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Playtime, mom, lions, etc - correct my grammar



hannapang 1 / 1  
Jul 27, 2011   #1
1.I like play time, but I hate nap time.
2.I have four family. My mom has a beautiful smile.
3. i am silly boy. I like to trick to the teachers.
4.Many friends want to play with me because I am popular.
5My sister is 8 years old. she goest to elementary school.
6 I am happy when I meet my teachers.
7. I want to go to beach with my family on summer vacation.
8 I am good at counting numbers than my brother.
9.I like story books. It is fun to read books to my friend like my teacher.
10 I like lions. I am not afraid of lions.
11My mom is beautiful and a good cook.
12 I have big eyes so I can see well.
13 I like running in outside playground.
14. I am shy boy so I don't want to talk.

T9Fernando - / 4  
Jul 28, 2011   #2
1.Correct.
2.I have four family members.
3.I am a silly boy. I like to play tricks on my teachers.
4.Correct.
5.She goes to an elementary school.
6.Correct.
7.I want to go to the beach.
8.I am better
9.It is funny
10.Correct.
11.Correct.
12.Correct.
13.delete "in"
14.I am a shy boy
EF_Kevin 8 / 13053  
Jul 31, 2011   #3
reticent is a beautiful word

I agree!

Great work, T9Fernando!!

13 I like running in outside at the playground.
14. I am shy boy, so I don't want to talk.
OP hannapang 1 / 1  
Aug 10, 2011   #4
please correct my grammar

1. There are many different types of transportation in the world. I go to kindergarten on a schoolbus.
EF_Kevin 8 / 13053  
Aug 16, 2011   #5
The grammar is good in this last sentence... but "school bus" is 2 words, not one word.

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