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Posts by xujiantao
Name: Sam
Joined: May 12, 2017
Last Post: May 15, 2017
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From: China
School: Shanxi Universty

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xujiantao   
May 14, 2017
Writing Feedback / It's a short story about a aunt and his nephew. [3]

early visit



It's Sunday, I got up so early, because I'll go to see my nephew.
I've had breakfast before seven o'clock.Then I went to train station on foot.
It's only one kilometre form the home to the train station, so I arrived just spent about two minutes.
It's only takes two hours by train form my city to my nephew's city, and the view along the road are beautiful, so I don't felt boring at all.

After two hours, I went out of the train station and went to my nephew's home.
I called him on the way, after a few seconds, he answered.
I said "I've just arrived by train, I'm coming to see you!"
"But I'm still having breakfast." he said.
"What are you doing?" I said loudly and surprisingly.
"I'm still having breakfast." he repeated.
"Dear me!" I said. "Do you always get up so late? It's one o'clock!"
xujiantao   
May 15, 2017
Writing Feedback / It's a short story about a aunt and his nephew. [3]

@Holt
Thanks for your help and your advice,I knew about that, but I'm a beginner,I wrote this story mainly for practce my new words and new grammar. I can't write more colorful,interesting now, but I'll do my best to learn more.

Thanks again!
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