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Nov 29, 2017
Writing Feedback / Female teachers were dominant in pre-school, primary and secondary school in the UK in 2100 [3]
This is my IELTS task 1 essay and any comments would be appreciated.
TASK 1: BAR GRAPH: The chart shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational setting in the UK in 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided bar graph gives data on the percentage of male and female teachers in six different stages in the UK education system in 2010. As can be seen from the graph, school level observes a huge gender gap in numbers of teachers; however, higher education institutes are more equal in teacher presence.
Female teachers were dominant in pre-school, primary and secondary school. They made up a particularly large portion of more than 90% in pre-school and primary school, while male teachers comprised only 4% and 8% respectively. The figure for secondary school slightly dropped to 54%, compared to 46% of male teachers.
Men and women were more equally represented in higher education level. In college, there were as many male teachers as female counterparts. Around 54% of teachers in private training institute were male, which exceeded 46% of female teachers. Males even outnumbered their female peers in university, where they took up 70% in teacher presence.
P/s: I'm sorry that I couldn't upload image because the site kept telling that my image is too large (1.08 MB) or wrong file type ( I tried .jpg, .jpeg or .png)
This is my IELTS task 1 essay and any comments would be appreciated.
TASK 1: BAR GRAPH: The chart shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational setting in the UK in 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
proportion of men and women at uk school
The provided bar graph gives data on the percentage of male and female teachers in six different stages in the UK education system in 2010. As can be seen from the graph, school level observes a huge gender gap in numbers of teachers; however, higher education institutes are more equal in teacher presence.
Female teachers were dominant in pre-school, primary and secondary school. They made up a particularly large portion of more than 90% in pre-school and primary school, while male teachers comprised only 4% and 8% respectively. The figure for secondary school slightly dropped to 54%, compared to 46% of male teachers.
Men and women were more equally represented in higher education level. In college, there were as many male teachers as female counterparts. Around 54% of teachers in private training institute were male, which exceeded 46% of female teachers. Males even outnumbered their female peers in university, where they took up 70% in teacher presence.
P/s: I'm sorry that I couldn't upload image because the site kept telling that my image is too large (1.08 MB) or wrong file type ( I tried .jpg, .jpeg or .png)
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