Undergraduate / "Becoming a knight" - Application Essay for UCF. [9]

yes I agree. Your essay shows information about your career goals, but doesnt emphasize much on the reason why you want to attend this university

Undergraduate / "My parents focused on helping me" - UCF application [11]

Talk about struggles your family and yourself have gone through to be able to accomplish this goal for you, how you have shown how you can do whatever it takes to make it, ect