Masters of Law program - the opening paragraph of my statement.

Hello Everyone!

I am writing a statement for Masters of Law program, so far I have written the opening paragraph only. please do let me know of any suggestions or changes to make this paragraph look better.

"I have always been equally interested in Business and Law. I always wanted to pursue a feild that amalgamates both while providing equal opportunities. At first, I did not know what to do with this passion of mine but soon I realized that I was able to incorporate Business into Law in future by specializing in a either Business Law after receiving undergraduate degree in law."

Looking forward

I would delete always in the second sentence. "Feild" shoud be field. Last sentece should say after receiving a undergraduate degree in law- I think

"I have always been equally interested in Business and Law. I always wanted to pursue a feild field that amalgamates both while providing equal meaningful opportunities. At first, I did not know what to do with this passion of mine , but soon I realized that I was able to incorporate Business into Law in future by specializing in a either Business Law after receiving undergraduate degree in law."

This is good, but it is a little too simple. Everyone knows about the field of business law, and someone like you probably sees it as an obvious choice.

Instead of telling us you want to combine the 2 fields, tell us what you want to accomplish -- what industries interest you? What moral convictions drive you?

:-)