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|Personal Statement for Master Finance and Banking
5 - @Holt OMG, I have waited for your comments since I posted my essay last day!!! Thanks so much...
GraduateYouyouvu - 1 day ago / Youyouvu - 1 hour ago
|Masters for Urban Planning - University of Melbourne fits best my future goals.
1 - my work and knowledge contribution I have done my graduation in Architecture. I believe my sensitivity about the...
Graduatearchna0517 - Apr 22, 2017 / — -
|Essay for master of laws program in the US
Graduateaz23 - Apr 16, 2017 / az23 - Apr 22, 2017
|An individual beyond grades and test scores; Personal Statement for Graduate Admission for Korea
Graduateeiriashhar - Apr 15, 2017 / eiriashhar - Apr 18, 2017
|I decided to study in Canada. Review my Study plan for Study permit
5 - Your response to the top most prompt is incorrect and not applicable. You are being asked to explain why...
GraduateTazNis - Apr 12, 2017 / Holt - Apr 13, 2017
|I NEED HELP WITH THIS LETTER OF INTENT FOR ADMISSION IN CANADA
2 - Franklin, your letter of intent needs to introduce the development of your interest in Philosophy as well as your...
Graduatemizcee16 - Apr 11, 2017 / Holt - Apr 11, 2017
|Statement of Purpose for M.A. in Global Studies at Sophia University
2 - Vu, you have not responded to the main reason that is being asked in this statement of purpose in...
GraduateTommyangelo - Apr 8, 2017 / Holt - Apr 9, 2017
|MSW Statement of Purpose; Master of Social Work
Graduateidvjr91 - Mar 30, 2017 / idvjr91 - Mar 31, 2017
|'Exceptional learning program' SOP for MS in Cyber Security Program(MSIT) / CMU
5 - Rahul, I need you to clarify an expression in paragraph 4 (paragraph 2 of your reviewed draft based on...
Graduaterk8558703 - Mar 22, 2017 / okorobiadimma14 - Mar 31, 2017
|SOP Environmental Science - broad learning experience
2 - Justin, you made it clear that this essay is for a statement of purpose. Therefore, there are some elements...
Graduatejus10go - Mar 30, 2017 / Holt - Mar 30, 2017
|SOP for MSc in Renewable energy to DEVELOP THAILAND
Graduatederndinn - Mar 26, 2017 / derndinn - Mar 29, 2017
|Why you wish to pursue a career in journalism.
Graduateankitak - Mar 29, 2017 / digaprasiska - Mar 29, 2017
|Personal Statement - Operations Research & Analytics/Business Analytics for university in the UK
3 - @Holt Hi Mary, thank you very much for the feedback. For the universities I am applying to, they...
Graduatenbasuns13 - Mar 26, 2017 / nbasuns13 - Mar 27, 2017
|Nursing is limitless; Nurse Practitioner personal statement
2 - Melissa, wanting to include the school motto or core values in your personal statement is a nice touch. Just...
Graduatemellymel11 - May 25, 2013 / Holt - Mar 27, 2017
|Urban Design - PERSONAL STATEMENT FOR GRADUATE APPLICATION FOR MASTERS
3 - Thanks Mary. I am not the graduate applicant. I am just helping some people out with their graduate application-pro...
Graduatechizy7 - Mar 26, 2017 / chizy7 - Mar 26, 2017
|To be able to handle a business takes time and experience. KGSP - SELF INTRODUCTION
Graduatekimyugyeom - Mar 14, 2017 / Maitouyen282 - Mar 18, 2017
|How your education and work, and life experience will contribute to your classmates' MBA experience
Graduateserikbar - Mar 16, 2017 / serikbar - Mar 17, 2017
|UK Engineering - Personal Statement for master course
3 - @ilskyilsky It feels like you are taking the reader through your resume, re-stating the positions you held between 2009...
Graduateilskyilsky - Mar 16, 2017 / serikbar - Mar 16, 2017
|My health and management interest : Statement of Purpose for an MSc in Management
5 - @Holt Thanks for the clarification, I'm definitely taking the advice about the age reference....
Graduateamevialord - Mar 14, 2017 / amevialord - Mar 14, 2017
|Not all heated glass crack. Statement of Purpose for Material Science and Engineering
4 - Saubana, there are a few things that you can still do to improve this essay. The first, is to...
Graduatesolastar2 - Mar 11, 2017 / Holt - Mar 14, 2017
|Underdog wants to sit at the big kids table- University of Miami Graduate Admissions Essay
5 - Eva, the first part of your essay still sounds more like the information came from the brochure or website...
Graduateevaruiz714 - Mar 7, 2017 / Holt - Mar 13, 2017
|Motivation Letter for General Linguistics at Radboud University
Graduatechoerunnisa23 - Feb 16, 2017 / choerunnisa23 - Mar 13, 2017
|To materialize my career goals and aspirations - SOP for Masters in analytics
5 - Kamal, you are not writing an SEO based essay therefore, you do not need to focus on the technical...
Graduatekumar1983 - Mar 10, 2017 / Holt - Mar 11, 2017
|RESUME FOR GRADUATE ADMISSION (without prompt)
2 - Chizaram, you have most of the presentation correct in that the sections are the required information in a resume...
Graduatechizy7 - Mar 10, 2017 / Holt - Mar 11, 2017
|Speech language pathology SOP /explains career change and poor undergrad grades
2 - Trishanne, are you applying for masters degree school acceptance? If so, then you need not worry about your problematic...
GraduateTrishanneth - Mar 10, 2017 / Holt - Mar 10, 2017
|Autobiography for Master of the International Institute of Medical Device Innovation (MDI)
8 - @Holt Hello Mary, After discussing with my mentor, I will rewrite another autobiography. Thank you very much....
Graduatemakila0123 - Mar 8, 2017 / makila0123 - Mar 9, 2017
|My study plan for KGSP 2017 in MSA /Master in Accountancy/
3 - Hello ) I think, you may include specified information (in the paragraph with thesis), such as which methods and...
Graduateazaa1428 - Mar 6, 2017 / SiiaBirill - Mar 9, 2017
|Self introduction for Master degree in different field from undergraduate degree.
5 - Hello) May be you can include the information of your personal character. Not directly, but probably, through some wishes...
Graduatejewjewmabushii - Feb 24, 2017 / SiiaBirill - Mar 9, 2017
|Motivation Letter in Geo-information for Natural Hazards, Risk, and Engineering Master Degree
4 - @Holt Thank you, I'll work on that. @bagusstyawan, thank you, for that sentence i am trying to say...
Graduatehafizfatah - Mar 7, 2017 / hafizfatah - Mar 9, 2017
|My statement of purpose for MS in electrical engineering (Renewable energy) - UK admission
9 - yes I understand. Hats off to your effort,really appreciated. wish you good for up coming essays :)...
GraduateSibil - Mar 6, 2017 / Sibil - Mar 8, 2017
|KGSP Graduate 2017 - Letter of Self-Introduction - Education: to learn and to share
3 - Merysa, your essay is good, but it needs to be better directed in the format that the KGSP requires....
Graduatemeryysaaa - Mar 7, 2017 / Holt - Mar 8, 2017
|SCAD Statement of Purpose for applying to Graduate MA Illustration or MA Graphic Design
4 - You should try to expand upon the idea regarding how you hope that SCAD can help you find your...
Graduatelekrado - Mar 6, 2017 / Holt - Mar 7, 2017
|Stable career in Bangladesh. Letter of Motivation for Admission in a masters program
3 - @Holt thanks a lot. I actually followed a guideline a friend of mine provided me with who was applying...
GraduateTAhmed - Mar 6, 2017 / TAhmed - Mar 6, 2017
|Three things others do not know about me
3 - @Holt Mary, thanks for sharing your thoughts. I was considering including "talking to myself out loud when I'm alone"...
Graduateserikbar - Mar 4, 2017 / serikbar - Mar 6, 2017
|The Study Plan for Consulate General of Canada - recommended educational direction
10 - I was just informed by General Consulate of Canada in Hochiminh that they have approved for my study plan...
Graduatehenrychen - Jan 23, 2017 / henrychen - Mar 6, 2017
|The best curriculum that suits my needs. Need Assistance for KGSP Self Introduction Essay Evaluation
6 - Krishna, this essay is complete and detailed enough to stand as a comprehensive self introduction essay. While it seems...
Graduatesoosil - Feb 27, 2017 / Holt - Mar 5, 2017
|USC Marshall / What's the hardest thing you have ever done?
4 - The essay does not express industrious task you have suffered. I believe you should express how hard you tried...
GraduateIanthexx - Feb 27, 2017 / paras01 - Mar 3, 2017
|I've been told that women can not have a career in surgery. SOP for a British university
5 - Thank very much Mary. I knew that there are mistakes in my essay. I will rewrite as you recommended....
GraduateSal70000 - Mar 1, 2017 / Sal70000 - Mar 2, 2017
|'formulating natural products drugs' KGSP Letter of Introduction
Graduatenono15 - Feb 28, 2017 / nono15 - Mar 2, 2017
|Korea; developing myself in the country's culture and language. KGSP Study Plan Draft
3 - @Holt Thank you for pointing out the minor issues and concluding that my essay is in a flawless...
Graduatesugartown0829 - Mar 1, 2017 / sugartown0829 - Mar 1, 2017
|The Korean Millennial's View of Young Adult Literature. Study Plan Proposal Title
Graduatesugartown0829 - Feb 28, 2017 / sugartown0829 - Feb 28, 2017
|I am applying for KGSP so kindly view my self introduction letter
3 - Muhammad, your essay fails to explain the reasons why you feel a strong desire to study a masters degree...
Graduatekhan5885880 - Feb 28, 2017 / Holt - Feb 28, 2017
|"White Opulence"; My passion for literary creation and analysis. KGSP Self -Introduction
10 - There is only one more thing missing from your essay that needs to be included before you continue to...
Graduatesugartown0829 - Feb 27, 2017 / Holt - Feb 28, 2017
|My Statement of Purpose for MSc Information Systems at King AbdulAziz University, Jeddah, KSA
Graduateharis182 - Feb 20, 2017 / haris182 - Feb 27, 2017
|Persevering my dream. Self Introduction Letter for Graduate School.
Graduatepb1013 - Feb 23, 2017 / cj24 - Feb 27, 2017
|Design Academy Eindhoven. Statement of motivation and expectations concerning the programme
2 - Priyanka, why do you speak of your professional experience in past tense? Are you currently unemployed? If you are...
Graduatesunborn - Feb 26, 2017 / Holt - Feb 27, 2017
|'hungry for an abyss of knowledge in Chemistry' - SOP for masters in Energy Technology
2 - Pradeep, since you are switching careers, the first thing you have to do in the statement of purpose is...
GraduatePradeep Eswaran - Feb 26, 2017 / Holt - Feb 26, 2017
|An Email to Preferred Supervisor - Requirement to apply Master Degree in Japan
7 - In the first paragraph, when you open the statement, talk about thinking about doing research before you tell the...
Graduateuta - Feb 14, 2017 / Holt - Feb 26, 2017
|Mathematics education - Statement of purpose for grad school
Graduateanne09 - Feb 25, 2017 / anne09 - Feb 26, 2017
|My background, research experience and motivation. Review my Statement of Purpose for pursuing phd
3 - @Holt thanks for review. It is my first time.. I'll try to make changes as you told. Hopefully you'll...
Graduatemlohano - Feb 25, 2017 / mlohano - Feb 25, 2017
|350 words|Personal Statement for MS in Entrepreneurship and Innovation of USC
9 - @Holt Hi holt, Thanks for your revising tips. I will incorporate your advices into the final draft and...
GraduateIanthexx - Feb 23, 2017 / Ianthexx - Feb 25, 2017
|The journey from a Plant Engineer to an Entrepreneur. SOP for supply chain management
2 - Deepain, the first thing you have to do with this essay is shorten the length. This is too long...
Graduatedeepain - Feb 24, 2017 / Holt - Feb 25, 2017
|Health, education, nutrition. Study & Future Plans Abroad Essay
3 - Ana, these are supposed to be written as 2 separate essays composed of one page each. The study plan...
Graduatepb1013 - Feb 23, 2017 / Holt - Feb 24, 2017
|Emerging care system market for the elderly in Taiwan. SOP for Actuarial Science in the USA
Graduaterobin963a - Feb 22, 2017 / robin963a - Feb 22, 2017
|This is an essay for admission to an American university for masters in construction management.
29 - Like I said, this essay is good enough to submit. You have done your best to represent your intentions...
Graduateratan251294 - Jan 12, 2017 / Holt - Feb 21, 2017
|Statement of purpose for Master's course in English Linguistics/ English Literatures and Cultures
Graduatealinakarimova714 - Feb 14, 2017 / alinakarimova714 - Feb 20, 2017
|Goals to implement; being professional means being successful
Graduatelukme - Feb 13, 2017 / Holt - Feb 18, 2017
|LSE. You must present a personal statement with your application form, between 1,000 and 1,500 words
15 - Holt, I will make that final adjustment and get ready to send it off. Thank you very much for...
GraduateZak Cannon - Feb 11, 2017 / Zak Cannon - Feb 17, 2017
|London School of Economics personal statement Master in finance
2 - Erik, the personal statement is not an extension of your resume. So remove all of the parts of the...
Graduateewmansil - Feb 15, 2017 / Holt - Feb 15, 2017
|To make India independent of fossil fuels; Motivational letter for Masters in Renewable Energy
5 - Malika, your letter doesn't really work very well because you have presented too much information in it. a motivational...
GraduateMalavika Venu - Feb 8, 2017 / Holt - Feb 12, 2017
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