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|SOP - I am applying for an MS in CS with an Electrical/Electronic Engineering Background
NEW - Statement of Purpose for MS CS Hey guys, could you please critique my SOP? I am applying for...
GraduateKakugri - 3 hrs ago / — -
|Personal Statement for Postgraduate Study. University in United Kingdom (Development Studies)
2 - The personal statement should never be the biography of the student in any fform. Where a motivational statement is...
Graduateaktivasi - Sep 24, 2021 / Holt - 14 hrs ago
|Personal Statement for Msc - In banking and finance, I see a fascinating area
NEW - I am trying to apply for masters in banking and finance and would love to have some feedback for...
Graduatemartintran - 16 hrs ago / — -
|Statement of purpose - OSLOMET Norway- MS-Applied Computer and Information Technology
2 - Expand on this portion. Specifically, discuss academic accomplishments, related research work, and any other academic participation that will...
Graduateshroud - Sep 19, 2021 / Holt - Sep 21, 2021
|STATEMENT OF PURPOSE MS MECHATRONICS AND CONTROL SYSTEM.
NEW - master program application I am applying for master in mechatronics, I have written an introduction paragraph in which...
Graduateharoonrasheed - Sep 20, 2021 / — -
|Ticket to my higher studies
Graduatesidharth jeyabal - Sep 17, 2021 / sidharth jeyabal - Sep 18, 2021
|Statement of Purpose - UC Berkeley - Data Science
3 - @Holt Thank you so much for the helpful advise and suggestion! I have revised the essay as the...
Graduatekittybetty - Sep 4, 2021 / kittybetty - Sep 9, 2021
|Psychologists online - FUTURE PLAN - KGSP GRADUATE PROGRAM
4 - @miss123 The plan conveys a clear direction of your career, but there is more you can elaborate. In addition...
Graduatemiss123 - Aug 27, 2021 / Kyaw Ye Thu - Aug 31, 2021
|Statement of research interest - Applied to Master's Computer Science
2 - The essay needs to be refocused to provide clear responses to the prompts alone. Do not overdiscuss things by...
GraduatePraew_chprd - Aug 22, 2021 / Holt - Aug 23, 2021
|Statement of Purpose - what area of CS interests you particularly? Masters in Computer Science
2 - Half of this paper is a personal statement. The first half should be removed from this presentation as it...
Graduatesneha2312 - Aug 20, 2021 / Holt - Aug 21, 2021
|Electrical engineering - SOP for graduate school computer science
2 - The problem is that you wrote a personal statement, showing the growth of your interest in Computer science rather...
Graduatenephele - Jul 25, 2021 / Holt - Jul 26, 2021
|Critique my statement of purpose for masters in quantum engineering
2 - Without knowing if there are specific writing requirements for this SOP, I would have to say that this type...
GraduateVatsy31 - Jul 10, 2021 / Holt - Jul 11, 2021
|Study plan for a new career path and study optician program in Canada
2 - The essay shows that the applicant hasa keen interest in studying in canada but does not show a strong...
Graduatesiuned1988 - Jul 9, 2021 / Holt - Jul 10, 2021
|Statement of purpose for Data science course - graduate application
2 - The overall essay is not meant as a statement of purpose. This writing, showing the development of the student's...
Graduateashik_123 - Jun 28, 2021 / Holt - Jun 29, 2021
|Study plan for MEng Civil Engineering, University of Windsor, Canada
2 - The reason for seeking a residency permit sound more like you are eventually planning to apply for citizenship in...
Graduatemana_ne - Jun 23, 2021 / Holt - Jun 25, 2021
|Personal statement - reason to take the specialization: boost my career vs problem to solve
2 - Neither. For the personal statement, you should show the progression of your interest leading into data science. The...
Graduateevita126 - May 30, 2021 / Holt - May 31, 2021
|Erasmus Mundus Masters in Social Work for Children and Family
GraduateSRazaque - May 27, 2021 / SRazaque - May 28, 2021
|Education is the key to opportunity - Why did you choose your proposed course and institution*?
Graduateeternal1703 - May 16, 2021 / eternal1703 - May 17, 2021
|SOP for Master in Data Science; I aspire to teach and research at a university/research center
Graduateeosopoku - May 10, 2021 / eosopoku - May 16, 2021
|MY MOTIVATION LETTER FOR Msc SUSTAINABLE MANAGEMENT
2 - You can easily use this essay as a personal statement as it carries an in-depth look at the development...
Graduatedemorich - May 15, 2021 / Holt - May 16, 2021
|Career Change or Background Change
2 - The masters course is always determined by your work experience in relation to your work experience. While some universities...
Graduatesrijal - May 6, 2021 / Holt - May 7, 2021
|In no more than 250 words, describe a real-life example of how strategic communication was used.
GraduateRatudestiani - May 4, 2021 / Ratudestiani - May 4, 2021
|Data Science - [AAS Essay - class of 2021] Why did you choose your proposed course and institution?
2 - Develop the reasons why you chose the courses at these universities. Aside from the textbook information that you found...
Graduatembimbagaskara - May 4, 2021 / Holt - May 4, 2021
|Strategic Communication - Statement of Academic Purpose
2 - You do not present a clear purpose for your studies in relation to your existing skills.You are stopping short...
GraduateRatudestiani - May 4, 2021 / Holt - May 4, 2021
|Earthquake engineering - study plan for visa application
2 - Your essay is good but falls a bit short of the actual information consideration for a Canadian student visa...
GraduateS_ammady - May 2, 2021 / Holt - May 2, 2021
|How to prepare a good profile for acceptance at ETH Zurich?
2 - Are you applying for a masters program admission? That is the program that begins its application in November. I...
Graduatesimm - Apr 25, 2021 / Holt - Apr 26, 2021
|Internship about famous places in the largest city of Vietnam
2 - Due to your redacted information, the sentences you wrote no longer make any sense. The paragraphs you present do...
Graduatekaonashi - Apr 15, 2021 / Holt - Apr 16, 2021
|MOTIVATION LETTER ABOUT FLUID MECHANICS
2 - This is a personal statement. It contains information that shows the development of your interest in Fluid Mechanics. It...
Graduatelaylaa - Apr 11, 2021 / Holt - Apr 12, 2021
|"Accessibility" - Personal statement for MSc in HPPF in LSE
2 - Your discussion is heavily focused on the reasons why you want to study MSc in Public Health. You failed...
GraduateMinc - Apr 6, 2021 / Holt - Apr 7, 2021
|Industrial Revolution 4.0. Statement Of Purpose for MSc in Human Resources
Graduatemekh - Apr 4, 2021 / mekh - Apr 4, 2021
|SOP MCs Computer Science - EPFL - academic background and career strategy
Graduategiupiter_kh - Mar 30, 2021 / giupiter_kh - Mar 31, 2021
|Study plan for master's of enterprise management for university in China
2 - This is not a study plan. This is a personal statement. There is nothing in this presentation that represents...
Graduateasya - Mar 28, 2021 / Holt - Mar 29, 2021
|Learning Korean - GKS - Statement of Purpose - Language Study Plan
2 - The language study plan is normally responded to within 1-2 paragraphs that immediately outline the pre-Korea and post-Korea language...
Graduateiyo - Mar 26, 2021 / Holt - Mar 27, 2021
|GKS-G Korean Scholarship | Personal Statement | M.S. Public Policy (Environment/Green Development)
3 - Thank you for your response. I've checked and do qualify under a new Korean Heritage category, provided neither...
Graduatescoriae - Mar 25, 2021 / scoriae - Mar 26, 2021
|GKS-G Global Korean Scolarship | Personal Statement | Ph.D. in Cybersecurity
2 - The last paragraph is too long. You need to break that into 3 more parts based on the discussion...
Graduateresearcher182 - Mar 25, 2021 / Holt - Mar 26, 2021
|Personal Statement for M.Eng. Mechanical Engineering at University of Alberta
2 - The ideal SOP presentation has a maximum word count of 750 words. I find this essay to be extremely...
GraduateDioBrando69 - Mar 23, 2021 / Holt - Mar 24, 2021
|Why becoming a GOI-IES Scholar matters to you, what you'll gain from this scholarship?
2 - This is actually an ordinary essay that does not have any stand out points or references that could catch...
Graduatemebax64893 - Mar 18, 2021 / Holt - Mar 19, 2021
|Anesthesiologist Assistant Program Personal Statement: Experience with Healthcare Disparities?
2 - I can understand how your father's illness would have opened your mind to considering a career in healthcare. However,...
GraduateGenJen - Mar 18, 2021 / Holt - Mar 19, 2021
|Cross major - Personal Statement - GKS Graduate University Track
Graduatehrdynt23 - Mar 14, 2021 / Holt - Mar 15, 2021
|MASTER OF GLOBAL BUSINESS - AAS 2021 - Why this course and institution?
2 - ONE ESSAY PER THREAD. ADMIN SHALL DELETE THE REST OF THIS POST. KINDLY POST THOSE AS INDIVIDUAL THREADS INSTEAD....
Graduatetpekar15 - Mar 10, 2021 / Holt - Mar 10, 2021
|Agricultural economics and rural development - Graduate Program - GKS - Personal Statment
2 - The essay is a relaxing read that covers all of the elements required in the discussion. However, I feel...
GraduateKasogi - Mar 9, 2021 / Holt - Mar 9, 2021
|Supply Chain - Personal Statement Graduate GKS, Industrial Engineering
2 - Though your introduction to Korea is an interesting aspect of this presentation, it does not reflect a direct connection...
Graduatekarinrizky - Mar 5, 2021 / Holt - Mar 6, 2021
|Fascination for things that fly. Personal statement for MS in Aerospace Engineering
2 - The Personal Statement should not be so loaded with the courses you completed both on and offline. You practically...
GraduateAnmol Chaudhary - Mar 4, 2021 / Holt - Mar 5, 2021
|GKS-G Personal Statement for AI & Natural Language Processing
2 - The early part of the essay is a good introduction to your profession, but does not really apply itself...
Graduatequeenrey - Mar 3, 2021 / Holt - Mar 4, 2021
|Cambodia Development - AAS Application: Why did you choose your proposed course
2 - How does your proposed course relate, in a professional manner, to addressing the needs of Cambodia? You gave a...
GraduateReksanil - Mar 2, 2021 / Holt - Mar 2, 2021
|Spreading myself too thin on Cover letter/Personal Statement for Aerospace Engg, ISAE-SUPAERO?
3 - @Holt The paragraph 4 is the "how the program will help your future career" paragraph. Do you suggest another...
GraduateVarunVP - Feb 28, 2021 / VarunVP - Mar 1, 2021
|2021 GKS Graduate; Personal Statement; I'm the youngest member of a four...
Graduateslyny - Feb 26, 2021 / slyny - Feb 26, 2021
|SOP for MS Human Computer-Interaction/ Changing Direction
2 - Your approach to presenting your relevant education is acceptable. Since the educational background does not seem to be a...
Graduatesbp - Feb 23, 2021 / Holt - Feb 24, 2021
|MBA and technology - [KGSP-G] MASTERS IN BUSINESS ADMINISTRATION-STATEMENT OF PURPOSE
GraduateAkua Grey - Feb 21, 2021 / Akua Grey - Feb 22, 2021
|SOP- SCAD - What first drawn me to a career as a visual artist were animations I watched as a child
2 - There is no real purpose for your studies. You have written a motivational letter rather than a statement of...
GraduateDizm - Feb 15, 2021 / Holt - Feb 16, 2021
|Master's Programme in Mechanical Engineering with Automotive Engineering specialization
2 - The motivation for choosing the university is too superficial. It is based on commonly known information and what you...
GraduateSam96 - Feb 7, 2021 / Holt - Feb 8, 2021
|Innovation and technology projects - GKS Program - Study Plan
2 - There are several paragraphs that need to be removed from this presentation. The first 2 paragraphs do not help...
GraduateThyciane - Feb 5, 2021 / Holt - Feb 6, 2021
|Personal Statement for Master of Science in Human-Computer Interaction
2 - I wish I had a copy of the prompt requirements that your personal statement has to respond to. As...
Graduateazio - Feb 5, 2021 / Holt - Feb 5, 2021
|Personal Ethical Dilemma essay for graduate school
2 - First up, never use the real names of people you know in the essay to protect their privacy. Yes,...
Graduatemedicat - Feb 4, 2021 / Holt - Feb 4, 2021
|LOM for Erasmus Mundus E-Pico Program (Views, ideas, anything)
2 - It would be better if you reverse the presentation of your letter. Since this is a motivation letter, the...
Graduateweatherkicksass - Jan 31, 2021 / Holt - Feb 1, 2021
|SOP for Msc in psychology and cognitive science
2 - You have to remove the reference to being an 11 year old and having such an active interest in...
Graduateale996 - Jan 30, 2021 / Holt - Jan 31, 2021
|STATEMENT OF PURPOSE FOR GEOSCIENCE MASTER DEGREE, BRUNEI DARUSSALAM GOVERNMENT SCHOLARSHIP (BDGS)
2 - What is the purpose of your thesis research? How do you see this contributing to the study of volcanology...
Graduateshofihawan - Jan 28, 2021 / Holt - Jan 29, 2021
|University of Pennsylvania's Master of Behavioral & Decision Science - Personal Statement
NEW - Personal Statement essay Hi all, I am applying to Master of Behavioral & Decision Science, University of Pennsylvania....
Graduatelisarg - Jan 24, 2021 / — -
|UVirginia Data Science Statement Of Purpose
2 - You have a strong academic background. However, you are mistaking the internship for a professional experience which, even if...
GraduateMSDataScAspirant - Jan 22, 2021 / Holt - Jan 23, 2021
|[KGSP-G] - International Trade Studies (GSIS) - Statement of Purpose
3 - I believe a good way to start your Goal of Study is with some experiences you had that motivated...
Graduatenhunggngu - Jan 21, 2021 / AlfredoCruz - Jan 21, 2021
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