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A meaningful extracurricular activity for medicine--Medical Scribe



lightfox 3 / 27  
Apr 15, 2015   #1
Prompt: Please explain why this activity is meaningful for you.

Working as a medical scribe has given me first hand exposure to the field of emergency medicine. Although my role is strictly clerical and
does not allow for any medical care, I have gotten one of the best exposures to emergency medicine, disease processes, medical
decision making, and procedures. It has also given me an opportunity to understand the physician's thought processes and document
them accordingly. Since I am alongside a physician for much of the duration, my curiosity would drive me to tap into the potential
knowledge that would be present before me. Furthermore, my training covered curriculum that gave me a glimpse into the field of
medicine such as medical terminology, pathophysiology, emergency procedures, and more that would help me become an valuable
scribe. Additionally, because I am also an EMT, it complements well with my scribe because as an EMT, I transport patients to the
hospital, and as a scribe, I get to observe what happens to the patients afterwards. Like my role as an EMT, my job as a scribe has given

me valuable assets that can help me become an effective physician. It has helped me improve qualities in myself that would be valuable
to have as a physician, which include critical thinking, adaptability, organization skills, and proper management of stressful situations.

EF_Jasmine - / 68  
Apr 15, 2015   #2
Hi! I see you have a strong passion here! I would advise is you work on your tenses, you mix up present and future tenses. For example, If you are speaking of something you are doing in the present, all your verbs in the sentence should be in present tense. I have given you edits above to help, good luck with your passion!
OP lightfox 3 / 27  
Apr 15, 2015   #3
Thank you for the suggestions! I will take them into consideration. By the way, I don't know if you remember, but you also looked at my personal statement I wrote about two months ago, and you really liked it. Unfortunately, I didn't work as hard on this one as I did with that statement in the past (I actually wrote this in the middle of the night in one go so there are clearly more errors here than in my first topic haha), but again, thank you for the suggestion. I will implement them accordingly.
EF_Jasmine - / 68  
Apr 16, 2015   #4
Ahhh... I remember!!! Glad to help!


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