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|"Small is Beautiful" - SOP for the Master of Science program in Computer Science
NEW - Statement of Purpose for Masters in Computer Science In my sophomore year at college, I read a book...
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|Statement of Purpose for my Grad studies Admission - USM
GraduateSnazzydoa - Aug 8, 2019 / Snazzydoa - Aug 15, 2019
|Pursuing Master's study in Public Health; public health management and policy in Nigeria
GraduateVickspring - Aug 7, 2019 / Vickspring - Aug 10, 2019
|My Life - PTCAS Application Personal Statement Essay
3 - @Maria Thank you very much for the feedback. Aside from the structuring though, do you feel as if...
Graduatetshort - Aug 6, 2019 / tshort - Aug 9, 2019
|My statement of purpose for Masters in Biotechnology- Northeastern University
2 - @Jeyashree96 Hello. Welcome here! No worries. As always, we'll do our best to assist you in your writing endeavors....
GraduateJeyashree96 - Aug 1, 2019 / Maria - Aug 2, 2019
|STATEMENT OF PURPOSE FOR COMMUNICATION ENGINEERING IN UK
3 - @Maria Thank you so much! I'll try to omit some unnecessary information and add more essential materials....
Graduateluneydia - Jul 29, 2019 / luneydia - Jul 30, 2019
|'To analyze better, I must know better' - Statement of Purpose for Data Science program
3 - Thanks @Maria, I am working on changes and post back again. Your feedback is really important to me. ...
Graduatedata_guy_sid - Jul 29, 2019 / data_guy_sid - Jul 30, 2019
|What is the benefit of becoming a GOI-IES Scholar?
3 - Thank you for your feedback Maria. Also, do you think adding my personal background to the introduction would...
Graduatestella898 - Jul 23, 2019 / stella898 - Jul 23, 2019
|'I find it fascinating how data has impacted our lives' - SOP for Masters In Data science at USC
GraduateVishalTyagi247 - Jul 21, 2019 / VishalTyagi247 - Jul 21, 2019
|Becoming a researcher and an academic professor. Motivation letter for a PhD in analytical chemistry
3 - Thank you very much for your response. The "who" is a specific professor, which I omited the name....
Graduatematos - Jul 18, 2019 / matos - Jul 19, 2019
|Job market - Personal Statement (apply for graduate school in the UK)
Graduateoneouran - Jul 11, 2019 / oneouran - Jul 13, 2019
|Welcome any critics on my SOP for Master in Business Analytics graduate program!
Graduatecosmic1459 - Jul 9, 2019 / cosmic1459 - Jul 10, 2019
|APPLYING TO MSW ACADEMIC PROGRAM: STATEMENT OF PURPOSE [SOP]
3 - @Maria Thanks for your feedback! Can I ask you specifically where you feel that I'm being vague? I...
GraduateNTN244 - Jul 4, 2019 / NTN244 - Jul 5, 2019
|Applying for Master of Management in Finance to pursue a future career as a financial consultant
3 - @godstar Hi there! Firstly, revise your first sentence. From the get-go, you were presenting quite a baffling structure...
Graduategodstar - Jun 30, 2019 / Maria - Jun 30, 2019
|Urban Planning / Development - KGSP-G (Personal Statement)
GraduateAdartasov - Jun 18, 2019 / Adartasov - Jun 20, 2019
|PERSONAL STATEMENT FOR LSHTM - PUBLIC HEALTH - LSHTM
3 - @Maria Thank you so much!! I sincerely appreciate it. I did try to be concise, I will review it...
Graduatejhara121 - May 31, 2019 / jhara121 - May 31, 2019
|Personal narrative for SLP UOfC - Speech-Language Pathology
2 - @katy265did Hi there! Let me help you with your essay. A couple of key reminders: 1. Remember...
Graduatekaty265did - May 27, 2019 / Maria - May 27, 2019
|STATEMENT OF INTENT FOR GRADUATE STUDIES IN BIOMEDICAL ENGINEERING IN CANADA
GraduateCautiouswriter - May 25, 2019 / Cautiouswriter - May 26, 2019
|Statement of intent for MA in Education at University of Nottingham UK
2 - @Jegede Hi there! I've noticed that you're new to the forum. Welcome! I'll help you with your essay....
GraduateJegede - May 25, 2019 / Maria - May 25, 2019
|Statement of Purpose for applying to German University in Master of Data Science
2 - @guiaria Hi there! Let's work through your essay. First and foremost, I'm going to put down a few...
Graduateguiaria - May 15, 2019 / Maria - May 15, 2019
|Motivation letter for Application to Experimental Geoscience at The University of Bayreuth
2 - @Odunakintoye I appreciate the introductory portion of your essay where you made mention of your background. You have sufficiently...
GraduateOdunakintoye - May 13, 2019 / Maria - May 13, 2019
|Motivation for selecting a career in healthcare & interest in becoming an anesthesiologist assistant
Graduatepresent1079 - Apr 18, 2019 / present1079 - May 7, 2019
|" Computational Science and Engineering " - SOP for Ruhr Bochum University, Germany
3 - Can you please tell me specifically from where I should start rephrasing for Material Science Program SOP...
Graduatemdabir1203 - May 6, 2019 / mdabir1203 - May 6, 2019
|Media Industry - Essay for scholarship of Bournemouth University
Graduatelevanchi196 - May 3, 2019 / levanchi196 - May 4, 2019
|'great investment for my future' - Motivation Letter for MSc in Data Science
Graduatedreiframe - Apr 30, 2019 / dreiframe - May 2, 2019
|I'm looking forward to apply for the online masters in data science - SOP essay
2 - The structure of the essay is messy. The arrangement of the thoughts is quite inconclusive because there is seemingly...
Graduatefocuson - Apr 30, 2019 / Maria - Apr 30, 2019
|Statement Of Purpose (SOP) for industrial engineering (mtszfa) - to candidate for a Master's degree
4 - You mean that if i replace your proposed sentences instead of what it has been written, it will...
Graduatemtszfa - Apr 28, 2019 / mtszfa - Apr 30, 2019
|This essay is about letter of intent for my graduate studies in Canada - Masters in Education
2 - Your essay had a creative approach to showcasing your intention. Still, I would rather prefer that you try to...
GraduateNaz123 - Apr 26, 2019 / Maria - Apr 26, 2019
|The inevitable decision to be an artist. Graduate SOP for SCAD (Illustration)
2 - I appreciate the content, flow, and construction of your essay; it's immensely full of intimate anecdotes that will serve...
Graduatemsmith161 - Apr 23, 2019 / Maria - Apr 23, 2019
|SOP for Master of information / Computer Programming (Harvard online)
2 - In terms of content, I think that your essay is excellent. It has provided a comprehensive overview of your...
Graduateynynl - Apr 20, 2019 / Maria - Apr 20, 2019
|Check my SOP for Department of Material Science and Simulation at Ruhr-Universitaet Bochum
Graduatevishnumohan327 - Apr 16, 2019 / Maria - Apr 16, 2019
|Personal Statement for Medical School - My Scribing Experience
2 - Hello, I've read your writing and I find it quite interesting. You have mentioned some anecdotes to show how...
Graduatehdholaki - Apr 12, 2019 / cao1km - Apr 12, 2019
|Personal Statement for MSc in Data Science / Informatics School
3 - Thank you very much for your response. I agree with your suggestions. However, in case I proceed in...
Graduateredykt - Apr 11, 2019 / redykt - Apr 11, 2019
|Green Technology and Engineering - Help with my Personal statement
3 - @Ise_g I think that your essay's formatting is beautiful because of your usage of anecdotes. The more personalized an...
GraduateIse_g - Apr 5, 2019 / Maria - Apr 6, 2019
|MBA application Essay draft, the 'spikiest' pictures with the explanations.
3 - Thank you so much Maria! That is really helpful. I need watch out grammars. I will upload new one....
GraduateJolin lu - Mar 27, 2019 / Jolin lu - Mar 27, 2019
|Goal of study and study plan for Korean university application
4 - I think your essay is a little messy. I would recommend you add more life situations and reduce the...
Graduateitha20 - Mar 21, 2019 / IamIana - Mar 27, 2019
|Statement of Purpose for MSc in Data Science (Marketing Analysis)
2 - Pharyacha, There are a couple of things I want you to take note of. Academic reviewers will appreciate...
Graduatepharyacha - Mar 24, 2019 / Maria - Mar 24, 2019
|Letter of Motivation - MSc Economics Universitat Hamburg
2 - Inzzudinfarras, I suggest that you review basic grammar rules and punctuation. There were several slips in your essay....
GraduateIzzudinfarras - Mar 18, 2019 / Maria - Mar 22, 2019
|Statement of Purpose for M.Sc in Computer Science - Germany
2 - There are a few changes that are suggested in able to allow clarity to your application letter. In...
Graduatebsse0520 - Mar 20, 2019 / Constance - Mar 22, 2019
|Personal Application Statement of Msc electronic information engineering
2 - Since this is an academic paper, please remove such statements as "As a matter of fact" and "In the...
GraduateAirydisc - Mar 17, 2019 / Constance - Mar 22, 2019
|Study Plan for Canada Study Permit- MEng in Civil and Env Engineering.
2 - Yeu, I am afraid that this is not a valid study plan. You have only explained your extenuating circumstances...
Graduatedecimo1993 - Mar 16, 2019 / Holt - Mar 17, 2019
|MSc in Accounting and Finance - extended personal statement
Graduatenemo2020 - Mar 5, 2019 / nemo2020 - Mar 14, 2019
|SOP for Msc Business Analytics; improving systems to gather enormous amount of data
4 - @Holt Thanks a lot for your informative response. I was not aware of the difference between them. I wrote...
Graduatetomm3344 - Mar 8, 2019 / tomm3344 - Mar 11, 2019
|Better English teaching. What makes me eligible for the Fulbright Scholarship? Study objective essay
2 - Mohammed, what is your study objective title? Why are you writing a personal statement when what you should be...
GraduateHama1996 - Mar 7, 2019 / Holt - Mar 8, 2019
|Statement of Purpose for Business Informatics/Management Information Systems
2 - @lebronzey set this essay aside and use it as the basis of your personal statement when that requirement comes...
Graduatelebronzey - Mar 7, 2019 / Holt - Mar 8, 2019
|Pharmcas- Pharmacy school personal statement!
3 - The main thing that I find confusing here is that as a pharmacist, your mother was never in a...
Graduaterlawlgnskite - Feb 28, 2019 / Holt - Mar 1, 2019
|GKS 2019 personal statement, Culture and Tourism Contents
3 - Samara, it isn't about what you want to tell the reviewer, it's about what the reviewer needs to know...
Graduateshagharo - Feb 26, 2019 / Holt - Feb 26, 2019
|The need for representation of women in the Bahamas
5 - The examples of successful women will depend upon which sector of society you want to represent their participation in....
GraduateMickey242 - Feb 20, 2019 / Holt - Feb 22, 2019
|Difficult to be accepted into Physical Therapy. Personal Essay 2018-2019 PTCAS
Graduatesfrancois212 - Feb 20, 2019 / sfrancois212 - Feb 21, 2019
|Ideal balance between theory and practical application. Personal Statement - Business Analytics
3 - Jorgen, when considering what the content of a personal statement should be, a reviewer will find that this essay...
Graduatejhalmsli - Feb 17, 2019 / Holt - Feb 18, 2019
|My interest in Korea can be traced to the beginning of the years 2000s... (GKS 2019)
2 - Aline, there is no need to reference your family background as you did in this essay. That is not...
Graduateamesquita - Feb 16, 2019 / Holt - Feb 17, 2019
|The robust course curriculum offered. SOP for Master's in Business Analytics
2 - Roshini, you have to revise the statement of purpose to discuss how your college studies helped prepare you for...
GraduateRoshini - Feb 16, 2019 / Holt - Feb 17, 2019
|Texas A&M MS in Marketing - why study at Mays
4 - Shruti, I find that the statement that you wrote is not properly focused on a useful response. The most...
Graduateshrutishahh - Feb 15, 2019 / Holt - Feb 16, 2019
|Urban planning and real estate managemenet of Korea - KGSP/GKS personal statement
3 - @IamIana Tehre are specific discussion points for the GKS - G personal statement. Most of which are not represented...
GraduateIamIana - Feb 15, 2019 / Holt - Feb 16, 2019
|Motivation, plans and goals to make a breakthrough in construction industry and material science
Graduateafaf_93 - Feb 10, 2019 / abclaudya - Feb 11, 2019
|2nd Application Essay - Global MBA Program University of Hawaii
2 - The problem with your essay is that it is about an extra curricular activity. So there is a lack...
Graduatepjongko91 - Feb 8, 2019 / Holt - Feb 9, 2019
|KGSP Application - Part 2 (research goal - how can I contribute?)
7 - I think that since you mentioned that you have learned korean for three years its enough if you only...
Graduateeviand - Feb 2, 2019 / Jazzmin - Feb 8, 2019
|Civil Engineering - KGSP Application Goal of study & Study Plan
2 - Hessel, more than 90% of this essay is not geared towards the goal of study and study plan of...
Graduatehesseljw - Feb 6, 2019 / Holt - Feb 7, 2019
|Digital Triangle Team - Review my admission essay.
3 - Salah, the reviewer is looking for a more solid representation of your responsibility skills. Based on the discussion you...
GraduateBEBROS - Feb 6, 2019 / Holt - Feb 6, 2019
|1st Essay - Global MBA Program, Shidler College of Business (University of Hawaii at Manoa)
5 - Thanks for the detailed feedback. I will incorporate your observations into my second draft. Thanks again!...
Graduatepjongko91 - Feb 5, 2019 / pjongko91 - Feb 6, 2019
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