Undergraduate / Mount Holyoke Prompt: Why Holyoke? [3]

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@muskanshrestha, your essay sounds good and convincing.
why are you interested in the Animal Welfare Association? How will you contribute?

But i think you should try to sound more specific, especially saying the opportunities that unique tp the college and how you would make the best out of them... I personally think your essay is quite perfect. Can you look at mine?