I've paraphrased sentences but i'm not sure about words in my sentences
Before: it is very important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong After: It is very essential that young people gain an understanding of the difference between right and wrong
Hi, though paraphrasing can be challenging, I believe you did a good job. A few points to note though;
- when paraphrasing, make sure that the idea is still there - keep your focus on the topic - know the idea or the point you want to drive - review the rules of the english language - mind the words you use to stress your point
This guidelines should be able to make the next essay or paraphrasing dilemma a little bit easy for you. Should you need any more help, let us know and EF is here for you.