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|Personal statement - Former QA & Product Manager applying Master of Data Science
2 - @Hana Fang Welcome to the forum! I hope that my feedback gives you insight on how to improve your...
GraduateHana Fang - 2 days ago / Maria - 8 hrs ago
|Audit and Finance LETTER FOR MASTER ADMISSION - the university offers the best opportunities for me
2 - Dear Ernest, I am not going to delve deep into particular details from your writing. Instead, I am...
GraduateATOWILSON - 1 day ago / Sunrise011 - 21 hrs ago
|Personal Statement - Erasmus Mundus Tourism Development & Culture
4 - it is never easy thinking and writing convincing essays. You haven't stated why you should be considered for...
GraduateLoyceVeenings - Dec 7, 2019 / StChibuzor - 2 days ago
|Question on the amount of personality within my Digital Media Arts Graduate Statement of Purpose
2 - @jwoakley Welcome to the forum! I'm here to provide feedback on your writing. Please don't hesitate to approach just...
Graduatejwoakley - Dec 4, 2019 / Maria - Dec 6, 2019
|"Gold Medal" - Statement of Purpose for MBA program in Sofia University, Palo Alto
2 - @MiniBauce Welcome! Here's my feedback for your writing. While I think that the narration in the first paragraph...
GraduateMiniBauce - Dec 1, 2019 / Maria - Dec 2, 2019
|Applying Master's Program in Human-Technology Interaction - Motivation Letter
3 - @Maria Thank you for your feedback. It really helped me recognize the shortcomings in the letter. I will revise...
Graduateahmednaik - Nov 27, 2019 / ahmednaik - Nov 28, 2019
|Motivation Letter for Msc in Electrical Engineer - Budapest University of Technology and Economics
GraduateSaifur Rahman - Nov 27, 2019 / Saifur Rahman - Nov 27, 2019
|Research Interest (proposed graduate program relates to your career goals)
6 - @johnsnon This one appears to be better than the previous ones. It's more comprehensive, elaborate, and yet does not...
Graduatejohnsnon - Nov 4, 2019 / Maria - Nov 27, 2019
|Personal Statement for MSc in Advanced Computing Science with Big Data - Word count: 499
2 - @jayathungek Hi there. Thanks for coming to the site! I hope that this feedback of mine will give you...
Graduatejayathungek - Nov 25, 2019 / Maria - Nov 26, 2019
|Profile Evaluation for MIM, MTEC
NEW - self presentation Dear all, I have done my engineering from BITS Pilani Hyderabad and have graduated in 2018...
Graduateapp2020 - Nov 24, 2019 / — -
|SOP REVIEW: MS IN STATISTICS
Graduateessayforum2019 - Nov 23, 2019 / essayforum2019 - Nov 24, 2019
|Motivation Letter: Management - this fabulously sophisticated area
GraduateLanyi - Nov 24, 2019 / Lanyi - Nov 24, 2019
|SOP for Thesis-based Masters in Computer Science with Interest in ML/NLP
2 - @nickil21 Hi there. Thanks for coming to the forum! I hope my feedback helps you. While I appreciate...
Graduatenickil21 - Nov 17, 2019 / Maria - Nov 19, 2019
|Academic Statement for PhD Biomedical Engineering! Previous study experiences.
3 - @Maria Thank you so much Maria. I have rearranged the paragraphs. Can you please check they make a sense...
GraduateAGeek - Nov 15, 2019 / AGeek - Nov 16, 2019
|Exhausted and Disappointed with the failed efforts! SOP for PhD Biomedical Engineering
3 - @Maria Thank you for you response. I have tried to make changes. Below are the first and second...
GraduateAGeek - Nov 15, 2019 / AGeek - Nov 16, 2019
|Personal Statement: M.Eng Aerospace Engineering (McGill Mastercard Foundation)
3 - I think there are too many short paragraphs so, you should combine certain lines in one paragraph to give...
Graduatedrae_whiz - Oct 27, 2019 / AGeek - Nov 15, 2019
|Masters application for Mechanical Engineering - big step of my professional career
GraduateSSUfasjbnf - Nov 9, 2019 / AGeek - Nov 15, 2019
|Personal Statement for Imperial College London -Masters in Materials Engineering (comment/criticize)
4 - @Maria Thank you for the feedback, I will try and work on formatting it in the required way. It...
Graduateitoffi3 - Oct 31, 2019 / itoffi3 - Nov 1, 2019
|Motivation Letter for MSc Human Computer Interaction in Universität Siegen (3 years of experience)
2 - @ayunovianti Hi there! It's good to see you here. Hopefully, my feedback will be a positive contribution to the...
Graduateayunovianti - Oct 26, 2019 / Maria - Oct 26, 2019
|Statement of Purpose for MSc Health Economics and Decision Science
2 - @violet2 Welcome to the forum! Hopefully, this feedback will help you in your writing endeavors. If it does, please...
Graduateviolet2 - Oct 24, 2019 / Maria - Oct 26, 2019
|Statistics (Data Science) - Personal Statement
2 - @oxford123 Hello there! Welcome to the forum. Hopefully, this feedback will be helpful for your writing endeavors. If it...
Graduateoxford123 - Oct 24, 2019 / Maria - Oct 26, 2019
|Career-ending injuries - PTCAS application essay 2019
2 - @tifftpcc I don't want to believe your first paragraph is part of the essay. If it is, I will...
Graduatetifftpcc - Oct 20, 2019 / Quizzy - Oct 22, 2019
|NOTHING THREATS THE WORLD MORE THAN NUCLEAR WEAPONS
2 - @Blue Autumn Hi. Welcome here! We're always glad to have new people coming around. If you have more questions...
GraduateBlue Autumn - Oct 18, 2019 / Maria - Oct 19, 2019
|Statement of Purpose: MS in Computer Science with the expertise in Machine Learning
2 - @romitjain Hi. Welcome! I'm going to give you a briefing of what you can do to improve this essay...
Graduateromitjain - Oct 13, 2019 / Maria - Oct 18, 2019
|SOP for MSc- Computer Science / Faculty of Engineering
2 - Great essay. However, i found it very difficult to comprehend your breakdown of GPA and how you discussed the...
Graduateashudbng11 - Oct 13, 2019 / ObedRockson - Oct 16, 2019
|A technological world - statement of purpose for masters in computer science
2 - @saikadiyala Welcome to the forum! I truly hope that the feedback you will receive from me would help you...
Graduatesaikadiyala - Oct 12, 2019 / Maria - Oct 14, 2019
|Description of methodologies and results while solving a problem - Texas Mccombs MSBA Essay
2 - @vivekmehndiratta Hi. Welcome here! I hope that you learn something from this feedback that'll help you in your learning...
Graduatevivekmehndiratta - Oct 9, 2019 / Maria - Oct 14, 2019
|LETTER OF INTENT - BUSINESS Administration-Strategy and Management in International Organizations
3 - Thank you very much @Maria. I am very grateful for your review, I appreciate. i will address your recommendation...
GraduateObedRockson - Oct 9, 2019 / ObedRockson - Oct 11, 2019
|Duke University Business Analytics Application Essay - Extracurricular Engagement
2 - @yuminzhang Welcome to the forum. I hope this feedback becomes helpful for your writing endeavors. If it is, don't...
Graduateyuminzhang - Oct 7, 2019 / Maria - Oct 9, 2019
|My intention to take a graduate level computer science programme in the UK - application statement
2 - @Asphodel Thanks for continuously being on the platform. I hope you are doing well, and that you find this...
GraduateAsphodel - Oct 7, 2019 / Maria - Oct 9, 2019
|Statement of Purpose for Ms materials science and tech
3 - Hi Xphire99, After reading your essay, I can conclude that you do have a passion, talent are responsible for...
GraduateXphire99 - Oct 6, 2019 / athachng2002 - Oct 7, 2019
|My elder brother has great impact on my life - influential person essay
3 - Hi Maria, this is my feedback with your paragraph. My english is still limited, but you can check if...
Graduatesaeed147 - Oct 3, 2019 / soulpancake - Oct 6, 2019
|SOP for MS on Cyber Security for UK. Jan 2020 entry.
2 - @sujithbro Hi. Thank you for being here! I wish you the best of luck in your application. I'm here...
Graduatesujithbro - Oct 4, 2019 / Maria - Oct 6, 2019
|Applying to Masters in Science in Anesthesia programs to become an Anesthesiologist Assistant
2 - @mad14f Welcome to the forum! I hope this feedback becomes beneficial for your writing endeavors in the future. If...
Graduatemad14f - Sep 30, 2019 / Maria - Sep 30, 2019
|This SOP for The University of British Columbia delineates my whole life...
2 - @Musanna Galib Hey there! Welcome to the forum. I hope that this feedback becomes helpful for your application to...
GraduateMusanna Galib - Sep 27, 2019 / Maria - Sep 27, 2019
|Statement of Purpose for Masters in Life Science KFUPM
Graduatekingzoly - Sep 15, 2019 / kingzoly - Sep 27, 2019
|The noticeable outburst in the number of people has engendered the extinction of some animal species
2 - @lunalunalala Hi. I am here to assess this essay for you to provide a comprehensive feedback. If you find...
Graduatelunalunalala - Sep 24, 2019 / Maria - Sep 26, 2019
|My internship - PTCAS PERSONAL STATEMENT ESSAY CRITIQUE - a meaningful experience and its influence
4 - your personal statement is spot on, it was coherent and easy to follow, my only criticism is you added...
Graduategerardim - Aug 28, 2019 / chuckmane - Sep 17, 2019
|Physical therapy - DESCRIBE A MEANINGFUL EXPERIENCE IN YOUR LIFE.
2 - @chuckmane Hello! Welcome to the forum. I hope that you appreciate the feedback that you're bound to receive here....
Graduatechuckmane - Sep 14, 2019 / Maria - Sep 15, 2019
|Civil Engineering Statement of Purpose (King Fahd University of Petroleum and Minerals)
2 - @Alao0702 Hi there. Thanks for your continuous patronizing! I hope that all of the feedback you've received so far...
GraduateAlao0702 - Sep 13, 2019 / Maria - Sep 15, 2019
|Statement of Intent for Admission of Graduate Studies in Civil Engineering
3 - Thanks Maria. Definitely revise my statement of intent. More personified points of view shall be included for better impression....
GraduateExterry - Sep 8, 2019 / Exterry - Sep 12, 2019
|SOP for MS program in Mechanical Engineering - the spread of transportation and safety
2 - @BSChen Hi, dear! I apologize for the delay. I hope that this feedback serves you well in the future....
GraduateBSChen - Sep 3, 2019 / Maria - Sep 11, 2019
|Chevening scholarship will enhance my leadership skills and prepare me for managerial positions
3 - I believe that your experience working in the bank and N.G.O have so much untapped potential. When refined you...
Graduatenuku2400 - Sep 7, 2019 / Tobechukwu - Sep 10, 2019
|Letter of Motivation for Erasmus Master on Innovative Microwave Electronics and Optics (EMIMEO)
3 - @Maria Thanks for the comments! Regarding the third paragraph, I should've clarified that Erasmus Mundus programs also want...
Graduatefz2626 - Sep 8, 2019 / fz2626 - Sep 10, 2019
|A brutal practice. Personal Statement for Anesthesiologist Assistant
2 - @tbui27 Hello, dear! I'm here to provide you with writing feedback on this essay. Hopefully, it can help you...
Graduatetbui27 - Sep 7, 2019 / Maria - Sep 9, 2019
|My decision to pursue Graduation in Computer Science - Statement of Purpose
3 - Hi @Bethel, thanks for your feedback. I have used that placeholder intentionally. Please feel free to suggest more changes....
GraduateKranthi Kumar - Sep 5, 2019 / Kranthi Kumar - Sep 9, 2019
|SOP for MS in Renewable Energy Engineering
2 - @abduljabbar9123 Hello there. Welcome to the forum. Seeing as you are new here, I hope that you find the...
Graduateabduljabbar9123 - Sep 1, 2019 / Maria - Sep 8, 2019
|SOP - applying for PhD in some top tier US universities on Machine Learning, Computer Science
3 - @Maria Thank you very much for the constructive feedback. How do you think it'd affect if I fully omit...
Graduatecaspianprince - Sep 1, 2019 / caspianprince - Sep 3, 2019
|SOP Graduate Admission Essay | Mass Comm; Social Media | first draft
2 - @wardamnkim Hi there! Welcome to the forum. I'm glad that you've found us - and we're more than happy...
Graduatewardamnkim - Aug 23, 2019 / Maria - Aug 28, 2019
|HOW HAVE YOU IMPROVED? What have you done since last application that improves candidacy?
2 - @kcharl02 Hi there! I hope this feedback becomes useful for your writing endeavors. Because of how restricted this...
Graduatekcharl02 - Aug 22, 2019 / Maria - Aug 28, 2019
|"Small is Beautiful" - SOP for the Master of Science program in Computer Science
2 - @sujith1993 Hi there. Here to provide you with writing feedback on this essay! First and foremost, the initial...
Graduatesujith1993 - Aug 19, 2019 / Maria - Aug 24, 2019
|Statement of Purpose for my Grad studies Admission - USM
GraduateSnazzydoa - Aug 8, 2019 / Snazzydoa - Aug 15, 2019
|Pursuing Master's study in Public Health; public health management and policy in Nigeria
GraduateVickspring - Aug 7, 2019 / Vickspring - Aug 10, 2019
|My Life - PTCAS Application Personal Statement Essay
3 - @Maria Thank you very much for the feedback. Aside from the structuring though, do you feel as if...
Graduatetshort - Aug 6, 2019 / tshort - Aug 9, 2019
|My statement of purpose for Masters in Biotechnology- Northeastern University
2 - @Jeyashree96 Hello. Welcome here! No worries. As always, we'll do our best to assist you in your writing endeavors....
GraduateJeyashree96 - Aug 1, 2019 / Maria - Aug 2, 2019
|STATEMENT OF PURPOSE FOR COMMUNICATION ENGINEERING IN UK
3 - @Maria Thank you so much! I'll try to omit some unnecessary information and add more essential materials....
Graduateluneydia - Jul 29, 2019 / luneydia - Jul 30, 2019
|'To analyze better, I must know better' - Statement of Purpose for Data Science program
3 - Thanks @Maria, I am working on changes and post back again. Your feedback is really important to me. ...
Graduatedata_guy_sid - Jul 29, 2019 / data_guy_sid - Jul 30, 2019
|What is the benefit of becoming a GOI-IES Scholar?
3 - Thank you for your feedback Maria. Also, do you think adding my personal background to the introduction would...
Graduatestella898 - Jul 23, 2019 / stella898 - Jul 23, 2019
|'I find it fascinating how data has impacted our lives' - SOP for Masters In Data science at USC
GraduateVishalTyagi247 - Jul 21, 2019 / VishalTyagi247 - Jul 21, 2019
|Becoming a researcher and an academic professor. Motivation letter for a PhD in analytical chemistry
3 - Thank you very much for your response. The "who" is a specific professor, which I omited the name....
Graduatematos - Jul 18, 2019 / matos - Jul 19, 2019
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