AnindyaNindy17
Apr 12, 2017
Writing Feedback / Destination of UK Graduates and Postgraduates in 2008. Describe Table IELTS Task 1 [3]
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The diagram indicates the number of destination of UK graduation and postgraduation in 2008, in this case full - time work people are excluded.
Categories of Further study was the highest popular destination of UK graduation and postgraduation, with 29.665 people for graduation level and 2.725 people for postgraduation level. For all other categories, part time are the second highest of destination of UK graduation and postgraduation. Graduation level reached more than postgraduation level with estimate to 17.735 people compared with 2.535 people.
Unemployement people were approximately twice as high as people who take further study for both levels. Unemployement people of graduation level are over 15.000 people as opposed to postgraduation level who numbered over 1.500 people.
Finally, the figures demontrated that between graduation level and postgraduation most prefer to take further study. Also, Part time were biggest choice among graduation and post graduation level in UK. However, a fraction of both levels take voluntary work eventhough the number of unemployment is higher than people who take voluntary work.
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The diagram indicates the number of destination of UK graduation and postgraduation in 2008, in this case full - time work people are excluded.
Categories of Further study was the highest popular destination of UK graduation and postgraduation, with 29.665 people for graduation level and 2.725 people for postgraduation level. For all other categories, part time are the second highest of destination of UK graduation and postgraduation. Graduation level reached more than postgraduation level with estimate to 17.735 people compared with 2.535 people.
Unemployement people were approximately twice as high as people who take further study for both levels. Unemployement people of graduation level are over 15.000 people as opposed to postgraduation level who numbered over 1.500 people.
Finally, the figures demontrated that between graduation level and postgraduation most prefer to take further study. Also, Part time were biggest choice among graduation and post graduation level in UK. However, a fraction of both levels take voluntary work eventhough the number of unemployment is higher than people who take voluntary work.