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|Statement of purpose for PhD in Environmental Engineering. Any kind of help is appreciated.
NEW - My interest in Civil Engineering was sparked during my first undergraduate course at xyz. It was there that I...
Graduateaxelhead - 1 hour ago / — -
|I am the the example of globalisation. SOP for MSc of International Business/Management in the UK
2 - Daniel, this is not a statement of purpose, this is a personal statement. So you need to use this...
Graduateveerazeguet - 9 hours ago / Holt - 7 hours ago
|Being able to attend a UWC for 2 years would serve as my golden opportunity to achieve my goals
2 - Raqib, you cannot just say that you read something about UWC that made you realize that this is what...
GraduateRaqibzzz - 13 hours ago / Holt - 13 hours ago
|Need input of MS Environmental Studies Statement of Purpose - graduate program
4 - thank you both for your input. @ Holt, I am graduating with my BS in Environmental Studies in May...
GraduateAlyssa85b - 1 day ago / Alyssa85b - 1 day ago
|Letter of Motivation for MAIA Erasmus Mundus Scholarship - what fascinates me?
2 - Anam, the first rule of writing an Erasmus Mundus Letter of Motivation is that you avoid flowery language and...
GraduateAnamZahra - Oct 16, 2017 / Holt - Oct 16, 2017
|SOP for MS in Business Analytics; the dynamic field of big data analytics, predictive analytics
9 - @admission2012 @Holt Hi All, I have revised the draft of my SOP. Kindly review the same. Thanks...
Graduatejdutta1992 - Oct 10, 2017 / jdutta1992 - Oct 16, 2017
|Essay for MS in Commerce at UVA - describe the unique aspects of your background and motivations
3 - @Holt Thank you so much for your feedback. I would have never notice school's great emphasis on academic...
Graduatemingru - Oct 16, 2017 / mingru - Oct 16, 2017
|Essay for MSF in Carey Business School - Business with humanity. Need your advices
4 - @Holt Thank you so much for your advice! I agree to what you've said about my past experience prior...
Graduatemingru - Oct 16, 2017 / mingru - Oct 16, 2017
|SOP for Masters in Data Science program in Northeastern University
5 - @Holt thank you for your input. my recommenders wrote about how i changed in their letters and my transcripts...
Graduaterevanth92 - Oct 16, 2017 / revanth92 - Oct 16, 2017
|B-School Graduate Essay (within 500-word) - marketing program MS at the Carey business school of JHU
4 - I'm applying for Carey this year as well. Just based on what I've known about their 'business with humanity'...
GraduateHonghaoli - Oct 8, 2017 / mingru - Oct 16, 2017
|Statement of Purpose for the Data Science Graduate program.
6 - this is very lenghty. make it short. i'm applying to a data science program too. help me with my...
GraduateSb_Dat_grad - Sep 15, 2017 / revanth92 - Oct 16, 2017
|I am writing my Canada Visa SOP. I would like to add the introduction in unique way.
2 - Shirish, you need to change the start of your essay. It carries information that is not relevant to your...
GraduateShirish - Oct 14, 2017 / Holt - Oct 14, 2017
|General SOP for MS/MEng in Computer Science Programs
2 - Kevin, here is the thing. You seem to be a so-called "professional student" or a person who seeks so...
GraduateWigoHunter - Oct 13, 2017 / Holt - Oct 13, 2017
|SOP Help. Essay for MS in Business Analytics Program ( 1 Page Limit)
2 - Harshit, the essay that you wrote is alright as a draft. it pretty much gives you a starting point...
GraduateHarry2604 - Oct 12, 2017 / Holt - Oct 13, 2017
|SOP - Ms Analytics at Georgia Institute of Technology
4 - @Holt Hi Holt, I am sure you'll be busy but I would really appreciate a response whenever you're free....
Graduateakshaykher - Oct 9, 2017 / akshaykher - Oct 12, 2017
|Application Essay for a Speech Pathology Program
3 - Taylor, you have way too much information in this essay. So much so that it is extremely difficult to...
Graduatespeechie96 - Oct 10, 2017 / Holt - Oct 11, 2017
|Born in Mongolia, converted to Christianity, study Mongolian, job as radio editor and teaching
3 - @Holt Thank you for your detailed advise. You really saw the weakness there. I didn't know how to connect...
GraduateBillG - Oct 10, 2017 / BillG - Oct 10, 2017
|First draft of Statement of Purpose for Chemical Engineering (MS). Criticism is extremely welcome!
GraduateOftheWarsong - Oct 5, 2017 / OftheWarsong - Oct 7, 2017
|What is professionalism as a student in a doctor of physical therapist degree program
GraduateEagernew - Oct 2, 2017 / Eagernew - Oct 3, 2017
|Formal training in MIS from the Northern Illinois - a personal statement in less than 500 words
Graduaterevanth92 - Oct 2, 2017 / revanth92 - Oct 3, 2017
|Issue Essay for GRE AWA section - Teaching using the positive actions method, skip the negatives
2 - Malik, this essay is not well developed. It has logic and reasoning presentation problems, grammar structure issues, and coherence...
Graduatemalikakbaar - Oct 2, 2017 / Holt - Oct 2, 2017
|I will be a much more professional and reflective teacher after your program; Graduate admission
3 - Anthea, you lost sight of the actual topic for discussion in this essay. The actual discussion is: Tell us...
Graduateantheacyp - Sep 29, 2017 / Holt - Sep 30, 2017
|Public Health: A leap towards an NCD-free community
2 - Jumana, skip the reference to your being in Kindergarten and then and there deciding to be a doctor. You...
Graduatejoana93 - Sep 28, 2017 / Holt - Sep 28, 2017
|Master of Science in Human Resource Management - Statement of Purpose
2 - Navjotkaur, your essay is too wordy to the point where it gets exhausting to read it. Are you trying...
GraduateYearnforsuccess - Sep 27, 2017 / Holt - Sep 27, 2017
|Draft Academic Statement of Purpose for School of Information Univ. of Michigan
4 - @Holt Hi thanks so much for your advice it help me a lot, honestly I really confuse about what...
Graduateruby selenium - Sep 23, 2017 / ruby selenium - Sep 24, 2017
|Explain your short-term (immediately post MSF) and long-term career goals. Vanderbilt Finance degree
Graduatetianhanh - Sep 21, 2017 / tianhanh - Sep 23, 2017
|There are many reasons that Computer Science become my chosen field. Personal Statement.
6 - Holt, Many thanks for the valuable advice. Now I will try to make it better and relevant for Master...
GraduateSabuhiYusif - Sep 22, 2017 / SabuhiYusif - Sep 23, 2017
|Plans to apply for KGSP-G via University Track- Study Plan- My First Draft
2 - Bea, the first half of your essay totally sets the tone for your study plan and goal of study...
GraduatehelloKoreanPanda - Sep 22, 2017 / Holt - Sep 23, 2017
|I hope that I pass all the parameters for admission into this Graduate Program. Data Science SOP
2 - Akshat, your theoretical skills based on your college education is admirable. However, it may not be enough to propel...
Graduateakshatism - Sep 20, 2017 / Holt - Sep 21, 2017
|Application essay for MA in Fashion Marketing
4 - @Holt @SeilaKey Hi Guys:) Thanks for the reply, sorry for not making my essay clear to reader. It's a...
Graduateastoldbytima - Sep 19, 2017 / astoldbytima - Sep 20, 2017
|My SOP for pursuing MSBA (Master of Business Analytics) in the U.S
4 - Hello, This is actually a good start in that you presented a logical progression as to how you...
GraduateChristy1997 - Sep 18, 2017 / admission2012 - Sep 20, 2017
|MBA Dream from India - does this SOP sounds more like a Personal Statement?
GraduateYearnforsuccess - Sep 17, 2017 / pg13Taiwan - Sep 18, 2017
|Statement of Purpose - Applying for M.S. in Machine Learning Graduate Programs in the US.
2 - Gibran, your hypothetical discussions are good. Your thesis project is impressive, and your ambition to digitize the records of...
Graduatedarknight99 - Sep 17, 2017 / Holt - Sep 18, 2017
|Motivation Letter - Masters in Artificial Intelligence in Netherlands
Graduatelogeekal - Sep 16, 2017 / logeekal - Sep 17, 2017
|Anesthesiologist Assistant Program Personal Statement
2 - Kim, has anyone ever told you that admissions officers do not really believe that a child at the age...
Graduatelinashk - Sep 15, 2017 / Holt - Sep 15, 2017
|Post Degree in Business Administration Study Plan - UAE Canada Embassy for Langara College
Graduatedecember - Sep 14, 2017 / december - Sep 14, 2017
|Professionalism - Docterate of Physical Therapy Application Essay for PTCAS
GraduatePTdude - Sep 12, 2017 / PTstudent221 - Sep 12, 2017
|Physical Therapy students are held to a high degree of professionalism.
GraduatePTstudent221 - Sep 12, 2017 / PTstudent221 - Sep 12, 2017
|Choosing Masters in Australia - such a multi - cultural and forward thinking country
5 - @Holt Kindly check my new personal statement , i had framed it keeping your points in mind. Please guide...
GraduateYaseeraraf - Sep 8, 2017 / Yaseeraraf - Sep 10, 2017
|The University of Southampton became my choice. My First Attempt in Writing Personal Statement
4 - Kayode, the personal statement needs to show a better reason for your choice of university than just becoming interested...
Graduatekayus - Sep 7, 2017 / Holt - Sep 8, 2017
|My transcendence to Geotechnical engineer. I feel my essay is lacking something
2 - Tirivashe, I cannot tell what might be missing in this letter of introduction because you did not provide me...
Graduatetiriegumbie - Sep 6, 2017 / Holt - Sep 7, 2017
|How to look stand out in your self introduction of KGSP Graduate
4 - @Holt hello, me again! i'm sorry holt, but i really confused what i have to write in my first...
GraduateSeilaKey - Aug 30, 2017 / SeilaKey - Sep 3, 2017
|Personal Statement Of Film, Television and New Media
3 - @Holt Thanks a lot for your advices which I need urgently and I will make some changes according to...
GraduateLindsay1105 - Aug 29, 2017 / Lindsay1105 - Aug 30, 2017
|ISB YLP essay 1-Your role in a team that made a significant contribution to the organization/college
2 - Supreet, don't mention the second group anymore because you are only being asked to represent one organization or college...
Graduatesupreet20 - Aug 25, 2017 / Holt - Aug 26, 2017
|The Program for the Exceptionally Gifted at Mary Baldwin University. Medical School Personal essay.
3 - Thanks for the comments @Holt, the question was actually: Please describe something in your life that has given you...
Graduatehalsy9 - Aug 22, 2017 / halsy9 - Aug 24, 2017
|Commitment to working in a diverse population as a Nurse
2 - Your essay is not a personal response essay. You created a research based opinion paper instead. What the prompt...
Graduater1357 - Aug 23, 2017 / Holt - Aug 23, 2017
|Med School Essay on Domestic Violence
3 - @Holt Thank you so much for your kind words. And you are definitely right. Looking over it now, I...
Graduatepremedmama - Aug 18, 2017 / premedmama - Aug 21, 2017
|SOP for masters entrance program for predictive analytics: need critique and have to shed 50 words!
2 - Tonya, unfortunately, you have taken the wrong approach to writing the SOP. What you have here is a personal...
Graduateluvmath1 - Aug 15, 2017 / Holt - Aug 16, 2017
|Personal Statement for JHU Master of applied Econ program
4 - @Holt Hi,thank you for the reply. The admission requires a 250 words statement of purpose, would you like to...
Graduatexhuang72 - Aug 8, 2017 / xhuang72 - Aug 10, 2017
|SOP for admission/Scholarship into Phd program in International Development
GraduateMohannad_Abbas - Aug 7, 2017 / Holt - Aug 7, 2017
|Graduate Degree - opinions on Transfer Master's Student Personal Statement
4 - @darrydallen I have read your P.S ,and I'm sorry you had to go through all this difficulties.However, I think...
Graduatedarrydallen - Aug 7, 2017 / Ashkan123 - Aug 7, 2017
|Empowering poor people - my personal statement for graduate studies
3 - @Holt Thank you very much for your valuable comments I will revise the content again. Best wish...
Graduatemenchanbona - Aug 7, 2017 / menchanbona - Aug 7, 2017
|Forensic Psychology Entrance Essay - relationship with a person of different behaviour
Graduatethelemonstuff - Aug 1, 2017 / thelemonstuff - Aug 2, 2017
|What is professionalism in the context of a physical therapy doctorate program?
4 - @Holt I was also told to emphasize my massage background to strengthen the idea that I am coming into...
Graduatephamboy1971 - Aug 1, 2017 / phamboy1971 - Aug 2, 2017
|Why MBA, why Goodman? Comments for The Statement of Interest - application for MBA
4 - Emily, don't worry about any grammar problems in your essay. The reviewer knows you are not a native speaker...
GraduateLittleMissT - Jul 28, 2017 / Holt - Aug 1, 2017
|How this Statement of Goals and Objectives looks like?
4 - @Holt thanks Hi, The following is what the University want me to write about: "Submit a two-page...
Graduatek_ettaleb - Jul 27, 2017 / k_ettaleb - Jul 28, 2017
|PT School Entrance Essay First Draft
2 - @phamboy1 it is difficult for me to review your essay because it is too long and tries to accomplish...
Graduatephamboy1 - Jul 26, 2017 / Holt - Jul 26, 2017
|What goals do you have for yourself, including both personal and professionals goals?
6 - I think your draft is good, but you need to polish it a little bit more.For instance, your paragraphs...
Graduatemunkhjin23 - Jul 16, 2017 / Ashkan123 - Jul 19, 2017
|How to write a SOP for pursuing a master in computer engineering at University of South California?
4 - @Slumar206 Thank you for your feedback! @Holt Thank you for your careful and detailed revision. I will upload...
Graduatejelif - Jul 8, 2017 / jelif - Jul 8, 2017
|Professionalism as a DPT student. Physical Therapy Application Essay
3 - Alexandra, reader fatigue has a tendency to set in while reading your essay due to the redundant use of...
Graduatejohn3396 - Jul 5, 2017 / Holt - Jul 6, 2017
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