Scholarship / Scholarship Questions - what are your intentions after graduating from school? [3]

Hi, I'm writing some short paragraphs and essays for a scholarship application. I tried to be straightforward in addressing the prompt, but I will need other people's point of view on this. Especially if you are a general reader, will you get my point or should I be more elaborative and not too specific? Really appreciate your feedback on the content and grammar of my writings.

What are your plans when you finish your studies? (500 chars)

Upon returning, I plan to join the project team in Indonesia Infrastructure Finance, one of the government-owned Financial Institutions that act as an intermediary between investors and infrastructure developers. It has been my dream to implement my expertise in finance to assist the financing process of infrastructure projects. I intend to apply better financing products & project management, which I will learn from the study, to transform available infrastructure projects into impactful bankable pipelines that can be completed in a timely manner.