|Statement of research interest for a Ph.D application in Quantum Gravity
NEW - Hello everyone. I am writing a statement of research interest (SRI henceforth) and a cover letter for a Ph.D...
GraduateProtonovich - Sep 13, 2023 / — -
|Personal Statement for MSc in Energy Systems at Oxford University
NEW - my interest in energy systems While pursuing my undergraduate degree in Petroleum Engineering at Institut Teknologi Bandung, I...
GraduateAJaya - Sep 8, 2023 / — -
|My Statement of Purpose for UT Austin for Electrical Engineering Program
2 - This is more of an academic biography than a statement of purpose. So you should consider rewriting the statement...
Graduatekanojreddy - Aug 18, 2023 / Holt - Aug 21, 2023
|Global Development and Education MA - application letter
NEW - Global Development and Education MA With this letter, I want to state my interest and apply for the...
Graduateerumitasan - Jun 29, 2023 / — -
|Anesthesiologist Assistant Personal Statement - your motivation for selecting a career in healthcare
2 - Consider revising the essay to focus more on the true reason or influence that directed you towards an AA...
Graduatepinkpanth - Jun 26, 2023 / Holt - Jun 27, 2023
|Statement of purpose/interest for admission into M.Sc. Food Science
2 - The focus of this essay is all wrong. As a statement of purpose for a masters course, your information...
Graduateayaan_9247 - Jun 18, 2023 / Holt - Jun 18, 2023
|Personal statement for admission into international development studies MA Program
2 - Were there writing prompts provided for this personal statement ? If no, then you should have provided it to...
Graduatesijuwade - Jun 15, 2023 / Holt - Jun 17, 2023
|Personal Statement for Anesthesia Assistant Master's Program
2 - Thre is a key feature missing in the story of your sister. How did that operation lead to your...
Graduatedodrop867 - May 28, 2023 / Holt - May 29, 2023
|SoP Parsons - MS Strategic Design and Management
2 - The writing in this work references you personal resume rather than a direct and proper focus on the given...
Graduateakubo - Apr 12, 2023 / Holt - Apr 13, 2023
|SOP for admission in Computer Science Masters for Dublin Universities as an international student
NEW - statement of purpose I am writing to express my strong interest in pursuing a Master's degree in Computer...
Graduatemerelyaname - Apr 8, 2023 / — -
|A PhD in translational medicine - scholarship essay to the University of Helsinki
2 - The essay needs to accomplish 2 things: 1. Be clearer in reference to how studying in Helsinki will benefit...
GraduateRichu96 - Mar 13, 2023 / Holt - Mar 14, 2023
|STATEMENT OF PURPOSE for MSc SOFTWARE ENGINEERING at FSU
NEW - STATEMENT OF PURPOSE for MSc SOFTWARE ENGINEERING My name is Name, and I am writing this statement of...
Graduateboybenson - Mar 12, 2023 / — -
|PERSONAL STATEMENT FOR MSC STRATEGIC MARKETING AND BRAND MANAGEMENT - UNIVERSITY OF HERTFORDSHIRE
4 - @TrangSilver29 My first thoughts on your essay was the word limits. Check and be sure of your limitations. Keep...
GraduateTrangSilver29 - Feb 27, 2023 / nawaf - Mar 8, 2023
|Statement of Purpose - Parsons The New School - Strategic Design and Management - MS
3 - @Holt My fascination grew towards the modular furniture industry in the early stages of my career. I have worked...
GraduateSanketA - Feb 2, 2023 / SanketA - Feb 3, 2023
|MBA (Entrepreneurship and innovation) Personal Statement
2 - Please do not include an autobiography of your interest in the personal statement. While the discussion with your father...
Graduatezahrareza7828 - Jan 27, 2023 / Holt - Jan 28, 2023
|Clinical Epidemiology - Statement of Purpose for Graduate studies
2 - While your word usage is highly engaging and descriptive, I cannot say that it helped depict a clear purpose...
Graduateiamappiagyei - Jan 14, 2023 / Holt - Jan 15, 2023
|25 Random Things about Myself
2 - 1. If you haven't mentioned how your parents are employed in any other essay, add the information here to...
GraduateAmanrathoddd - Jan 12, 2023 / Holt - Jan 12, 2023
|LBS MBA Personal Statement; what would you contribute to your cohort? Using degree for the future.
Graduatekokosi - Jan 10, 2023 / kokosi - Jan 10, 2023
|Personal Statement for MSc in Finance in the UK
3 - Merged: Statement of Purpose for my MSc of Business and Finance at Warwick Business School The school...
Graduatechewbacauk - Jan 4, 2023 / chewbacauk - Jan 10, 2023
|Growing my technical roots genuinely - Statement of purpose for Materials Science Master MaMaSELF
2 - We recommend including complete information in your essay when you ask for advice. That includes your name orat least...
Graduateliliquestions - Jan 3, 2023 / Holt - Jan 8, 2023
|Geoinformation and spatial science - statement of Purpose for Graduate studies
2 - One of the reasons that the forum members are required to provide unredacted essays is that complete information is...
Graduatenep1234 - Dec 29, 2022 / Holt - Jan 8, 2023
|My grad essay for Molecular Biology
5 - Also, I wrote it in the medical context because I am fascinated with clinical biochemistry and genetics. The hint...
GraduateAgyshine16 - Jan 3, 2023 / Agyshine16 - Jan 4, 2023
|To study mechatronics engineering - sop for stipendium hungaricum
Graduatedaydreamer12 - Jan 3, 2023 / — -
|Personal Statement - Warwick Business School, Msc Management Information System & Digital Innovation
Graduatewitjaksonostuden - Jan 2, 2023 / witjaksonostuden - Jan 3, 2023
|Personal Statement: Global Markets, Local Creativities; Industrial Dynamics and Sustainability
2 - The reasons you have chosen to study in specific countries should also indicate the university choices and how you...
Graduatearoojawan - Jan 1, 2023 / Holt - Jan 2, 2023
|SOP for pursuing a Master's in electrical and computer engineering; I am applying to EPFL
Graduateelanour65 - Dec 10, 2022 / elanour65 - Dec 30, 2022
|Motivation Letter for MS Data Science & AI (Specific Instructions)
3 - Hi, Thank you for comments. I have done courses from Coursera & Udemy though I couldn't go for...
GraduateBlackBeard31 - Dec 25, 2022 / BlackBeard31 - Dec 26, 2022
|Master Robotics - Statement of purpose for Graduate Schools
2 - This should be expanded in the presentation. Use this reference to explain your possible thesis and how doing...
Graduatehomeless131 - Dec 25, 2022 / Holt - Dec 26, 2022
|The Students' Union Council (SUC) - an ethical dilemma - TAMU prompt
4 - @Holt Here is a different premise. Kindly give your advice! You must start it in a new thread. ...
Graduateyshuks - Dec 17, 2022 / yshuks - Dec 18, 2022
|Food distribution. Personal Statement; Master of Supply Chain Management for University of Melbourne
4 - Merged: Personal Statement; Master of Supply Chain Management for University of Melbourne Hi guys! Already posted here,...
Graduatetoledoylopez - Dec 14, 2022 / toledoylopez - Dec 16, 2022
|Personal Statement - Oxford MSc Tropical Disease and International Health
3 - The opening line in a personal statement is very critical. It should be eye catching and provides a grimpse...
GraduateMatt1313 - Nov 26, 2022 / Ruth23 - Dec 15, 2022
|Statement of Purpose - MSc Computer Engineering - UT Austin - why graduation in Computer Science?
3 - I can't find out the specific answer to why you choose this school, why you choose computer science and...
Graduatelgecko - Dec 9, 2022 / txmdd - Dec 13, 2022
|Essay on what you are most passionate about and skills and achievement to support this
2 - The lack of evidence to back up there claims are what makes this response lackluster in presentation. The sense...
GraduateAlex_Tan - Dec 12, 2022 / Holt - Dec 13, 2022
|Statement of purpose for electrical and electronics masters at EPFL
2 - The first seven paragraphs should not exist in its current form. It comprises more than 75% of the essay...
Graduatesdjfhjh23r - Dec 10, 2022 / Holt - Dec 11, 2022
|Masters in mathematical engineering
2 - This essay does not respond in the least bit the given writing instructions. While this is a good personal...
Graduatewhynotme23 - Dec 8, 2022 / Holt - Dec 9, 2022
|Fascination with robotics. Statement of purpose ---- Masters in Robotics and Autonomous Systems
2 - The writer has not managed to write a statement of purpose. However, he did write a comprehensive academic and...
Graduatehighjack1311 - Dec 8, 2022 / Holt - Dec 9, 2022
|My statement of purpose for Msc Finance at LSE
Graduatesagebison - Nov 30, 2022 / Holt - Nov 30, 2022
|Statement of Purpose (University of Arizona). Interested in research on industrial waste recycling
3 - Thanks @Holts for the honest review. I will address the lapses in the statement as specified....
GraduateAlao0702 - Nov 14, 2022 / Alao0702 - Nov 30, 2022
|The art of storytelling - Texas MSBA essay prompt
3 - Hi @Holt, Thanks for your prompt assistance! The feedback seems valid now that I re-look at the essay with...
Graduatepriteshsingh19 - Nov 29, 2022 / priteshsingh19 - Nov 29, 2022
|SOP for Msc. in computational science and engineering - objectives to reach through studies at EPFL
2 - Revise the presentation to be more purpose targeted rather than academically focused. When writing a statement of purpose, it...
Graduateleodanbrock - Nov 23, 2022 / Holt - Nov 24, 2022
|Master of computer science - EPFL SOP; the objectives you wish to reach through your studies
2 - The academic background goes too much into the youth of the applicant. Start the academic background from college when...
Graduatebestlife - Nov 21, 2022 / Holt - Nov 22, 2022
|Embedded Systems. Statement of Purpose for EMECS Erusmus Mundus Scholarship Program
2 - I do not really see 2 related purposes in this presentation. As a reviewer, I will look for professional...
GraduateTajbid13 - Nov 20, 2022 / Holt - Nov 21, 2022
|Signal Processing and communication networks - my grad school essay
3 - @Holt Apologies as I missed out information to guide your review. I will appreciate your comments with these...
Graduatetayoo - Nov 18, 2022 / tayoo - Nov 18, 2022
|Professional, cultural experiences, career goals, Information systems
2 - It was Sonali Bendre Behl who just yesterday, in her Instagram account mentioned how children from India are strongly...
GraduateAsmodeus4 - Nov 17, 2022 / Holt - Nov 17, 2022
|GKS-G 2023 PERSONAL STATEMENT -The first time I knew I was meant to be a dentist-
4 - The essay is super long for that kind of personal statement. It is too wordy which makes the reader...
Graduateyaz010997111296 - Nov 10, 2022 / bunikjun - Nov 11, 2022
|Statement of Purpose for a Masters in Compuer Science / Data Science ETH Zurich
2 - The student has written an effective personal statement, which disqualifies this paper as a statement of purpose. It is...
GraduateBiiigie - Nov 6, 2022 / Holt - Nov 7, 2022
|Statament of Purpose for Phd Sport Pedagogy
2 - The statement of purpose must focus on discussing how the undergrad thesis set the tone for the college thesis,...
Graduatealtaufik - Oct 19, 2022 / Holt - Oct 20, 2022
|PERSONAL STATEMENT FOR A PHD PROGRAM (BIOLOGY) IN UNIVERSITY OF UTAH
2 - As far as a personal statement goes, this essay does its best to portray the Phd applicant in the...
GraduateTaylor X - Oct 4, 2022 / Holt - Oct 5, 2022
|Personal Statement for Masters Application - TU Munich
2 - I see the first 2 paragraphs as throw aways that spend too much time on an unnecessary backstory when...
Graduateedutta1999 - Sep 26, 2022 / Holt - Sep 27, 2022
|Statement of Purpose - Master's in Cognitive and Decision Sciences, UCL, UK
2 - Remove the first paragraph. The mention of Netflix made the professional application amateurish and worthy only of an undergraduate...
Graduateclawdiia - Sep 21, 2022 / Holt - Sep 22, 2022
|Personal Statement for Graduate Enrollment (Astronomy Major)
3 - Okay, that was my previous essay for a scholarship and here is the instructions. The essay should include...
Graduategoldeniseu - Sep 1, 2022 / goldeniseu - Sep 1, 2022
|Monash University Business Information Systems MSC-Scholarship Personal Statement
3 - @alex2022 Sorry not including the outlines. Scholarships are awarded to highly ranked students who can demonstrate their potential to...
Graduatealex2022 - Aug 27, 2022 / alex2022 - Aug 29, 2022
|What makes me a great fit for Universität Bremen? Statement of Purpose; Masters in Space Engineerin
GraduatearchUser - Aug 20, 2022 / archUser - Aug 28, 2022
|SOP for PhD in Computer Engineering - Professor has already onboarded me after conducting interview
2 - Unless the university does not allow the student applicant to mention that he has already been onboarded by a...
Graduatekeshavchaurasia - Aug 25, 2022 / Holt - Aug 25, 2022
|Statement of purpose for Masters degree in Sustainability - University of Southampton
GraduateBandirao - Aug 21, 2022 / Bandirao - Aug 22, 2022
|How to write an essay when switching majors from under graduation (Electronics) to Masters (CS)
2 - If the writer never performed any jobs outside of the computer software or computer science field, then he is...
Graduatesirish_rajuri - Aug 15, 2022 / Holt - Aug 15, 2022
|Statement of Purpose for a Software Engineering Graduate Program.
2 - Remember that this is a statement of purpose for someone who is switching careers. The applicant is going from...
GraduateNEO6754 - Aug 13, 2022 / Holt - Aug 14, 2022
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