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|NOTHING THREATS THE WORLD MORE THAN NUCLEAR WEAPONS
2 - @Blue Autumn Hi. Welcome here! We're always glad to have new people coming around. If you have more questions...
GraduateBlue Autumn - 19 hrs ago / Maria - 10 hrs ago
|Statement of Purpose: MS in Computer Science with the expertise in Machine Learning
2 - @romitjain Hi. Welcome! I'm going to give you a briefing of what you can do to improve this essay...
Graduateromitjain - Oct 13, 2019 / Maria - 1 day ago
|SOP for MSc- Computer Science / Faculty of Engineering
2 - Great essay. However, i found it very difficult to comprehend your breakdown of GPA and how you discussed the...
Graduateashudbng11 - Oct 13, 2019 / ObedRockson - Oct 16, 2019
|A technological world - statement of purpose for masters in computer science
2 - @saikadiyala Welcome to the forum! I truly hope that the feedback you will receive from me would help you...
Graduatesaikadiyala - Oct 12, 2019 / Maria - Oct 14, 2019
|Description of methodologies and results while solving a problem - Texas Mccombs MSBA Essay
2 - @vivekmehndiratta Hi. Welcome here! I hope that you learn something from this feedback that'll help you in your learning...
Graduatevivekmehndiratta - Oct 9, 2019 / Maria - Oct 14, 2019
|Duke University Business Analytics Application Essay - Extracurricular Engagement
3 - Thank you Maria! Here is the revised version. I would like some correction on my grammar if possible. Thanks!...
Graduateyuminzhang - Oct 7, 2019 / yuminzhang - Oct 12, 2019
|LETTER OF INTENT - BUSINESS Administration-Strategy and Management in International Organizations
3 - Thank you very much @Maria. I am very grateful for your review, I appreciate. i will address your recommendation...
GraduateObedRockson - Oct 9, 2019 / ObedRockson - Oct 11, 2019
|My intention to take a graduate level computer science programme in the UK - application statement
2 - @Asphodel Thanks for continuously being on the platform. I hope you are doing well, and that you find this...
GraduateAsphodel - Oct 7, 2019 / Maria - Oct 9, 2019
|Statement of Purpose for Ms materials science and tech
3 - Hi Xphire99, After reading your essay, I can conclude that you do have a passion, talent are responsible for...
GraduateXphire99 - Oct 6, 2019 / athachng2002 - Oct 7, 2019
|My elder brother has great impact on my life - influential person essay
3 - Hi Maria, this is my feedback with your paragraph. My english is still limited, but you can check if...
Graduatesaeed147 - Oct 3, 2019 / soulpancake - Oct 6, 2019
|SOP for MS on Cyber Security for UK. Jan 2020 entry.
2 - @sujithbro Hi. Thank you for being here! I wish you the best of luck in your application. I'm here...
Graduatesujithbro - Oct 4, 2019 / Maria - Oct 6, 2019
|Applying to Masters in Science in Anesthesia programs to become an Anesthesiologist Assistant
2 - @mad14f Welcome to the forum! I hope this feedback becomes beneficial for your writing endeavors in the future. If...
Graduatemad14f - Sep 30, 2019 / Maria - Sep 30, 2019
|This SOP for The University of British Columbia delineates my whole life...
2 - @Musanna Galib Hey there! Welcome to the forum. I hope that this feedback becomes helpful for your application to...
GraduateMusanna Galib - Sep 27, 2019 / Maria - Sep 27, 2019
|Statement of Purpose for Masters in Life Science KFUPM
Graduatekingzoly - Sep 15, 2019 / kingzoly - Sep 27, 2019
|The noticeable outburst in the number of people has engendered the extinction of some animal species
2 - @lunalunalala Hi. I am here to assess this essay for you to provide a comprehensive feedback. If you find...
Graduatelunalunalala - Sep 24, 2019 / Maria - Sep 26, 2019
|My internship - PTCAS PERSONAL STATEMENT ESSAY CRITIQUE - a meaningful experience and its influence
4 - your personal statement is spot on, it was coherent and easy to follow, my only criticism is you added...
Graduategerardim - Aug 28, 2019 / chuckmane - Sep 17, 2019
|Physical therapy - DESCRIBE A MEANINGFUL EXPERIENCE IN YOUR LIFE.
2 - @chuckmane Hello! Welcome to the forum. I hope that you appreciate the feedback that you're bound to receive here....
Graduatechuckmane - Sep 14, 2019 / Maria - Sep 15, 2019
|Civil Engineering Statement of Purpose (King Fahd University of Petroleum and Minerals)
2 - @Alao0702 Hi there. Thanks for your continuous patronizing! I hope that all of the feedback you've received so far...
GraduateAlao0702 - Sep 13, 2019 / Maria - Sep 15, 2019
|Statement of Intent for Admission of Graduate Studies in Civil Engineering
3 - Thanks Maria. Definitely revise my statement of intent. More personified points of view shall be included for better impression....
GraduateExterry - Sep 8, 2019 / Exterry - Sep 12, 2019
|SOP for MS program in Mechanical Engineering - the spread of transportation and safety
2 - @BSChen Hi, dear! I apologize for the delay. I hope that this feedback serves you well in the future....
GraduateBSChen - Sep 3, 2019 / Maria - Sep 11, 2019
|Chevening scholarship will enhance my leadership skills and prepare me for managerial positions
3 - I believe that your experience working in the bank and N.G.O have so much untapped potential. When refined you...
Graduatenuku2400 - Sep 7, 2019 / Tobechukwu - Sep 10, 2019
|Letter of Motivation for Erasmus Master on Innovative Microwave Electronics and Optics (EMIMEO)
3 - @Maria Thanks for the comments! Regarding the third paragraph, I should've clarified that Erasmus Mundus programs also want...
Graduatefz2626 - Sep 8, 2019 / fz2626 - Sep 10, 2019
|A brutal practice. Personal Statement for Anesthesiologist Assistant
2 - @tbui27 Hello, dear! I'm here to provide you with writing feedback on this essay. Hopefully, it can help you...
Graduatetbui27 - Sep 7, 2019 / Maria - Sep 9, 2019
|My decision to pursue Graduation in Computer Science - Statement of Purpose
3 - Hi @Bethel, thanks for your feedback. I have used that placeholder intentionally. Please feel free to suggest more changes....
GraduateKranthi Kumar - Sep 5, 2019 / Kranthi Kumar - Sep 9, 2019
|SOP for MS in Renewable Energy Engineering
2 - @abduljabbar9123 Hello there. Welcome to the forum. Seeing as you are new here, I hope that you find the...
Graduateabduljabbar9123 - Sep 1, 2019 / Maria - Sep 8, 2019
|SOP - applying for PhD in some top tier US universities on Machine Learning, Computer Science
3 - @Maria Thank you very much for the constructive feedback. How do you think it'd affect if I fully omit...
Graduatecaspianprince - Sep 1, 2019 / caspianprince - Sep 3, 2019
|SOP Graduate Admission Essay | Mass Comm; Social Media | first draft
2 - @wardamnkim Hi there! Welcome to the forum. I'm glad that you've found us - and we're more than happy...
Graduatewardamnkim - Aug 23, 2019 / Maria - Aug 28, 2019
|HOW HAVE YOU IMPROVED? What have you done since last application that improves candidacy?
2 - @kcharl02 Hi there! I hope this feedback becomes useful for your writing endeavors. Because of how restricted this...
Graduatekcharl02 - Aug 22, 2019 / Maria - Aug 28, 2019
|"Small is Beautiful" - SOP for the Master of Science program in Computer Science
2 - @sujith1993 Hi there. Here to provide you with writing feedback on this essay! First and foremost, the initial...
Graduatesujith1993 - Aug 19, 2019 / Maria - Aug 24, 2019
|Statement of Purpose for my Grad studies Admission - USM
GraduateSnazzydoa - Aug 8, 2019 / Snazzydoa - Aug 15, 2019
|Pursuing Master's study in Public Health; public health management and policy in Nigeria
GraduateVickspring - Aug 7, 2019 / Vickspring - Aug 10, 2019
|My Life - PTCAS Application Personal Statement Essay
3 - @Maria Thank you very much for the feedback. Aside from the structuring though, do you feel as if...
Graduatetshort - Aug 6, 2019 / tshort - Aug 9, 2019
|My statement of purpose for Masters in Biotechnology- Northeastern University
2 - @Jeyashree96 Hello. Welcome here! No worries. As always, we'll do our best to assist you in your writing endeavors....
GraduateJeyashree96 - Aug 1, 2019 / Maria - Aug 2, 2019
|STATEMENT OF PURPOSE FOR COMMUNICATION ENGINEERING IN UK
3 - @Maria Thank you so much! I'll try to omit some unnecessary information and add more essential materials....
Graduateluneydia - Jul 29, 2019 / luneydia - Jul 30, 2019
|'To analyze better, I must know better' - Statement of Purpose for Data Science program
3 - Thanks @Maria, I am working on changes and post back again. Your feedback is really important to me. ...
Graduatedata_guy_sid - Jul 29, 2019 / data_guy_sid - Jul 30, 2019
|What is the benefit of becoming a GOI-IES Scholar?
3 - Thank you for your feedback Maria. Also, do you think adding my personal background to the introduction would...
Graduatestella898 - Jul 23, 2019 / stella898 - Jul 23, 2019
|'I find it fascinating how data has impacted our lives' - SOP for Masters In Data science at USC
GraduateVishalTyagi247 - Jul 21, 2019 / VishalTyagi247 - Jul 21, 2019
|Becoming a researcher and an academic professor. Motivation letter for a PhD in analytical chemistry
3 - Thank you very much for your response. The "who" is a specific professor, which I omited the name....
Graduatematos - Jul 18, 2019 / matos - Jul 19, 2019
|Job market - Personal Statement (apply for graduate school in the UK)
Graduateoneouran - Jul 11, 2019 / oneouran - Jul 13, 2019
|Welcome any critics on my SOP for Master in Business Analytics graduate program!
Graduatecosmic1459 - Jul 9, 2019 / cosmic1459 - Jul 10, 2019
|APPLYING TO MSW ACADEMIC PROGRAM: STATEMENT OF PURPOSE [SOP]
3 - @Maria Thanks for your feedback! Can I ask you specifically where you feel that I'm being vague? I...
GraduateNTN244 - Jul 4, 2019 / NTN244 - Jul 5, 2019
|Applying for Master of Management in Finance to pursue a future career as a financial consultant
3 - @godstar Hi there! Firstly, revise your first sentence. From the get-go, you were presenting quite a baffling structure...
Graduategodstar - Jun 30, 2019 / Maria - Jun 30, 2019
|Urban Planning / Development - KGSP-G (Personal Statement)
GraduateAdartasov - Jun 18, 2019 / Adartasov - Jun 20, 2019
|PERSONAL STATEMENT FOR LSHTM - PUBLIC HEALTH - LSHTM
3 - @Maria Thank you so much!! I sincerely appreciate it. I did try to be concise, I will review it...
Graduatejhara121 - May 31, 2019 / jhara121 - May 31, 2019
|Personal narrative for SLP UOfC - Speech-Language Pathology
2 - @katy265did Hi there! Let me help you with your essay. A couple of key reminders: 1. Remember...
Graduatekaty265did - May 27, 2019 / Maria - May 27, 2019
|STATEMENT OF INTENT FOR GRADUATE STUDIES IN BIOMEDICAL ENGINEERING IN CANADA
GraduateCautiouswriter - May 25, 2019 / Cautiouswriter - May 26, 2019
|Statement of intent for MA in Education at University of Nottingham UK
2 - @Jegede Hi there! I've noticed that you're new to the forum. Welcome! I'll help you with your essay....
GraduateJegede - May 25, 2019 / Maria - May 25, 2019
|Statement of Purpose for applying to German University in Master of Data Science
2 - @guiaria Hi there! Let's work through your essay. First and foremost, I'm going to put down a few...
Graduateguiaria - May 15, 2019 / Maria - May 15, 2019
|Motivation letter for Application to Experimental Geoscience at The University of Bayreuth
2 - @Odunakintoye I appreciate the introductory portion of your essay where you made mention of your background. You have sufficiently...
GraduateOdunakintoye - May 13, 2019 / Maria - May 13, 2019
|Motivation for selecting a career in healthcare & interest in becoming an anesthesiologist assistant
Graduatepresent1079 - Apr 18, 2019 / present1079 - May 7, 2019
|" Computational Science and Engineering " - SOP for Ruhr Bochum University, Germany
3 - Can you please tell me specifically from where I should start rephrasing for Material Science Program SOP...
Graduatemdabir1203 - May 6, 2019 / mdabir1203 - May 6, 2019
|Media Industry - Essay for scholarship of Bournemouth University
Graduatelevanchi196 - May 3, 2019 / levanchi196 - May 4, 2019
|'great investment for my future' - Motivation Letter for MSc in Data Science
Graduatedreiframe - Apr 30, 2019 / dreiframe - May 2, 2019
|I'm looking forward to apply for the online masters in data science - SOP essay
2 - The structure of the essay is messy. The arrangement of the thoughts is quite inconclusive because there is seemingly...
Graduatefocuson - Apr 30, 2019 / Maria - Apr 30, 2019
|Statement Of Purpose (SOP) for industrial engineering (mtszfa) - to candidate for a Master's degree
4 - You mean that if i replace your proposed sentences instead of what it has been written, it will...
Graduatemtszfa - Apr 28, 2019 / mtszfa - Apr 30, 2019
|This essay is about letter of intent for my graduate studies in Canada - Masters in Education
2 - Your essay had a creative approach to showcasing your intention. Still, I would rather prefer that you try to...
GraduateNaz123 - Apr 26, 2019 / Maria - Apr 26, 2019
|The inevitable decision to be an artist. Graduate SOP for SCAD (Illustration)
2 - I appreciate the content, flow, and construction of your essay; it's immensely full of intimate anecdotes that will serve...
Graduatemsmith161 - Apr 23, 2019 / Maria - Apr 23, 2019
|SOP for Master of information / Computer Programming (Harvard online)
2 - In terms of content, I think that your essay is excellent. It has provided a comprehensive overview of your...
Graduateynynl - Apr 20, 2019 / Maria - Apr 20, 2019
|Check my SOP for Department of Material Science and Simulation at Ruhr-Universitaet Bochum
Graduatevishnumohan327 - Apr 16, 2019 / Maria - Apr 16, 2019
|Personal Statement for Medical School - My Scribing Experience
2 - Hello, I've read your writing and I find it quite interesting. You have mentioned some anecdotes to show how...
Graduatehdholaki - Apr 12, 2019 / cao1km - Apr 12, 2019
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