Writing Feedback / IELTS Task 2 - discuss the importance of homework [3]

Hi @lee1943
In your essay, you only discussed the negative side, not the other side of importance on homework.
Hope it helps

Essays / Global warming and endangered species in United States of America argumentative essay [5]

I have a suggestion for a title which is "Is Human Activity Primarily Responsible for Global Climate Change? ".Sorry in advance if it isn't good