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|Development of energy-efficient devices - PTDF statement of purpose
4 - I have made some adjustments. Please help me identify where still need changes. Thanks a million I...
Graduatejoshbj360 - Jan 12, 2022 / joshbj360 - 2 days ago
|SOP for mathematical finance - the master's level at Universiti Teknologi Brunei (UTB)
2 - To create an effective statement of purpose, the applicant must create a convincing academic and career driven reason for...
GraduateEmmydon - Jan 20, 2022 / Holt - Jan 20, 2022
|STATEMENT OF PURPOSE- MS STATISTICS FOR UNIVERSITIES IN USA
5 - @Tulasse I only need to submit a statement of purpose and no personal statement. Should I still remove the...
GraduateXever - Jan 17, 2022 / Xever - Jan 17, 2022
|Motivation for science and engineering - SOP for GENIAL GrEen NetworkIng And cLoud computing program
Graduateadewale0630 - Jan 8, 2022 / adewale0630 - Jan 16, 2022
|Aerospace Engineering Motivation for KTH - the master's program at the University of Pisa, Italy
2 - The first paragraph is a throw away. The introduction it provides does not move the essay forward and fails...
Graduatekescienku - Jan 16, 2022 / Holt - Jan 16, 2022
|MS in Human Computer Interaction | Statement of Purpose
3 - Merged: MS in Human Computer Interaction at Georgia Tech | Statement of Pupose Please provide a critique...
GraduateAnmolMishra20 - Jan 3, 2022 / AnmolMishra20 - Jan 15, 2022
|SOP for SJPES program - UN's sustainable development goals
3 - @Holt Thank you so much for your review. The deadline of this program was rescheduled to 15th Feb....
Graduatehn0x - Jan 11, 2022 / hn0x - Jan 14, 2022
|European Master in Public health with a specialization in Advanced Biostatistics and Epidemiology
2 - The first paragraph should be completely removed. It sounds very amateurish. Almost as if you are applying to college...
Graduatexzibit - Jan 10, 2022 / Holt - Jan 11, 2022
|Personal Statement for GKS-G 2022 Scholarship for Masters in Spanish Language and Literature
2 - Name the title, publication date, and volume number so that the reviewer can exercise the option to verify...
GraduateRutujaM - Dec 29, 2021 / Holt - Dec 30, 2021
|Masters of Health Informatics U of Waterloo.
2 - Definitely a dramatic opening that sets up an exciting personal statement, only to be disappointed by the succeeding...
GraduateRas_Patrick - Dec 29, 2021 / Holt - Dec 29, 2021
|Letter Of Motivation - Master in Technical Management
Graduatelalitkumar - Dec 28, 2021 / lalitkumar - Dec 28, 2021
|Need review for my sop for MS in data science; The capacity to discriminate between what you know...
2 - This is a highly arrogant, condescending and irritating personal statement. If this is how you choose to present yourself...
GraduateSivasankar - Dec 25, 2021 / Holt - Dec 25, 2021
|Personal Statement - Digital Business Management
3 - @Holt Thank you so much for your feedback. I have edited it again and I'd love your feedback once...
Graduateessaadia - Dec 20, 2021 / essaadia - Dec 23, 2021
|Erasmus Mundus Masters in Central and East European, Russian and Eurasian Studies Personal Statement
3 - Last paragraph where you said that you want to study in Europe because of their political and economic action...
GraduateMeerimia1 - Dec 18, 2021 / monicaaa0017 - Dec 21, 2021
|"Review on SOP for MS-CS/MCS with work experiences in 2 different companies"
3 - Thank you Mary for your precious time and review. Below is the modified SOP which I have mentioned as...
Graduatevaradsanpurkar - Dec 13, 2021 / varadsanpurkar - Dec 20, 2021
|Professional and cultural experiences shaped your career goals/ how this major will help to that
3 - @Holt Thank you so much for the review. i really appreciate it. Considering this is my first draft and...
Graduatesravyareddyk - Dec 14, 2021 / sravyareddyk - Dec 14, 2021
|Warwick essay draft a brief (4,500 characters maximum) personal statement
2 - The mention of your parents as your first motivating factor requires more explanation and motivation development. What jobs do...
Graduatekentseng - Dec 11, 2021 / Holt - Dec 12, 2021
|Personal Statement for MSc Finance & Accounting in Westminster
Graduateleesol - Nov 24, 2021 / Mehul07 - Dec 10, 2021
|MSc Data Science UK - Personal Statement; What makes me an excellent candidate for this program?
Graduateshellhead - Dec 4, 2021 / Mehul07 - Dec 10, 2021
|MSc Business Analytics - Why are you an ideal candidate and how will the program help achieve goals?
2 - You appear to be a highly skilled candidate for your course of choice. However, these skills are over discussed...
GraduateMehul07 - Dec 8, 2021 / Holt - Dec 8, 2021
|Pharmacy (Medicinal Chemistry) - Personal Statement
2 - When you write a personal statement, do not focus on your academic background and community leadership. The personal statement,...
Graduatewhh123 - Dec 5, 2021 / Holt - Dec 6, 2021
|LoM - Argument of an engineering student applying for masters in global development policy - EMJMD
2 - Sadly, you have not developed a compelling argument because your presentation takes on a personal statement direction rather than...
GraduateSSS2022 - Dec 4, 2021 / Holt - Dec 5, 2021
|[NEED REVIEW] "I find Data Science fascinating" - Statement of Purpose for Master of Data Science
2 - What a lovely personal statement. Too bad it failed to contain any actual reference to the purpose for your...
GraduateKavan14 - Dec 3, 2021 / Holt - Dec 4, 2021
|[Need Review] Statement of Purpose - MS in Artificial Intelligence and Data Science (Summer 2022)
2 - Your statement of purpose feels over extended and needs to be whittled down to only 750-1000 words. It tends...
GraduateVJain - Dec 2, 2021 / Holt - Dec 2, 2021
|Motivation Statement for MS Game and Media Technology in Utrecht University
Graduateboringjill - Nov 26, 2021 / Holt - Nov 27, 2021
|STATEMENT OF PURPOSE for Vehicle Engineering
3 - Thanks for the review. I would take all your advices into consideration and arrange a better SOP. Regards....
Graduatelenjoy - Nov 4, 2021 / lenjoy - Nov 19, 2021
|Statement of Purpose - Parsons School of Design - MPS Communication Design - reasons for applying
2 - The main problem with this essay is the way it focuses a majority of the discussion on your background....
GraduateKotekSroka - Nov 15, 2021 / Holt - Nov 16, 2021
|Technology trend that may impact your target career. - MS Business Analytics Essay for CUNY.
2 - Based on the emerging trend, how do you see it affecting your current carell as an obstacle towards your...
GraduateKhushi123 - Nov 13, 2021 / Holt - Nov 14, 2021
|MOTIVATION STATEMENT FOR MASTER OF ART IN POPULATION STUDIES
2 - You have written this essay without any consideration for the readily available discussion guidelines for the motivational letter. There...
Graduatefkoomson - Nov 12, 2021 / Holt - Nov 13, 2021
|Personal Statement for MSc of Statistics and Data Science at University of KU Leuven
2 - The motivation of the writer got lost in translation. The presentation, with heavy editing, will work as a personal...
Graduatexmcmay - Nov 10, 2021 / Holt - Nov 11, 2021
|Apply MSc finance programme in Trinity College Dublin
NEW - Plz give me advices about my personal statements. ( limitation of 500 words, How can I rewrite some parts...
GraduateHogf - Nov 8, 2021 / — -
|Statement of Purpose for masters program in Computer Science in the USA - Review request
2 - The second paragraph should have a clearer purpose for your studies. The series of questions does not signify any...
Graduaterandom888 - Nov 7, 2021 / Holt - Nov 8, 2021
|Personal Statement for MSc in Data Science at University of Michigan
NEW - Hi everyone! For editing, content, and formatting needs please contact us at firstname.lastname@example.org. Thank you! EF Personal...
Graduateomkarkharkar1634 - Nov 7, 2021 / — -
|Review My SOP for PhD in Nuclear thermal hydraulics
GraduateNikesh - Oct 28, 2021 / Holt - Oct 29, 2021
|My passion for improving health and well-being. SOP FOR GLOBAL PUBLIC HEALTH
2 - This comes across.more as a cover or motivational letter. It does not contain the correct focus on the purpose...
GraduateDrfon - Oct 12, 2021 / Holt - Oct 13, 2021
|Personal Statement - MFA In Film Production (NYU, UCLA, Columbia)
NEW - Please refer to our private review services at email@example.com since you specific review specifications. Free review only covers general...
Graduaterhythm23 - Oct 9, 2021 / — -
|'The need to bridge the gaps in my skills' - Statement of Purpose review for MS in computer science
NEW - There is no specific prompt I am trying to answer. So this is a general statement of purpose. ...
Graduatenaeempatel010 - Oct 7, 2021 / — -
|Personal Statement for Postgraduate Study. University in United Kingdom (Development Studies)
2 - The personal statement should never be the biography of the student in any fform. Where a motivational statement is...
Graduateaktivasi - Sep 24, 2021 / Holt - Sep 26, 2021
|Statement of purpose - OSLOMET Norway- MS-Applied Computer and Information Technology
2 - Expand on this portion. Specifically, discuss academic accomplishments, related research work, and any other academic participation that will...
Graduateshroud - Sep 19, 2021 / Holt - Sep 21, 2021
|STATEMENT OF PURPOSE MS MECHATRONICS AND CONTROL SYSTEM.
NEW - master program application I am applying for master in mechatronics, I have written an introduction paragraph in which...
Graduateharoonrasheed - Sep 20, 2021 / — -
|Ticket to my higher studies
Graduatesidharth jeyabal - Sep 17, 2021 / sidharth jeyabal - Sep 18, 2021
|Statement of Purpose - UC Berkeley - Data Science
3 - @Holt Thank you so much for the helpful advise and suggestion! I have revised the essay as the...
Graduatekittybetty - Sep 4, 2021 / kittybetty - Sep 9, 2021
|Psychologists online - FUTURE PLAN - KGSP GRADUATE PROGRAM
4 - @miss123 The plan conveys a clear direction of your career, but there is more you can elaborate. In addition...
Graduatemiss123 - Aug 27, 2021 / Kyaw Ye Thu - Aug 31, 2021
|Statement of research interest - Applied to Master's Computer Science
2 - The essay needs to be refocused to provide clear responses to the prompts alone. Do not overdiscuss things by...
GraduatePraew_chprd - Aug 22, 2021 / Holt - Aug 23, 2021
|Statement of Purpose - what area of CS interests you particularly? Masters in Computer Science
2 - Half of this paper is a personal statement. The first half should be removed from this presentation as it...
Graduatesneha2312 - Aug 20, 2021 / Holt - Aug 21, 2021
|Electrical engineering - SOP for graduate school computer science
2 - The problem is that you wrote a personal statement, showing the growth of your interest in Computer science rather...
Graduatenephele - Jul 25, 2021 / Holt - Jul 26, 2021
|Critique my statement of purpose for masters in quantum engineering
2 - Without knowing if there are specific writing requirements for this SOP, I would have to say that this type...
GraduateVatsy31 - Jul 10, 2021 / Holt - Jul 11, 2021
|Study plan for a new career path and study optician program in Canada
2 - The essay shows that the applicant hasa keen interest in studying in canada but does not show a strong...
Graduatesiuned1988 - Jul 9, 2021 / Holt - Jul 10, 2021
|Statement of purpose for Data science course - graduate application
2 - The overall essay is not meant as a statement of purpose. This writing, showing the development of the student's...
Graduateashik_123 - Jun 28, 2021 / Holt - Jun 29, 2021
|Study plan for MEng Civil Engineering, University of Windsor, Canada
2 - The reason for seeking a residency permit sound more like you are eventually planning to apply for citizenship in...
Graduatemana_ne - Jun 23, 2021 / Holt - Jun 25, 2021
|Personal statement - reason to take the specialization: boost my career vs problem to solve
2 - Neither. For the personal statement, you should show the progression of your interest leading into data science. The...
Graduateevita126 - May 30, 2021 / Holt - May 31, 2021
|Erasmus Mundus Masters in Social Work for Children and Family
GraduateSRazaque - May 27, 2021 / SRazaque - May 28, 2021
|Education is the key to opportunity - Why did you choose your proposed course and institution*?
Graduateeternal1703 - May 16, 2021 / eternal1703 - May 17, 2021
|SOP for Master in Data Science; I aspire to teach and research at a university/research center
Graduateeosopoku - May 10, 2021 / eosopoku - May 16, 2021
|MY MOTIVATION LETTER FOR Msc SUSTAINABLE MANAGEMENT
2 - You can easily use this essay as a personal statement as it carries an in-depth look at the development...
Graduatedemorich - May 15, 2021 / Holt - May 16, 2021
|Career Change or Background Change
2 - The masters course is always determined by your work experience in relation to your work experience. While some universities...
Graduatesrijal - May 6, 2021 / Holt - May 7, 2021
|In no more than 250 words, describe a real-life example of how strategic communication was used.
GraduateRatudestiani - May 4, 2021 / Ratudestiani - May 4, 2021
|Data Science - [AAS Essay - class of 2021] Why did you choose your proposed course and institution?
2 - Develop the reasons why you chose the courses at these universities. Aside from the textbook information that you found...
Graduatembimbagaskara - May 4, 2021 / Holt - May 4, 2021
|Strategic Communication - Statement of Academic Purpose
2 - You do not present a clear purpose for your studies in relation to your existing skills.You are stopping short...
GraduateRatudestiani - May 4, 2021 / Holt - May 4, 2021
|Earthquake engineering - study plan for visa application
2 - Your essay is good but falls a bit short of the actual information consideration for a Canadian student visa...
GraduateS_ammady - May 2, 2021 / Holt - May 2, 2021
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