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|MMS:Asset Mamagement at YALE
2 - The actual goal of your interest in enrolling in this course is to become a financial adviser. Therefore, all...
GraduateNingP - 1 day ago / Holt - 20 hrs ago
|SOP (Study Plan and Goal) - GKS Scholarship in Computer Engineering
GraduateYinMOo - 1 day ago / — -
|SOP FOR MPH in Boston (HEALTH POLICY AND MANAGEMENT)
3 - @Holt Thank you very much for your time,attention and your corrections. They are very much appreciated. I would work...
GraduateAdekiite - 2 days ago / Adekiite - 1 day ago
|To be an asset to the program. SOP for MS in Biomedical Regulatory Affairs
2 - Omit the part about your marriage. That is irrelevant to the reviewer and does not prove anything with regards...
Graduateshwetanimwal - 1 day ago / Holt - 1 day ago
|Review Personal Statement for Data Science Masters
2 - If we are to consider only the relevant parts of your writing that respond to the prompt requirements, we...
GraduateAlatif56 - Jan 21, 2020 / Holt - 2 days ago
|SOP Pharmacy Phd review! I look forward to all critiques
4 - @Ulaai @Holt Thank you both for your valuable feedback! I will definitely be taking your comments into consideration....
Graduatehuskal - Jan 19, 2020 / huskal - Jan 20, 2020
|LOI for MA in International Development - career engagement
Graduatereenaz - Jan 20, 2020 / reenaz - Jan 20, 2020
|Environment Design; STATEMENT OF PURPOSE - Goal of Study & Study Plan / Future plan after Studies
Graduaterafaelapsouzza - Jan 18, 2020 / rafaelapsouzza - Jan 19, 2020
|Pursuing master's degree in International Trade GKS/KGSP - small family and destiny
3 - This essay should not have been based on your personal considerations for content. You must ensure that your work...
Graduatealexng - Dec 25, 2019 / Holt - Jan 18, 2020
|Personal Statement for Tourism Development and Culture EMJMD
3 - Don't make boastful claims in your letter such as "top student". What the reviewer considers a top student and...
GraduateKhamidova - Dec 24, 2019 / Holt - Jan 18, 2020
|Personal Statement review for Oxford - African Studies
4 - @Holt Thanks for the comment. I'm quite swamped now and if possible could you please suggest where I should...
GraduateUmeIke - Jan 8, 2020 / UmeIke - Jan 16, 2020
|SOP: Why pursue Masters in Business Analytics in University X (Canada)?
3 - Since this is a statement of purpose for a masters degree, you should be focusing less on your college...
Graduateanalyticsaspiran - Dec 30, 2019 / Holt - Jan 15, 2020
|"Describe a meaninful experience in your life." PT school essay prompt
3 - This sounds like you are writing the beginnings of a novel instead of discussing an important experience in your...
Graduatecheyennebucknerr - Jan 7, 2020 / Holt - Jan 14, 2020
|Personal Statement for MS in Applied Data Science
3 - While there is no required word limitation on the personal statement for this university, you should not write more...
GraduateIris_viva - Jan 4, 2020 / Holt - Jan 14, 2020
|Structure of SOP essay for UX and UI design
2 - The missing element in this version of your study plan is ; what is the relevance of this research...
Graduatejos3ph - Jan 13, 2020 / Holt - Jan 14, 2020
|Master in Finance & Accounting program - my first draft for personal statement
2 - It is a bit difficult to review your personal statement as you did not indicate if the university has...
GraduateKamrul Hasan - Jan 9, 2020 / Holt - Jan 13, 2020
|Personal Statement - Applying for Master in e-Business Management
Graduatedianaoctavia - Dec 28, 2019 / Holt - Jan 10, 2020
|I am going to write a study objective for the Fulbright scholarship
2 - Hello. From what I understand, it seems like you still don't have specific place to pursue your masters degree...
GraduateAli163 - Dec 24, 2019 / Ulaai - Jan 4, 2020
|National Concern - Graduate Degree Application - Personal Statement for studies in Korea
2 - @eti_k Thank you for coming in this website. First is that don't sound like you admire korea than...
Graduateeti_k - Dec 28, 2019 / shingeki1996 - Jan 4, 2020
|Letter of motivation for EMJMD critical care nursing
3 - @luke matu Hi there. Thanks for coming to the site for feedback! Since you are working with a...
Graduateluke matu - Dec 23, 2019 / Maria - Jan 2, 2020
|Erasmus Mundus in Security and Cloud Computing - expectations, career aspirations, experience, etc.
GraduateYusufbek - Dec 19, 2019 / Yusufbek - Dec 23, 2019
|Essay topic: Carey Business school shapes business leaders who seize the opportunity
2 - @dichangwei Hello. Welcome to the forum! Here is my feedback on your writing. Be cautious of your...
Graduatedichangwei - Dec 19, 2019 / Maria - Dec 23, 2019
|Statement of Purpose in the field of Data Science for a 13 years experience java developer
2 - @surima Welcome! Here is my feedback that I hope can help you out. The first sentence immediately jolts...
Graduatesurima - Dec 18, 2019 / Maria - Dec 19, 2019
|Chain management and me - Applying for Master studies in the United Kingdom
3 - @Maria Thank you so much for the feedback!!! Your comments are very valuable, especially pointed out the fact that...
GraduateTingkkk - Dec 15, 2019 / Tingkkk - Dec 17, 2019
|Personal statement - Former QA & Product Manager applying Master of Data Science
2 - @Hana Fang Welcome to the forum! I hope that my feedback gives you insight on how to improve your...
GraduateHana Fang - Dec 11, 2019 / Maria - Dec 13, 2019
|Audit and Finance LETTER FOR MASTER ADMISSION - the university offers the best opportunities for me
2 - Dear Ernest, I am not going to delve deep into particular details from your writing. Instead, I am...
GraduateATOWILSON - Dec 12, 2019 / Sunrise011 - Dec 13, 2019
|Personal Statement - Erasmus Mundus Tourism Development & Culture
4 - it is never easy thinking and writing convincing essays. You haven't stated why you should be considered for...
GraduateLoyceVeenings - Dec 7, 2019 / StChibuzor - Dec 12, 2019
|Question on the amount of personality within my Digital Media Arts Graduate Statement of Purpose
2 - @jwoakley Welcome to the forum! I'm here to provide feedback on your writing. Please don't hesitate to approach just...
Graduatejwoakley - Dec 4, 2019 / Maria - Dec 6, 2019
|"Gold Medal" - Statement of Purpose for MBA program in Sofia University, Palo Alto
2 - @MiniBauce Welcome! Here's my feedback for your writing. While I think that the narration in the first paragraph...
GraduateMiniBauce - Dec 1, 2019 / Maria - Dec 2, 2019
|Motivation Letter for Msc in Electrical Engineer - Budapest University of Technology and Economics
GraduateSaifur Rahman - Nov 27, 2019 / Saifur Rahman - Nov 27, 2019
|Research Interest (proposed graduate program relates to your career goals)
6 - @johnsnon This one appears to be better than the previous ones. It's more comprehensive, elaborate, and yet does not...
Graduatejohnsnon - Nov 4, 2019 / Maria - Nov 27, 2019
|Personal Statement for MSc in Advanced Computing Science with Big Data - Word count: 499
2 - @jayathungek Hi there. Thanks for coming to the site! I hope that this feedback of mine will give you...
Graduatejayathungek - Nov 25, 2019 / Maria - Nov 26, 2019
|Profile Evaluation for MIM, MTEC
NEW - self presentation Dear all, I have done my engineering from BITS Pilani Hyderabad and have graduated in 2018...
Graduateapp2020 - Nov 24, 2019 / — -
|SOP REVIEW: MS IN STATISTICS
Graduateessayforum2019 - Nov 23, 2019 / essayforum2019 - Nov 24, 2019
|Motivation Letter: Management - this fabulously sophisticated area
GraduateLanyi - Nov 24, 2019 / Lanyi - Nov 24, 2019
|SOP for Thesis-based Masters in Computer Science with Interest in ML/NLP
2 - @nickil21 Hi there. Thanks for coming to the forum! I hope my feedback helps you. While I appreciate...
Graduatenickil21 - Nov 17, 2019 / Maria - Nov 19, 2019
|Academic Statement for PhD Biomedical Engineering! Previous study experiences.
3 - @Maria Thank you so much Maria. I have rearranged the paragraphs. Can you please check they make a sense...
GraduateAGeek - Nov 15, 2019 / AGeek - Nov 16, 2019
|Exhausted and Disappointed with the failed efforts! SOP for PhD Biomedical Engineering
3 - @Maria Thank you for you response. I have tried to make changes. Below are the first and second...
GraduateAGeek - Nov 15, 2019 / AGeek - Nov 16, 2019
|Personal Statement: M.Eng Aerospace Engineering (McGill Mastercard Foundation)
3 - I think there are too many short paragraphs so, you should combine certain lines in one paragraph to give...
Graduatedrae_whiz - Oct 27, 2019 / AGeek - Nov 15, 2019
|Masters application for Mechanical Engineering - big step of my professional career
GraduateSSUfasjbnf - Nov 9, 2019 / AGeek - Nov 15, 2019
|Personal Statement for Imperial College London -Masters in Materials Engineering (comment/criticize)
4 - @Maria Thank you for the feedback, I will try and work on formatting it in the required way. It...
Graduateitoffi3 - Oct 31, 2019 / itoffi3 - Nov 1, 2019
|Motivation Letter for MSc Human Computer Interaction in Universität Siegen (3 years of experience)
2 - @ayunovianti Hi there! It's good to see you here. Hopefully, my feedback will be a positive contribution to the...
Graduateayunovianti - Oct 26, 2019 / Maria - Oct 26, 2019
|Statement of Purpose for MSc Health Economics and Decision Science
2 - @violet2 Welcome to the forum! Hopefully, this feedback will help you in your writing endeavors. If it does, please...
Graduateviolet2 - Oct 24, 2019 / Maria - Oct 26, 2019
|Statistics (Data Science) - Personal Statement
2 - @oxford123 Hello there! Welcome to the forum. Hopefully, this feedback will be helpful for your writing endeavors. If it...
Graduateoxford123 - Oct 24, 2019 / Maria - Oct 26, 2019
|Career-ending injuries - PTCAS application essay 2019
2 - @tifftpcc I don't want to believe your first paragraph is part of the essay. If it is, I will...
Graduatetifftpcc - Oct 20, 2019 / Quizzy - Oct 22, 2019
|NOTHING THREATS THE WORLD MORE THAN NUCLEAR WEAPONS
2 - @Blue Autumn Hi. Welcome here! We're always glad to have new people coming around. If you have more questions...
GraduateBlue Autumn - Oct 18, 2019 / Maria - Oct 19, 2019
|Statement of Purpose: MS in Computer Science with the expertise in Machine Learning
2 - @romitjain Hi. Welcome! I'm going to give you a briefing of what you can do to improve this essay...
Graduateromitjain - Oct 13, 2019 / Maria - Oct 18, 2019
|SOP for MSc- Computer Science / Faculty of Engineering
2 - Great essay. However, i found it very difficult to comprehend your breakdown of GPA and how you discussed the...
Graduateashudbng11 - Oct 13, 2019 / ObedRockson - Oct 16, 2019
|A technological world - statement of purpose for masters in computer science
2 - @saikadiyala Welcome to the forum! I truly hope that the feedback you will receive from me would help you...
Graduatesaikadiyala - Oct 12, 2019 / Maria - Oct 14, 2019
|Description of methodologies and results while solving a problem - Texas Mccombs MSBA Essay
2 - @vivekmehndiratta Hi. Welcome here! I hope that you learn something from this feedback that'll help you in your learning...
Graduatevivekmehndiratta - Oct 9, 2019 / Maria - Oct 14, 2019
|LETTER OF INTENT - BUSINESS Administration-Strategy and Management in International Organizations
3 - Thank you very much @Maria. I am very grateful for your review, I appreciate. i will address your recommendation...
GraduateObedRockson - Oct 9, 2019 / ObedRockson - Oct 11, 2019
|Duke University Business Analytics Application Essay - Extracurricular Engagement
2 - @yuminzhang Welcome to the forum. I hope this feedback becomes helpful for your writing endeavors. If it is, don't...
Graduateyuminzhang - Oct 7, 2019 / Maria - Oct 9, 2019
|My intention to take a graduate level computer science programme in the UK - application statement
2 - @Asphodel Thanks for continuously being on the platform. I hope you are doing well, and that you find this...
GraduateAsphodel - Oct 7, 2019 / Maria - Oct 9, 2019
|Statement of Purpose for Ms materials science and tech
3 - Hi Xphire99, After reading your essay, I can conclude that you do have a passion, talent are responsible for...
GraduateXphire99 - Oct 6, 2019 / athachng2002 - Oct 7, 2019
|My elder brother has great impact on my life - influential person essay
3 - Hi Maria, this is my feedback with your paragraph. My english is still limited, but you can check if...
Graduatesaeed147 - Oct 3, 2019 / soulpancake - Oct 6, 2019
|SOP for MS on Cyber Security for UK. Jan 2020 entry.
2 - @sujithbro Hi. Thank you for being here! I wish you the best of luck in your application. I'm here...
Graduatesujithbro - Oct 4, 2019 / Maria - Oct 6, 2019
|Applying to Masters in Science in Anesthesia programs to become an Anesthesiologist Assistant
2 - @mad14f Welcome to the forum! I hope this feedback becomes beneficial for your writing endeavors in the future. If...
Graduatemad14f - Sep 30, 2019 / Maria - Sep 30, 2019
|This SOP for The University of British Columbia delineates my whole life...
2 - @Musanna Galib Hey there! Welcome to the forum. I hope that this feedback becomes helpful for your application to...
GraduateMusanna Galib - Sep 27, 2019 / Maria - Sep 27, 2019
|Statement of Purpose for Masters in Life Science KFUPM
Graduatekingzoly - Sep 15, 2019 / kingzoly - Sep 27, 2019
|The noticeable outburst in the number of people has engendered the extinction of some animal species
2 - @lunalunalala Hi. I am here to assess this essay for you to provide a comprehensive feedback. If you find...
Graduatelunalunalala - Sep 24, 2019 / Maria - Sep 26, 2019
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