Hi,
I am planning to pursue my Masters degree in ISM. Please review the SoP that i have written. Your feedback will help me improve it before submission.
Statement of Purpose
It has always been my aspiration to use my skills and knowledge to bring innovation into practice, while thriving to be one of the finest business professional in the industry. I believe the key fundamentals needed to excel in this competitive market place are technological knowhow and the ability to interpret, manage and utilize information in the best possible way.
My four years undergraduate course in Electronics and Communication Engineering from TCE included wide range of electronics, networking and management courses. I completed the course in the year 2008 with a first class degree. During my under graduate days I got the opportunity to be a part of various techno fairs and symposiums. This strengthened my knowledge in latest and evolving technologies as well as improved my leadership and managerial qualities. I was also the Chief Student coordinator for "Tronissance '08 - A National Level Technical Symposium" hosted by TCE.
My other extracurricular activities have also been rich and varied. My active participation in various literary and cultural activities both in school and college was much appreciated. I received the "second prize" for creative writing competition conducted as a part of World Space Week by Vikram Sarabhai Space Center (VSSC) in the year 2002. My sporting interest lies in Badminton and Table Tennis.
Soon after graduation, I joined as a technical writer with XXX.
XXX is a US based leading provider of Enterprise Application Integration (EAI) software and services. My responsibilities included developing end user documentation for EAI products, understanding product usability and provide feedback on user interfaces. Other responsibilities included preparing white papers, case studies and brochures for various products.
In November 2009, I joined ABC handling documentation for Cisco Systems and Juniper Networks. I handled new content development, online helps and resolving defects and coordinating with the Development Engineering teams/cross functional teams for defect fixes. Developing quality documentation by adhering to customer specific standards and style guide was one of the key challenges.
During my two years tenure in the IT industry as a technical writer, with prestigious clients like Cisco Systems and Juniper Networks, I was fortunate enough to be a part of varied systems and processes. It was evident that a perfect blend of technical knowledge and business intelligence is required to achieve greater milestones in the industry. I observed that the key to building successful information systems involved correct understanding and analysis of information and effectively communicate the relevant technological and business objectives.
Having obtained a valuable work experience and suitable academic background, I am now prepared to strengthen and refine my expertise and knowledge through post graduate studies. A course work in Information Systems and Management will help me in gaining exposure to varied business process and sharpen my technical skills. This will help me grow as an individual who has a good understanding of the organizational requirements, be an objective critique and assess and assay the proposed IT architecture.
I believe managing information systems is a key cogwheel to generating necessary inputs for a professional to prepare a viable business strategy in order to succeed in today's competitive market place.
After having done a research on my various options, going through your website and consultation from my supervisors, I found out that the post graduate course at your university has modules which are well balanced in leveraging my existing knowledge and experience. I would consider it as a privilege to be a part of your esteemed institution where I would be exposed to a diverse professional atmosphere within the student community. This will help me immensely to understand global business trends, cultures and challenge me to excel in my career path. I sincerely hope that my application will be given thoughtful consideration.
Yours truly,
I think you meant to say striving, not thriving.
...thriving striving to be one of the finest business professionals in the industry. I believe t The key fundamentals needed to excel in this competitive market place are...
My four-year, undergraduate course in Electronics and Communication Engineering from ...
After having done a research on my various options, going through studying your website, and consultation from consulting my supervisors, I found out find that the postgraduate course at your ...
Every time you write anything, you should have ONE BIG IDEA. Stay focused. Express your big idea at the end of the first paragraph, and then make sure every other paragraph is related to it. Do not start randomly talking about extracurriculars in the middle of the essay. You CAN talk about them, but only to give examples of how you apply the principles associated with your BIG IDEA even when doing them.
Do you know what I mean? Make it so that every paragraph supports the big idea at the end of the first paragraph.
:-) You are very impressive because of the professional approach you took here!
thanks!
I will surely work on it..
Hi,
I got an offer letter from University of Bedfordshire for the course: Masters in Information Systems and Management.
Before I take any decision on it, I just want to know your valuable opinions on the university and its reputation.
I have also applied for Warwick university and yet to hear from them.
However, the expenses at warwick are a little too off my budget.
Please tell me if it is a good decision joining bedfordshire.
Thanks in advance
Ncy
Hi Nysha, congratulations on the great progress you are making! I think you should post this question to the category called "student talk," and you might get responses from people at the school.
I wish I had the necessary knowledge to answer!
:-)
Thanks..
I will repost it in the students talk section
