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Following my opinion studying English language will have a very big impact to myself and to the future of Timor-Leste. English language as we know is International language which mostly people in the world uses to communicate. Studying English will give many vantages to myself and to the future of Timor-Leste. English language make me easy to do in many things: I can speak to people who have different native language with me, I can complete English language application like volunteer, conference, event, scholarship and most interesting information has written in English so I can learn more information about every resources. Moreover the importance impact is to my future, I have dreamed to get scholarship abroad to continue my study levels, to get scholarship is not easy when I don't study English, because everything must do it with English like complete application, test exam and interview but when I am studying English is easy to me to get scholarship abroad and my dream will come true. To the future of Timor-Leste English will make development in every sector (economic, politic, education, technology and culture) from international relationship and use English to communicate to another country which have more experienced in this sector. Also Timor-Leste has multi-languages, they not just use official and native language to communicate but English too