Graduate / My background, research experience and motivation. Review my Statement of Purpose for pursuing phd [3]

pursuing the Ph.D. in the Energy systems engineering

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BACKGROUND
I am writing to express my interest in pursuing the Ph.D. in the Energy systems engineering. I did my bachelors' degree in Mechanical engineering from Mehran University of Engineering and Technology (MUET) Jamshoro. It was good experience to get education from there. In my final year project I utilized my hard efforts for the removal of energy crisis from Pakistan, so I did feasibility analysis of wind farms for different cities of Pakistan. After graduating from MUET I thought to learn more, so I got admission in Energy systems engineering at National University of Sciences and Technology (NUST), Islamabad. Keeping in mind to reduce energy shortage from country I did research actively. With the guidelines of my supervisor I published my work in different conferences and journals. Now it's time to progress more. So I am thinking to do PhD in __________________from your university, which will help me serve my country.

RESEARCH EXPERIENCE
Through all of my academic career I had been maintaining a very good academic record. I had shown a deep interest in projects and assignments which involve extensive research. I have published following work.

Minimizing Natural gas consumption through solar water heating (Journal Science vision volume 19 no 1 & 2 pg: 79-83)

MOTIVATION FOR HIGHER STUDIES
My academic profile shows I have participated well in research. Now I want to learn a lot of new technologies, with new hypotheses for producing more new techniques in the field of my interest. My efforts will be to do research in technologies which is being used internationally, so that energy can be produced efficiently and shortage in Pakistan can be eliminated. Through my mature and professional efforts, I am sure that I will contribute a substantial part in the development of our country's needs. I believe that I am best candidate for the "faculty development program broad". I think that I have all the best capabilities to get this opportunity.