bilal ABUZENAH
Oct 25, 2009
Undergraduate / ESL teacher, Paul Thomas was the funniest person I ever knew ; My best teacher [17]
I'm still working on it....pleas may check #6 for me
I'm still working on it....pleas may check #6 for me
bilal ABUZENAH
Oct 25, 2009
Undergraduate / ESL teacher, Paul Thomas was the funniest person I ever knew ; My best teacher [17]
thanks for the comments.
: write about your best teacher.
I'M still working on it
his class was fun and interesting. he was helpful, knowledgeable, and funny at the same time
Examples
he was helpful
Paul helped me in many situations....to the end of the paragraph.
his class was fun and interesting
His class was really fun....to the end of the paragraph
knowledgeable
if you have any Idea thats would be great
WHAT should THE CONCLUSION be about?
thanks for the comments.
: write about your best teacher.
I'M still working on it
his class was fun and interesting. he was helpful, knowledgeable, and funny at the same time
Examples
he was helpful
Paul helped me in many situations....to the end of the paragraph.
his class was fun and interesting
His class was really fun....to the end of the paragraph
knowledgeable
if you have any Idea thats would be great
WHAT should THE CONCLUSION be about?
bilal ABUZENAH
Oct 25, 2009
Poetry / The chair..... [6]
The chair...
Mr. Mayor stand up don't care…
I am not going to steal your chair, it is your chair..
I could see your name on it since the creator created the chair, so it
is your chair……
Mr. Mayor Stand up do not care, no body dare to touch your chair…
Mr. Mayor be merciful not with me, but with the chair….
Mr. Mayor.
Mr. Bush himself pushed himself from the highest chair, so let him to be your model for a sec just a sec not any more….
Mr. Mayor I swear I can feel the chair it needs to breathe some air fresh air Mr. Mayor…………
Mr. Mayor pleases and one more please be merciful not with me, but with the chair…….
The chair...
Mr. Mayor stand up don't care…
I am not going to steal your chair, it is your chair..
I could see your name on it since the creator created the chair, so it
is your chair……
Mr. Mayor Stand up do not care, no body dare to touch your chair…
Mr. Mayor be merciful not with me, but with the chair….
Mr. Mayor.
Mr. Bush himself pushed himself from the highest chair, so let him to be your model for a sec just a sec not any more….
Mr. Mayor I swear I can feel the chair it needs to breathe some air fresh air Mr. Mayor…………
Mr. Mayor pleases and one more please be merciful not with me, but with the chair…….
bilal ABUZENAH
Oct 25, 2009
Undergraduate / ESL teacher, Paul Thomas was the funniest person I ever knew ; My best teacher [17]
please help me find mistakes. please, please.
please help me find mistakes. please, please.
bilal ABUZENAH
Oct 24, 2009
Undergraduate / Common App-influential person of your life (my grandfather) [7]
watch the tenses that you are using .
Someone knocks the door
I am studying
My mom stands right front of the door
I close the door and heard
I think you should use present continuous tense(ing).because you wrote in the first sentence
Sitting on the desk, I am studying .
watch the tenses that you are using .
Someone knocks the door
I am studying
My mom stands right front of the door
I close the door and heard
I think you should use present continuous tense(ing).because you wrote in the first sentence
Sitting on the desk, I am studying .
bilal ABUZENAH
Oct 24, 2009
Undergraduate / Sponge Girl - My Emerson Supp essay [3]
hi ying..
My advice to my self and to other nonnative speakers is never translate any thing from your mother language to English. and try to use English-English dictionary.
hi ying..
My advice to my self and to other nonnative speakers is never translate any thing from your mother language to English. and try to use English-English dictionary.
bilal ABUZENAH
Oct 24, 2009
Undergraduate / MIT the world you come from essay [4]
hi, I agree with lmy .
but if you did not mention to this point I immigrated to America when I was five
china would be the environment that shaped you.
inested of five you may say { I immigrated to America when I was twelve} or more.
hi, I agree with lmy .
but if you did not mention to this point I immigrated to America when I was five
china would be the environment that shaped you.
inested of five you may say { I immigrated to America when I was twelve} or more.
bilal ABUZENAH
Oct 24, 2009
Undergraduate / ESL teacher, Paul Thomas was the funniest person I ever knew ; My best teacher [17]
small part....I'm looking for mistake please help find some.
My best teacher I have ever had was my ESL teacher, Paul Thomas, he was the funniest person I had known in my life. his class was fun and interesting. he was helpful, knowledgeable, and funny at the same time.
Paul helped me in many situations, I still remembered, when he came with me to the court room to help me to understand what the judge was saying. Also when I came here I started looking for job; wherever I went, they asked me for a resume, in that time, I didn't even know what does resume mean. I told him about that, he said"I'D be happy to help you.
small part....I'm looking for mistake please help find some.
My best teacher I have ever had was my ESL teacher, Paul Thomas, he was the funniest person I had known in my life. his class was fun and interesting. he was helpful, knowledgeable, and funny at the same time.
Paul helped me in many situations, I still remembered, when he came with me to the court room to help me to understand what the judge was saying. Also when I came here I started looking for job; wherever I went, they asked me for a resume, in that time, I didn't even know what does resume mean. I told him about that, he said"I'D be happy to help you.
bilal ABUZENAH
Oct 24, 2009
Writing Feedback / Win is always your if you do fight from your deep heart. A success does not depend from luck. [8]
the most important thing for nonnative speakers is that not to translate any thing from their native language because it sometimes sounds fanny and make no sense.
first essay i wrote, my teacher was not able to understand the main Idea. because i wrote in my native language then i translated to English.
a richest person in world you can say { one of the richest people in the world}
In childhood, everyone heard the story of King Midas i never heard about it.
if you have a luck and you don't use it with intelligence you couldn't be a succeed in life. how can we use the luck??
I believe that if hard work is not enough luck is not important
do not transect any thing from your native language
Hard work is necessary to achive a goal or target
goal=target same meaning. Hard work is necessary to achive your goal.
the most important thing for nonnative speakers is that not to translate any thing from their native language because it sometimes sounds fanny and make no sense.
first essay i wrote, my teacher was not able to understand the main Idea. because i wrote in my native language then i translated to English.
a richest person in world you can say { one of the richest people in the world}
In childhood, everyone heard the story of King Midas i never heard about it.
if you have a luck and you don't use it with intelligence you couldn't be a succeed in life. how can we use the luck??
I believe that if hard work is not enough luck is not important
do not transect any thing from your native language
Hard work is necessary to achive a goal or target
goal=target same meaning. Hard work is necessary to achive your goal.
bilal ABUZENAH
Oct 24, 2009
Poetry / The United Nations... They go there whenever they want to go... [9]
it is just kind of describing the situation in the united nation.
and it mention to politicians scandal
By mistake he leaves his underwear with her...
Next day, you will see her on the air on CNN or BBC
Asking for money for his underwear
for example .
the New York x governor..
former president "Clinton"
it is just kind of describing the situation in the united nation.
and it mention to politicians scandal
By mistake he leaves his underwear with her...
Next day, you will see her on the air on CNN or BBC
Asking for money for his underwear
for example .
the New York x governor..
former president "Clinton"
bilal ABUZENAH
Oct 24, 2009
Undergraduate / Common App-volunteer work at community center... making it flow better? [8]
I like it, and i think about changing "Saturday mornings" to "Friday mornings". as you know the Muslim meet every Friday.
and from my experience, there is many people here doesn't know What does mosque mean.
so may you mention to its meaning in the bottom of the page.
I like it, and i think about changing "Saturday mornings" to "Friday mornings". as you know the Muslim meet every Friday.
and from my experience, there is many people here doesn't know What does mosque mean.
so may you mention to its meaning in the bottom of the page.
bilal ABUZENAH
Oct 24, 2009
Poetry / The United Nations... They go there whenever they want to go... [9]
If you tell me your opinion about it thats would be great.
The United Nations ....
They go there whenever they want to go...
They go there if they get a call...
They go there if they fight or if they want a right...
They go there by plane, car, or train...
Anyway, the meeting will start soon...
Everybody prepares...
The Secret service is everywhere...
Whatever the result, it is not fair...
The meeting is starting...
Some of them are listening....
One is looking for his glasses under the chair...
One is picking his nose without care...
One is sleeping on the chair....
And
One is calling a white girl to hang out with her...
And the others are blaming each other
This is your fault, I am right, and this is all about, nothing new...
The meeting is done...
Every one wants to have fun...
Later at night one of them hang out with her
By mistake he leaves his underwear with her...
Next day, you will see her on the air on CNN or BBC
Asking for money for his underwear, but you know
Who cares?!!!
If you tell me your opinion about it thats would be great.
The United Nations ....
They go there whenever they want to go...
They go there if they get a call...
They go there if they fight or if they want a right...
They go there by plane, car, or train...
Anyway, the meeting will start soon...
Everybody prepares...
The Secret service is everywhere...
Whatever the result, it is not fair...
The meeting is starting...
Some of them are listening....
One is looking for his glasses under the chair...
One is picking his nose without care...
One is sleeping on the chair....
And
One is calling a white girl to hang out with her...
And the others are blaming each other
This is your fault, I am right, and this is all about, nothing new...
The meeting is done...
Every one wants to have fun...
Later at night one of them hang out with her
By mistake he leaves his underwear with her...
Next day, you will see her on the air on CNN or BBC
Asking for money for his underwear, but you know
Who cares?!!!
bilal ABUZENAH
Oct 24, 2009
Student Talk / How to improve English writing? Learning through reading. [130]
we should use English-English dictionary,and not try to translate any thing from our native language, because sometimes it sounds funny and makes no sense.
one time i translated a report from from my native language to English using GOOGLE translator
IT sounds really funny. and some sentence makes no sense.
we should use English-English dictionary,and not try to translate any thing from our native language, because sometimes it sounds funny and makes no sense.
one time i translated a report from from my native language to English using GOOGLE translator
IT sounds really funny. and some sentence makes no sense.
bilal ABUZENAH
Oct 24, 2009
Speeches / Does America Still Have Heroes? [28]
I think you should go with "American still has heroes"...
I think you should go with "American still has heroes"...
bilal ABUZENAH
Oct 24, 2009
Undergraduate / Welcome to My world.. [4]
this essay about myself....I'd like you to grade it for me( a. b . c) by tha way I'm an esl student.
On December22 1989, in the middle of the night almost every
body was sleeping. My family was in the hospital waiting for me
to come to this life. At that time, they did not know my name yet,
but they just knew that I was a baby boy. As my father said" the
room was crowded. Every one came to see you. At dawn almost all
of them fell in sleep except me, I stayed beside your mother..."
One year later my father decided to go to America because he
felt he would have a better chance than in Jordan .At that time we
faced a lot of problems. I believe that it is very difficult to be a
single mother with four children, but fortunately my mother was
smart enough to cope with the life demands.
At the age of 4, I started to go to school. It was a lot of fun. I
liked it. I was in private school. Then, after ninth grade, I switched
to a public school. Generally, my grade point average was good.
I am the youngest in my family, therefore, I don’t have a lot of
things to be responsible for. After high school I was confused
about what I should do, stay in Jordan or go to America. I decided,
like my father had done before, and I said, may be I would have a
better chance in America.
THIS is my story, which I have not shared with anyone except
you. Finally, I have found someone beside my family that I shared
my happy moments, my sad ones and the obstacles that faced me
during my life. Once again welcome to my world.
this essay about myself....I'd like you to grade it for me( a. b . c) by tha way I'm an esl student.
On December22 1989, in the middle of the night almost every
body was sleeping. My family was in the hospital waiting for me
to come to this life. At that time, they did not know my name yet,
but they just knew that I was a baby boy. As my father said" the
room was crowded. Every one came to see you. At dawn almost all
of them fell in sleep except me, I stayed beside your mother..."
One year later my father decided to go to America because he
felt he would have a better chance than in Jordan .At that time we
faced a lot of problems. I believe that it is very difficult to be a
single mother with four children, but fortunately my mother was
smart enough to cope with the life demands.
At the age of 4, I started to go to school. It was a lot of fun. I
liked it. I was in private school. Then, after ninth grade, I switched
to a public school. Generally, my grade point average was good.
I am the youngest in my family, therefore, I don’t have a lot of
things to be responsible for. After high school I was confused
about what I should do, stay in Jordan or go to America. I decided,
like my father had done before, and I said, may be I would have a
better chance in America.
THIS is my story, which I have not shared with anyone except
you. Finally, I have found someone beside my family that I shared
my happy moments, my sad ones and the obstacles that faced me
during my life. Once again welcome to my world.
