I have a few sentences in my college essay that I can't seem to work around. Any ideas for any of them would be great!
1) "There was espicailly one woman of whom I became fond of."
Correct usage of whom? Use the word "of" twice? End sentence with "of"?
2)[A sentence that says why I continued] "I also continued because I knew my time would be making a difference for...
Is the position of "also" correct? Or should it go after "continued"?
3) "I was worried that I wouldn't be able to support or communicate with the patients."
I think it's called parallelism and I don't think it works with the bolded words. How could I change it?
thank you very much!
1) "There was espicailly one woman of whom I became fond of."
Correct usage of whom? Use the word "of" twice? End sentence with "of"?
2)[A sentence that says why I continued] "I also continued because I knew my time would be making a difference for...
Is the position of "also" correct? Or should it go after "continued"?
3) "I was worried that I wouldn't be able to support or communicate with the patients."
I think it's called parallelism and I don't think it works with the bolded words. How could I change it?
thank you very much!