Writing Feedback / Ielts2 - In many countries today there are many highly qualified graduates without employment [2]

Hi krempetkov,

I think you'd better do a grammar check first. Although I only used the WORD automatic grammar checker, I still found many grammar mistakes. For example, what's the "economyc crysis" (first line)? And it is "search" not "seach"(eighth line). Not to mention that there are so many missing determiners.

Scholarship / The earth is being harmed by human activity or human activity makes the earth a better place to live [2]

Hi,
Perhaps you want to say "Deforestation is the biggest problem on earth"? But why there are two biggest problems? Shouldn't "biggest" be the only one? This expression sounds pretty odd.