Does this sentence make sense? "Life is something so immaculate..."

Shalah2695 1 / -

Sep 16, 2012 #1

"Life is something so immaculate to the human brain not even the smartest man in the world can figure it out"

TooDamn_Funky 2 / 2

Sep 16, 2012 #2

It sort of does, but you could use some comas to separate your ideas. Try something like this: "Life is something so immaculate our human brain, not even the smartest human brain, could figure it out."

chessman567 5 / 170

Sep 17, 2012 #3

Shalah: I think this would be better. "Life is something so immaculate to the human brain that not even the smartest man in the world can figure it out"

testing /

Sep 17, 2012 #4

And don't forget to end the sentence with a comma :).

college123 3 / 4

Sep 17, 2012 #5

To allow it to make sense grammatically, just add a "that" before "not even."

DayDay - / 1

Sep 17, 2012 #6

It should really be that.

lcpapili 1 / 1

Sep 17, 2012 #7

just another suggestion to throw at you;

Even the mind of the most brilliant man in the world cannot grasp the immaculate concept of life.

BachChaconne2 1 / 95

Sep 17, 2012 #8

Here's another suggestion:

Life is so immaculate that not even the smartest man in the world can figure it out.

By the way, why did you use the word immaculate?