Writing Feedback / Food revolution - and how the change impact on people's lives - IELTS essay [5]

Hi! Thanhscorpia,i'll give you some recommend about your essay the main thing is that do not star "nowadays" in your introduction it could be brought lower mark and think some complex then paraphrase beginning

Writing Feedback / Essay about the advantages of co-operation in your learning English [5]

Hi lahavip do not give always your opinion in your essay it's not interesting for examiners