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Name: Patricio Guerra
Joined: Jan 30, 2018
Last Post: Feb 1, 2018
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patoguerra   
Jan 30, 2018
Scholarship / NTU SCHOLARSHIP ESSAY, ABOUT MY INSPIRATION MY FAMILY. [3]

MY NTU SCHOLARSHIP ESSAY
HEY PLEASE CAN YOU GIVE ME SOME ADVICE OR ANY SUGGESTIONS???? THANKYOU

free choice topic about something important



Describe, in less than 300 words, a short essay on a subject of personal importance to you. You may choose any topic. Examples include: an event which has influenced you or a family member/friend/person who had a significant influence on you.

My parents have always been the engine of my life and for whom I have tried to give the best. My father works ten hours a day and my mother eight and I suffer every time that money is an imposition of good education. Having quality education is very difficult and expensive in my country. This problem has been the focus of many annoyances in my house, since we do not have enough money with my parents.

That daily effort that they make for those they love, have echoed on me, now I study hard for my father, my mother and my sister. It is for them that I have tried in many ways to have an education with a scholarship, in an institution recognized worldwide, in order to return to my country and help it grow.

Seeing them every day giving the best because of me and my sister has encouraged me to look after me by my own, trying to pay my studies with my effort. That inspiration that I have because of them, has shown me to never give up of any challenge. That's why, winning a scholarship has become my biggest goal. In this way, at the same time that I am studying at one of the best universities in the world, I can help in my house, taking away the weight of an investment in mi studies, like that, even being away from home, I will be in peace, knowing that I am helping my family.

Although I have not been the best, I will always be a hardworking person and I will always be completely proud of what I have achieved in name of my family wherever I go, thanks to all the values of honesty and perseverance, that they have putted on me.
patoguerra   
Jan 30, 2018
Scholarship / MY STUDY PLAN FOR A SCHOLARSHIP AWARD - the peerless University of Botswana [3]

Honestly, it is a really great exposition of your ideas. I think that as they said, you may introduce ideas of an specific contribution you want to do and why can be a Nigerian University the best choice for your course. You can also write about your inspirations and what will you give back to the institute if you obtain the scholarship.
patoguerra   
Jan 30, 2018
Scholarship / NTU SCHOLARSHIP, MY VALUES I Hold Strongly To - plus examples [2]

Scholarship Essay For NTU:
Describe, In Less Than 300 Words, The Values And Beliefs You Hold Strongly To. Please Provide Examples Of How You Have Demonstrated These In Your Actions.

Being honest, perseverant and thankful


The most important thing during life, is being successful hiding nothing. Starting by not cheating during an exam, until accept when we made a mistake and never blame someone else for it. More than an exceptional quality is something that shows a great familiar upbringing and the best thing that you can find in anybody.

Having goals and trying to achieve them is something that takes time and dedication, but there is nothing beautiful than watch them being realized. From studying hard for a test, pass IB physics, to be elected as the student council president. That's why, I always remember a few words that my mom told me, the one who perseveres reaches everything he want.

Helping those that had helped you, is a sign of a high value person. That's why I want to give back to my parents all the effort that they have putted on me, giving them the satisfaction of having a son that studies with a scholarship on one of the best universities in the world and like that, come back to my country in a few years to help it in the process of growing and be an example to all the region.

Thanks to those values, I have achieved many goals. Now I have a new dream, study with a scholarship at the NTU, I know that I can handle that goal and that I have all the necessary things for that, I want to show the world that if you are a hardworking people, you can see your dreams fully realized. I know I haven't been always the best, but I will always be proud of my achievements, because I have done them with love and effort and I will work that way forever, wherever I be.
patoguerra   
Feb 1, 2018
Scholarship / Scholarship Essay writing on my best academic and extracurricular accomplishments [4]

well, personally I think that your intro is a little bit exagerated, because is hard to believe that one of your questios as a child was about gravitational waves, because that topic is commonly introduced during the last years of high school. Try also so write more about extracurricular achievments, such as sports or clubs.
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