Writing Feedback / Environment problems, who would be responsible for this? - IELTS essay topic [4]

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To begin with, there are some certain reasons for people ...
... problem of mankind as we all lives on Earth and breathes the same atmosphere.
... environment is worth having thorough consideration.
... protection of wild animals have created many efficient ....have proved to have great effect on raising people's awareness of the significance of protecting those animals and their natural habitat.

On the other hand, handling with environmental issues ... the issue of environmental problems should also be tackled by the government of each country.
Besides, it can be easily seen from the fact that each country has different its own distint environmental issues, so would be more reasonable to tackle them separately the solution for them cannot be the same. Take China and Sout Africa for example, one suffers from serious pollution while the other have to deal with illegal wildlife trade, so they should carry on with different measures to tackle their problems.