Lyipheoryia
Nov 29, 2017
Undergraduate / UBC - Tell us more about one or two activities [4]
@Michell20
I agree with Holt's advice. Your MUN sounds very impressive, and while your experiences volunteering for the orphanage are heartwarming to hear - it doesn't seem to be as impactful as your MUN career.
However, as a fellow student applying to UBC, I empathize with wanting to fill up 2 out of 2 activities. If you truly want to write about the orphanage, I would suggest focusing not just on what you did, but also how your actions directly impacted the children. I would suggest describing why you chose to volunteer with that particular orphanage, and perhaps also mentioning where the donated items would go (Were they donated for the children? Was this orphanage in an impoverished area? Etc, etc).
@Michell20
I agree with Holt's advice. Your MUN sounds very impressive, and while your experiences volunteering for the orphanage are heartwarming to hear - it doesn't seem to be as impactful as your MUN career.
However, as a fellow student applying to UBC, I empathize with wanting to fill up 2 out of 2 activities. If you truly want to write about the orphanage, I would suggest focusing not just on what you did, but also how your actions directly impacted the children. I would suggest describing why you chose to volunteer with that particular orphanage, and perhaps also mentioning where the donated items would go (Were they donated for the children? Was this orphanage in an impoverished area? Etc, etc).