kendalj
Jul 28, 2017
Writing Feedback / MY PERSONAL STATEMENT (workshop human right and drug policy) [2]
help me to check my personal statement
I would like to elaborate myself as a very determind learner. I have successfully completed my national examination and practical with a scoring 85% and 80% respectively. Academic skills have been a crucial consideration to me and I have a good understanding of them. As a result I have a special interest in reading. I love read many kinds of books or articles. There are lots of topic to read not only schoolbook but also news, literature and many others. In contrast, the quality that I like the most about myself is not only my passion in education but also in social charity. It is started when I was junior high school and continues until now. I joined a huge variety of organization such as KSPAN (group of students who is anti-drugs), TAC (take action community), part of biology club and member of child's ambassador 2016. At present, in university organization I actively socialize that everyone has the same authority in the wolrd. Based on some organization that I joined i also love to share my knowledge to my family, friends and society about healthy life and the dangers of drugs from what I learnt.
Since I read article about human right and policy woskshop in the internet. I really excited to become member of this workshop. Because I can learn more and expend my knowledge about crucial issues especially human right, drug, sexuality and public health. As a student I really take seriously its role in assisting individuals who regard themselves as having an issue related to human rights, use of drug and being health. In addition, government in my country is commited to against drugs and to providing a healthy environment conducive to the society. However, there are still lots of incident about this problem yet. Furthermore, drug and sexuality ensnare all people who falls including children, adult and women indiscriminately and many adolescent abuse drug and become victims nowadays.
As a teenager this workshop is relevant and a good opportunity for me because I can engage my friends and exemplify my social environment to become a helpful young generation. I have strong belief that I could provide myself to be more active to suggest among teenagers by many ways. One of the effectively method is by social media. Many people especially adolescent these days spend almost a whole day in the internet. Social media is one of the biggest users with more than thousand people active in it. By this workshop I would like to invite teenager to learn and share more about human right and drug policy in a good way and I also will expose what I get in this workshop by social media.
I greatly wished that I will have this great opportunity and privileged to become one of the fortunate member to be chosen. I believe that I could benefit from this workshop and contribute to my country with the knowledge and experience that I gained. I hope that I will have the chances to expose and to get first-hand experience of this workshop.
your help is meaningful to me, Thanks.
help me to check my personal statement
I would like to elaborate myself as a very determind learner. I have successfully completed my national examination and practical with a scoring 85% and 80% respectively. Academic skills have been a crucial consideration to me and I have a good understanding of them. As a result I have a special interest in reading. I love read many kinds of books or articles. There are lots of topic to read not only schoolbook but also news, literature and many others. In contrast, the quality that I like the most about myself is not only my passion in education but also in social charity. It is started when I was junior high school and continues until now. I joined a huge variety of organization such as KSPAN (group of students who is anti-drugs), TAC (take action community), part of biology club and member of child's ambassador 2016. At present, in university organization I actively socialize that everyone has the same authority in the wolrd. Based on some organization that I joined i also love to share my knowledge to my family, friends and society about healthy life and the dangers of drugs from what I learnt.
Since I read article about human right and policy woskshop in the internet. I really excited to become member of this workshop. Because I can learn more and expend my knowledge about crucial issues especially human right, drug, sexuality and public health. As a student I really take seriously its role in assisting individuals who regard themselves as having an issue related to human rights, use of drug and being health. In addition, government in my country is commited to against drugs and to providing a healthy environment conducive to the society. However, there are still lots of incident about this problem yet. Furthermore, drug and sexuality ensnare all people who falls including children, adult and women indiscriminately and many adolescent abuse drug and become victims nowadays.
As a teenager this workshop is relevant and a good opportunity for me because I can engage my friends and exemplify my social environment to become a helpful young generation. I have strong belief that I could provide myself to be more active to suggest among teenagers by many ways. One of the effectively method is by social media. Many people especially adolescent these days spend almost a whole day in the internet. Social media is one of the biggest users with more than thousand people active in it. By this workshop I would like to invite teenager to learn and share more about human right and drug policy in a good way and I also will expose what I get in this workshop by social media.
I greatly wished that I will have this great opportunity and privileged to become one of the fortunate member to be chosen. I believe that I could benefit from this workshop and contribute to my country with the knowledge and experience that I gained. I hope that I will have the chances to expose and to get first-hand experience of this workshop.
your help is meaningful to me, Thanks.