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Jul 18, 2017
Writing Feedback / THE AVERAGE ATTENDANCE OF TOP-LEVEL SOCCER LEAGUES [4]
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THE LINE GRAPH ILLUSTRATES THE AVERAGE ATTENDANCE OF TOP-LEVEL SOCCER LEAGUES IN THE UK, GERMANY, AND ITALY FROM 1970 TO 2004
Given is a line graph illustrating the average number of matches participation of three high ranking soccer associations from UK, Germany, and Italy between 1970 and 2004.
From the information supplied, It is evident that the Germany and UK's clubs show an upward trend. Meanwhile, there was a downturn in the participation rate of Italy's club.
From 1970 to 1980, there was a slight drop by approximately 20000 in the presence of the Italian league. At the same periods of time, the UK's soccer association also participated in fewer matches with only 20000 in comparison with the 22000 matches in 1970. However, from then onward, both the soccer clubs' participation rate increased exponentially. 2004 witnessed the enthusiastic attendance of the Italian and English leagues with 35000 and just under 35000 consecutively.
On the contrary, the number of the Germany club's matches gradually went up by around 5000 during the first decade. After that, there was a steady decline in their attendance proportion. Finally, the German soccer club's participation hit the lowest point of under 25000 matches in 2004.
I am going to take an IELTS test maybe 3 three months from now, and writing is my most fear part -.-!!!!! Please help me improve my writing skill. Thanks for all your help. :)
THE LINE GRAPH ILLUSTRATES THE AVERAGE ATTENDANCE OF TOP-LEVEL SOCCER LEAGUES IN THE UK, GERMANY, AND ITALY FROM 1970 TO 2004
number of football fans in europe 1970 - 2004
Given is a line graph illustrating the average number of matches participation of three high ranking soccer associations from UK, Germany, and Italy between 1970 and 2004.
From the information supplied, It is evident that the Germany and UK's clubs show an upward trend. Meanwhile, there was a downturn in the participation rate of Italy's club.
From 1970 to 1980, there was a slight drop by approximately 20000 in the presence of the Italian league. At the same periods of time, the UK's soccer association also participated in fewer matches with only 20000 in comparison with the 22000 matches in 1970. However, from then onward, both the soccer clubs' participation rate increased exponentially. 2004 witnessed the enthusiastic attendance of the Italian and English leagues with 35000 and just under 35000 consecutively.
On the contrary, the number of the Germany club's matches gradually went up by around 5000 during the first decade. After that, there was a steady decline in their attendance proportion. Finally, the German soccer club's participation hit the lowest point of under 25000 matches in 2004.
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