Community service puts me out of myself and allows me to see a different part of myself.
I like this... it puts me out of myself. I think this is my new favorite phrase. It is like saying it frees me from the limitations of my perspective.
PLEASE give me feedback! would you accept me off this application?
I think so. It shows great enthusiasm. You can strengthen it by citing more theory pertaining to instructional methods. Show that you are "a focused, smart and responsible individual who has the energy and enthusiasm to encourage and engage..."
You should SHOW your readiness by giving a brief discussion about instructional methods or your philosophy of teaching. For example, you can cite the work of an expert teacher after reading an article she wrote.
I think you are doing very well, though.
:-)