Eiraj
Nov 14, 2016
Writing Feedback / Summary TED - An engineer's vision for tinty forests, everywhere [3]
Hi @Abrahamlincoln,
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..., he joined thevoluntoryvoluntary project which (...) met with prof.Prof. Okazaki who ...
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I hope those corrections are useful for your following summary or essay :)
Hi @Abrahamlincoln,
Here some corrections for your summary:
... problem of the world
... industrial engineering, is having a passion
..., he joined the
... positive impacts
Therefore, he provides website that consists of information ...
I hope those corrections are useful for your following summary or essay :)
