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|SOP for masters entrance program for predictive analytics: need critique and have to shed 50 words!
2 - Tonya, unfortunately, you have taken the wrong approach to writing the SOP. What you have here is a personal...
Graduateluvmath1 - 18 hours ago / Holt - 38 mins ago
|Personal Statement for JHU Master of applied Econ program
4 - @Holt Hi,thank you for the reply. The admission requires a 250 words statement of purpose, would you like to...
Graduatexhuang72 - Aug 8, 2017 / xhuang72 - Aug 10, 2017
|SOP for admission/Scholarship into Phd program in International Development
GraduateMohannad_Abbas - Aug 7, 2017 / Holt - Aug 7, 2017
|Graduate Degree - opinions on Transfer Master's Student Personal Statement
4 - @darrydallen I have read your P.S ,and I'm sorry you had to go through all this difficulties.However, I think...
Graduatedarrydallen - Aug 7, 2017 / Ashkan123 - Aug 7, 2017
|Empowering poor people - my personal statement for graduate studies
3 - @Holt Thank you very much for your valuable comments I will revise the content again. Best wish...
Graduatemenchanbona - Aug 7, 2017 / menchanbona - Aug 7, 2017
|Forensic Psychology Entrance Essay - relationship with a person of different behaviour
Graduatethelemonstuff - Aug 1, 2017 / thelemonstuff - Aug 2, 2017
|What is professionalism in the context of a physical therapy doctorate program?
4 - @Holt I was also told to emphasize my massage background to strengthen the idea that I am coming into...
Graduatephamboy1971 - Aug 1, 2017 / phamboy1971 - Aug 2, 2017
|Why MBA, why Goodman? Comments for The Statement of Interest - application for MBA
4 - Emily, don't worry about any grammar problems in your essay. The reviewer knows you are not a native speaker...
GraduateLittleMissT - Jul 28, 2017 / Holt - Aug 1, 2017
|How this Statement of Goals and Objectives looks like?
4 - @Holt thanks Hi, The following is what the University want me to write about: "Submit a two-page...
Graduatek_ettaleb - Jul 27, 2017 / k_ettaleb - Jul 28, 2017
|PT School Entrance Essay First Draft
2 - @phamboy1 it is difficult for me to review your essay because it is too long and tries to accomplish...
Graduatephamboy1 - Jul 26, 2017 / Holt - Jul 26, 2017
|What goals do you have for yourself, including both personal and professionals goals?
6 - I think your draft is good, but you need to polish it a little bit more.For instance, your paragraphs...
Graduatemunkhjin23 - Jul 16, 2017 / Ashkan123 - Jul 19, 2017
|How to write a SOP for pursuing a master in computer engineering at University of South California?
4 - @Slumar206 Thank you for your feedback! @Holt Thank you for your careful and detailed revision. I will upload...
Graduatejelif - Jul 8, 2017 / jelif - Jul 8, 2017
|Professionalism as a DPT student. Physical Therapy Application Essay
3 - Alexandra, reader fatigue has a tendency to set in while reading your essay due to the redundant use of...
Graduatejohn3396 - Jul 5, 2017 / Holt - Jul 6, 2017
|Graduate Statement of Purpose for Biomedical Engineering in University of Toronto
2 - Kajal, the first paragraph is not required in a statement of purpose. The focus of the statement of purpose...
Graduatekajal12345 - Jun 25, 2017 / Holt - Jun 25, 2017
|Statement of Purpose for Master of Strategic Communication for University of Canberra
4 - Thanks for helping me out. Putting in everything you've said, let me know what you think of the revised...
Graduatefireflower_01 - Jun 7, 2017 / fireflower_01 - Jun 24, 2017
|Personal Statement : How I interested in Cultural Policy Program in University of Glasgow
3 - @Holt thank you for your suggestions holt. i will fix it soon, should I repost the updated essay? and,...
Graduateklarashati - Jun 14, 2017 / klarashati - Jun 15, 2017
|Motivation Letter for MSc in Information Systems - Studying in Germany
3 - @Holt Thanks for your honest review and a detailed explanation. I'll try to fix the letter as suggested. Thanks...
Graduatesheryessayforum - Jun 13, 2017 / sheryessayforum - Jun 13, 2017
|A significant situation where you were at the horns of ethical dilemma
2 - Tosin, an ethical dilemma is a situation wherein there is an option for you to violate an existing rule...
Graduatetizentos - Jun 8, 2017 / Holt - Jun 8, 2017
|Fulbright Application - It's been a hard day's night... Application for Music Composition Studies
GraduateLuisFLaya - May 27, 2017 / tizentos - Jun 8, 2017
|Education Plan for International Project Management Course
3 - @Holt Thank you so much for your advice. And as this website, if I want to private service from...
Graduatemaruko chan - Jun 3, 2017 / maruko chan - Jun 6, 2017
|An email massage to a Professor seeking for his supervisor ship for Masters Degree in Engineering.
4 - @Holt Tanks for ur suggestions and response...i really appreciate...i must confess to u, dat u are really doing a...
Graduatechumaessay - May 4, 2017 / chumaessay - May 9, 2017
|The reason to choose SMIB program.
4 - Tran, remove the opening sentence and closing sentence. Those are not necessary to the presentation of your discussion and...
Graduatelinhcu - May 4, 2017 / Holt - May 7, 2017
|GSIS program. Statement of Purpose for studying MSc International Trade in Korea
2 - Pham, this essay is more of a personal statement than a statement of purpose. In fact, it will be...
Graduatehangpham912 - Apr 30, 2017 / Holt - May 1, 2017
|Personal Statement for Master Finance and Banking
5 - @Holt OMG, I have waited for your comments since I posted my essay last day!!! Thanks so much...
GraduateYouyouvu - Apr 27, 2017 / Youyouvu - Apr 29, 2017
|Masters for Urban Planning - University of Melbourne fits best my future goals.
1 - my work and knowledge contribution I have done my graduation in Architecture. I believe my sensitivity about the...
Graduatearchna0517 - Apr 22, 2017 / — -
|Essay for master of laws program in the US
Graduateaz23 - Apr 16, 2017 / az23 - Apr 22, 2017
|An individual beyond grades and test scores; Personal Statement for Graduate Admission for Korea
Graduateeiriashhar - Apr 15, 2017 / eiriashhar - Apr 18, 2017
|I decided to study in Canada. Review my Study plan for Study permit
5 - Your response to the top most prompt is incorrect and not applicable. You are being asked to explain why...
GraduateTazNis - Apr 12, 2017 / Holt - Apr 13, 2017
|I NEED HELP WITH THIS LETTER OF INTENT FOR ADMISSION IN CANADA
2 - Franklin, your letter of intent needs to introduce the development of your interest in Philosophy as well as your...
Graduatemizcee16 - Apr 11, 2017 / Holt - Apr 11, 2017
|Statement of Purpose for M.A. in Global Studies at Sophia University
2 - Vu, you have not responded to the main reason that is being asked in this statement of purpose in...
GraduateTommyangelo - Apr 8, 2017 / Holt - Apr 9, 2017
|MSW Statement of Purpose; Master of Social Work
Graduateidvjr91 - Mar 30, 2017 / idvjr91 - Mar 31, 2017
|'Exceptional learning program' SOP for MS in Cyber Security Program(MSIT) / CMU
5 - Rahul, I need you to clarify an expression in paragraph 4 (paragraph 2 of your reviewed draft based on...
Graduaterk8558703 - Mar 22, 2017 / okorobiadimma14 - Mar 31, 2017
|SOP Environmental Science - broad learning experience
2 - Justin, you made it clear that this essay is for a statement of purpose. Therefore, there are some elements...
Graduatejus10go - Mar 30, 2017 / Holt - Mar 30, 2017
|SOP for MSc in Renewable energy to DEVELOP THAILAND
Graduatederndinn - Mar 26, 2017 / derndinn - Mar 29, 2017
|Why you wish to pursue a career in journalism.
Graduateankitak - Mar 29, 2017 / digaprasiska - Mar 29, 2017
|Personal Statement - Operations Research & Analytics/Business Analytics for university in the UK
3 - @Holt Hi Mary, thank you very much for the feedback. For the universities I am applying to, they...
Graduatenbasuns13 - Mar 26, 2017 / nbasuns13 - Mar 27, 2017
|Nursing is limitless; Nurse Practitioner personal statement
2 - Melissa, wanting to include the school motto or core values in your personal statement is a nice touch. Just...
Graduatemellymel11 - May 25, 2013 / Holt - Mar 27, 2017
|Urban Design - PERSONAL STATEMENT FOR GRADUATE APPLICATION FOR MASTERS
3 - Thanks Mary. I am not the graduate applicant. I am just helping some people out with their graduate application-pro...
Graduatechizy7 - Mar 26, 2017 / chizy7 - Mar 26, 2017
|To be able to handle a business takes time and experience. KGSP - SELF INTRODUCTION
Graduatekimyugyeom - Mar 14, 2017 / Maitouyen282 - Mar 18, 2017
|How your education and work, and life experience will contribute to your classmates' MBA experience
Graduateserikbar - Mar 16, 2017 / serikbar - Mar 17, 2017
|UK Engineering - Personal Statement for master course
3 - @ilskyilsky It feels like you are taking the reader through your resume, re-stating the positions you held between 2009...
Graduateilskyilsky - Mar 16, 2017 / serikbar - Mar 16, 2017
|My health and management interest : Statement of Purpose for an MSc in Management
5 - @Holt Thanks for the clarification, I'm definitely taking the advice about the age reference....
Graduateamevialord - Mar 14, 2017 / amevialord - Mar 14, 2017
|Not all heated glass crack. Statement of Purpose for Material Science and Engineering
4 - Saubana, there are a few things that you can still do to improve this essay. The first, is to...
Graduatesolastar2 - Mar 11, 2017 / Holt - Mar 14, 2017
|Underdog wants to sit at the big kids table- University of Miami Graduate Admissions Essay
5 - Eva, the first part of your essay still sounds more like the information came from the brochure or website...
Graduateevaruiz714 - Mar 7, 2017 / Holt - Mar 13, 2017
|Motivation Letter for General Linguistics at Radboud University
Graduatechoerunnisa23 - Feb 16, 2017 / choerunnisa23 - Mar 13, 2017
|To materialize my career goals and aspirations - SOP for Masters in analytics
5 - Kamal, you are not writing an SEO based essay therefore, you do not need to focus on the technical...
Graduatekumar1983 - Mar 10, 2017 / Holt - Mar 11, 2017
|RESUME FOR GRADUATE ADMISSION (without prompt)
2 - Chizaram, you have most of the presentation correct in that the sections are the required information in a resume...
Graduatechizy7 - Mar 10, 2017 / Holt - Mar 11, 2017
|Speech language pathology SOP /explains career change and poor undergrad grades
2 - Trishanne, are you applying for masters degree school acceptance? If so, then you need not worry about your problematic...
GraduateTrishanneth - Mar 10, 2017 / Holt - Mar 10, 2017
|Autobiography for Master of the International Institute of Medical Device Innovation (MDI)
8 - @Holt Hello Mary, After discussing with my mentor, I will rewrite another autobiography. Thank you very much....
Graduatemakila0123 - Mar 8, 2017 / makila0123 - Mar 9, 2017
|My study plan for KGSP 2017 in MSA /Master in Accountancy/
3 - Hello ) I think, you may include specified information (in the paragraph with thesis), such as which methods and...
Graduateazaa1428 - Mar 6, 2017 / SiiaBirill - Mar 9, 2017
|Self introduction for Master degree in different field from undergraduate degree.
5 - Hello) May be you can include the information of your personal character. Not directly, but probably, through some wishes...
Graduatejewjewmabushii - Feb 24, 2017 / SiiaBirill - Mar 9, 2017
|Motivation Letter in Geo-information for Natural Hazards, Risk, and Engineering Master Degree
4 - @Holt Thank you, I'll work on that. @bagusstyawan, thank you, for that sentence i am trying to say...
Graduatehafizfatah - Mar 7, 2017 / hafizfatah - Mar 9, 2017
|My statement of purpose for MS in electrical engineering (Renewable energy) - UK admission
9 - yes I understand. Hats off to your effort,really appreciated. wish you good for up coming essays :)...
GraduateSibil - Mar 6, 2017 / Sibil - Mar 8, 2017
|KGSP Graduate 2017 - Letter of Self-Introduction - Education: to learn and to share
3 - Merysa, your essay is good, but it needs to be better directed in the format that the KGSP requires....
Graduatemeryysaaa - Mar 7, 2017 / Holt - Mar 8, 2017
|SCAD Statement of Purpose for applying to Graduate MA Illustration or MA Graphic Design
4 - You should try to expand upon the idea regarding how you hope that SCAD can help you find your...
Graduatelekrado - Mar 6, 2017 / Holt - Mar 7, 2017
|Stable career in Bangladesh. Letter of Motivation for Admission in a masters program
2 - Tabassum, you have confused your personal statement for a letter of motivation. A letter of motivation is just that,...
GraduateTAhmed - Mar 6, 2017 / Holt - Mar 6, 2017
|Three things others do not know about me
3 - @Holt Mary, thanks for sharing your thoughts. I was considering including "talking to myself out loud when I'm alone"...
Graduateserikbar - Mar 4, 2017 / serikbar - Mar 6, 2017
|The Study Plan for Consulate General of Canada - recommended educational direction
10 - I was just informed by General Consulate of Canada in Hochiminh that they have approved for my study plan...
Graduatehenrychen - Jan 23, 2017 / henrychen - Mar 6, 2017
|The best curriculum that suits my needs. Need Assistance for KGSP Self Introduction Essay Evaluation
6 - Krishna, this essay is complete and detailed enough to stand as a comprehensive self introduction essay. While it seems...
Graduatesoosil - Feb 27, 2017 / Holt - Mar 5, 2017
|USC Marshall / What's the hardest thing you have ever done?
4 - The essay does not express industrious task you have suffered. I believe you should express how hard you tried...
GraduateIanthexx - Feb 27, 2017 / paras01 - Mar 3, 2017
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