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Does this sentence make sense? "Life is something so immaculate..."



Shalah2695 1 / -  
Sep 16, 2012   #1
"Life is something so immaculate to the human brain not even the smartest man in the world can figure it out"

TooDamn_Funky 2 / 2  
Sep 16, 2012   #2
It sort of does, but you could use some comas to separate your ideas. Try something like this: "Life is something so immaculate our human brain, not even the smartest human brain, could figure it out."
chessman567 5 / 168  
Sep 17, 2012   #3
Shalah: I think this would be better. "Life is something so immaculate to the human brain that not even the smartest man in the world can figure it out"
testing /  
Sep 17, 2012   #4
And don't forget to end the sentence with a comma :).
college123 3 / 4  
Sep 17, 2012   #5
To allow it to make sense grammatically, just add a "that" before "not even."
DayDay - / 1  
Sep 17, 2012   #6
It should really be that.
lcpapili 1 / 1  
Sep 17, 2012   #7
just another suggestion to throw at you;

Even the mind of the most brilliant man in the world cannot grasp the immaculate concept of life.
BachChaconne2 1 / 94  
Sep 17, 2012   #8
Here's another suggestion:

Life is so immaculate that not even the smartest man in the world can figure it out.

By the way, why did you use the word immaculate?


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