Posts by MrClever

MrClever

Dec 15, 2016

Essays / MIT QUESTIONS For undergraduate students. Doing something for fun. [2]

MIT asks for a multitude of questions. I found One, although relatively superficially simple, very daunting. It goes like, "we know you lead a busy life, full of activities, many of which are required of you.Tell us about something you do for the pleasure of it" what can I write about? For example, I known that taking a step towards cliche topics is definitely uneventful. Help.

MrClever

Dec 16, 2016

Writing Feedback / Working as volunteers should be taken into consideration for children - WRITING TASK 2 [4]

Para 1:
1- issue is about taking a part in
2- been a concern for many people.

Change of structure of last part of para . Try this:
" while it will inconvenience students by disturbing their study schedule, it will improve their social aptitude and provide them with co-operation skills necessary for a respectable job. "

Para 2:
1- Respectively in place of 'With this concern'
2-
This result was that students will boost their confidence by interacting with other people, ~~withhaving~~utilizingbravery to speak-up in the public. All in all, it is argued that such ~~this~~ activity is pivotal ~~factor~~ in burgeoning their self-development.