AncientSorrow 1 / 2 Jul 28, 2011 #1Topic: Teachers' salaries should be based on their students' academic performance.Educational institutions always face the contention---whether to pay teachers according to their students' academic performance or not. The statement only emphasizes the former is misleading.I have a question here. If I mean simply emphasizes teacher's salaries should be based on the performance of students is wrong. Should I write like: The statement only emphasizes the former is misleading.or, The statement only emphasizes one aspect is misleading.or, The statement only emphasizes one side is misleading.I feel confused about this, it seems to me neither of them is proper. Do any one know how to express this?
T9Fernando - / 4 Jul 28, 2011 #2Yeah, I think none of the three is correct.I believe it's better to say like this:The statement that teachers should be paid according to their students' academic performance is misleading.
OP AncientSorrow 1 / 2 Jul 29, 2011 #3Thanks for answering.But doing so, I will repeat what I have write before. Do you have any good ideas to avoid keeping use this sentence.such sentece: whether A or B. If I simply want to empasize A, how should I express. the former? one aspect? or only repeat A again?
EF_Kevin 8 / 13,321 129 Jul 31, 2011 #4The former statement is misleading. ---You could do this, but it is still not quite right.You do not have a misleading statement here to talk about. I think this is what you are trying to say:The argument in favor of the former statement is misleading, because _____________________ (Why do you think people are misled about it?):-)
OP AncientSorrow 1 / 2 Aug 3, 2011 #5The argument in favor of the former statement is misleading, because _____________________ (Why do you think people are misled about it?)Thanks for answering. I really appreciate your help.