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I seek your valuable reviews on my statement of purpose for MBA admission in a college ,, please feel free to criticize , reply needed asap
Statement of Purpose
My penchant for computers & my inclination to work in management sector have encouraged me to pursue a career that will help me combine these two interests. I seek to be a key part of an organization where my decision taking abilities and my managerial skills will be vital for its growth and betterment of society and thus also inspiring others in contributing into it.
To achieve this I pursued computer engineering to attain technical cognizance. My academics taught me importance of discipline, moral values and personal communication.
In college, as a member of various student associations I participated in organizing college fests & events. I showed ardent participation in various technical competitions and events like, Google Summer of Code, IBM DB2 , Google Power Searching and successfully completed a research level project in data hiding and security.
Through a degree in management, I seek to get a strong foothold in business principles and ideologies that will help me make a mark in the industry, towards my goal of seeing myself in the decision-making rung of an enterprise.
XYZ college with its eminent faculty and competitive atmosphere will not only provide me basic management education but will also help in nurturing the leadership qualities in me. An opportunity to learn from the industry's finest minds and engaging people with diverse background shall certainly help me to reach my goal.
I seek your valuable reviews on my statement of purpose for MBA admission in a college ,, please feel free to criticize , reply needed asap
Statement of Purpose
My penchant for computers & my inclination to work in management sector have encouraged me to pursue a career that will help me combine these two interests. I seek to be a key part of an organization where my decision taking abilities and my managerial skills will be vital for its growth and betterment of society and thus also inspiring others in contributing into it.
To achieve this I pursued computer engineering to attain technical cognizance. My academics taught me importance of discipline, moral values and personal communication.
In college, as a member of various student associations I participated in organizing college fests & events. I showed ardent participation in various technical competitions and events like, Google Summer of Code, IBM DB2 , Google Power Searching and successfully completed a research level project in data hiding and security.
Through a degree in management, I seek to get a strong foothold in business principles and ideologies that will help me make a mark in the industry, towards my goal of seeing myself in the decision-making rung of an enterprise.
XYZ college with its eminent faculty and competitive atmosphere will not only provide me basic management education but will also help in nurturing the leadership qualities in me. An opportunity to learn from the industry's finest minds and engaging people with diverse background shall certainly help me to reach my goal.