Undergraduate / Supplemental UK perspective you bring or experiences you bring you've had to help us understand you [3]

Hi @lmmwill1, this essay asks you to help the committee understand "you" better so what I feel is maybe elaborate on HOW did the experiences of your parents and brother impact on you.

my dad dropped out of high school in his junior year
three yearslater of night school later she did

Scholarship / I want to focus on international HR management as a key factor for my career development (Chevening) [3]

Upon my return to Vietnam after graduation
an international organization which that allows me
After In ten years
in on larger scale
high level professionals
by that contributing to ... British companies operatingoperatein Vietnam
I with my team and I
to support for young students with majoring in HR

I think you have a well thought out plan but if you could post more specific requirements it will help us giving more constructive feedback.